Deep Blue Posted May 11, 2016 Share Posted May 11, 2016 A little bit of story that probably nobody cares about: Spoiler So I was making a review of this vn a few months ago, but a review doesn't do justice to this particullar vn. This is a vn one must play to being able to understand how good it is and why is it so good. And so I thought about translating it, the thing is at that time my japanese was so-so and more important I didn't have any hacker to help me out with the code so I started translating it little by little in a txt. A few weeks ago I asked a friend (the same one who helped me with the narcissu patch) and he agreed and here we are xD. https://vndb.org/v4767 Length: 1 and a half hour. Description A lone girl, wearing a tattered school uniform, lives on a dry river bed. She can't go to school, has no house, not even a tent... just a helpless, lonely girl. She searches garbage cans for food to survive every day. And whenever she is found by vagrants or delinquents, she becomes their plaything. Gang-raped, disgraced, forced to drink semen, dirtied, abused, scorned... This is a visual poem about her everyday life. Staff: Translator and some very bad image editing: me. Programming, hacking, images editor and pretty much everything else: Schwarzstorch (he did an amazing job) QC: Arcadeotic, OutoftheBox. Looking for testers! Progress: Translation progress: 100% TLC:100% QC:100%Download link: http://www.mediafire.com/download/60mf78gzb7k37pb/patch.xp3 <-------partial patch 30% (it also works with the trial version)http://www.mediafire.com/download/afc399js0trmsd8/patch.xp3 <-------- final patch. Installation: Place the file inside the game folder, go to text display and choose MS 明朝 or MS ゴシック, you can install other fonts but the text will overlap in some places so I don't recommend doing that. (this is a problem with the engine and how the text works inside the vn itself, there is no way to make every font look properly at the same time.) Q&A: Q:Where can I buy it? A: http://www.dlsite.com/ecchi-eng/work/=/product_id/RE063753 Q:Why a nukige vn? A:It's not nukige. Q:But is full of eroge... A:It's not a nukige! Q:Why this vn? A:Because I love utsuge, it is fairly easy (most of the time) and is pretty short. Q:Your translation sucks! A:That's not an question, but hey you can translate it yourself or help me fixing the many mistakes I'm sure the translation has. Q:So...why a nu... A:For the last time, this is not a nukige!!! It has a lot of eroge, granted, but that's not what this vn is about, it will make you cry, want to pull your eyes out, cry some more and maybe laugh maniacally at some point, it is a pure hard utsuge, depressing to the very end without any fantasy bullshit, not girl with wings, no ghosts or anything like that, I wouldn't say is 100% realistic but pretty close. Q:Why are you translating in a such literal way? A:Because that's my approach to translations, I think the reader should interpret the text without any changes, like if he/she was reading it in the original language, this doesn't always work and when I think it is absolutely impossible to get what the text says I do change it but only in those particular cases, if you have a brain, use it and you will understand the meaning of a sentence even if I don't "Americanize it". Q: Would you look back in a few years thinking "why did I start that translation? is awful D:" A:No, I did this translation first of all for myself and I wanted to share it with everyone else but again this was a project for me, if it is bad or good it doesn't matter to me so if you don't like ti then too bad. I wanted to prove something to myself which now that the novel is finished I think I did and that's that. Images: Spoiler NSFWhttp://imgur.com/SzdEs6z I do take suggestion into account (even if I don't agree with some of themI take them seriously) so feel free to share them I know there is a lot to improve! NOTE: This is a project I'm doing mostly for myself, to see if I can translate something that is not from EN>SP and for the love that I have for this vn, which is really underrated. In the beginning it was fun but right now is becoming more like a chore rather than a fun project but i will finish it. Tay, Styler00Dollar, Arcadeotic and 7 others 10 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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