mitchhamilton

Umm so only one of the characters are actually an older woman, but: https://vndb.org/v2191
It fits well, its not directly rape and the girls start to enjoy it. Multiple scenario endings that are all quite enjoyable.

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2 Rec, good enough for me,
Will play it then  

Oh wow this sounds awesome. 

oh well
this thread is right up my alley anyway

Hmmmm...... since you don't want a VN that involve a hypnosis I'm afraid i can't help you here.
But i will also check out the above mention VN tho

I've been thinking about Amorous Professor Cherry, Tsuki Possession and The Sagara family recently and thought that i really want to read a vn with an older submissive woman/women. where shes says shes against it but once they the character get physical, she drowns in pleasure. a vn that leans more towards nukige. no rape though. untranslated is fine.

If you don't mind untranslated, I'd suggest Kiriya Hakushakuke no Roku Shimai from Atelier Kaguya. It's a bit like an Innocent Grey VN just with a lot more and better ero and the guys are dying instead of the girls. Great atmoshere and soundtrack. There's some rape in bad endings though, but the main routes are fine except one if I remember right. It's the hottest VN I've ever read. Just don't pick Sumi if you want a submissive girl, she's the exact opposite.

https://vndb.org/v16484

An easy way to look at commas is to think they link two independent clauses. This definition usually fits most common cases where you'd normally use a comma in.
For conjunctions:
He was about to kick the ball, but then he saw his teammate trip and break his face on the goal post.
(Note you could technically remove the comma in these cases and just leave the conjunction, but in longer sentences commas are usually preferred, and whenever in doubt, you can always use a comma as that's never incorrect).
For introductory elements:
With his stiff rod, the man tried to fish some tunas
For parenthetical elements:
The boy, known on the internet as xXxPu$$ySlayer69xXx, got 360 no scoped in Call of Duty
(They're called parenthetical because they could technically be written in parenthisis: The boy (known on the internet as xXxPu$$ySlayer69xXx) got no scoped in Call of Duty)
For all the cases where you'd use a comma, this page is pretty useful.

1) Commas are used as a sort of pause in between words in a sentence and can be used when listing three or more things. If you only have two things in the list, you would use and instead of commas. If you have more than two things, it would sound strange if you kept putting the word and in between every one of them.
Example 1: Three of my favorite visual novels are Grisaia no Kajitsu, Princess Evangile and Muv-Luv.
Example 2: The translation was incorrect, so he went over it again to fix it.
2) Commas are used to separate adjectives in some situations and when the adjectives are interchangeable. One way to determine whether or not to use a comma in this situation is to put the word and in between them and if it still makes sense and sounds right, replace it with a comma because it also reduces the amount of words used since you can replace and with a comma in a lot of situations.
Example 1: She is a smart, beautiful woman. 
Example 2: She is a beautiful, smart woman. 
Example 3: She is a smart and beautiful woman. (The word and could be used as a substitute here and still technically be correct but you can shorten the sentence by replacing it with a comma.)
Those are the two main uses of commas but there are plenty of other situations where you can use them. Most of the time, you can tell just by reading the sentence out loud whether or not using a comma is appropriate. Sometimes commas are used even when they don't have to be and either way would be correct. If you are having trouble with commas, just think that they represent a pause in the sentence and serve to make it sound more appropriate. I've never taught anything before in my life so this is the best explanation I could give you, I hope it helps.
One other way to get a grasp on commas are to pickup an English novel or read something online that has correct grammar and you can use them all as examples.
EDIT: I can't believe I forgot to add this but one other important use of a comma is when starting and ending a letter. Note that normally the first sentence in the paragraph is indented but when I press tab it takes me out of the editing window, so lets just pretend it is indented.
Example: 
Dear Fuwanovel,
I love your website!
Sincerely,
Saggz
 

It's something along the lines of:
"Ooh, you've got quite the sharp ears there. Sometimes you need to sense the mood and pretend you didn't hear what ladies mutter."

You mean this figure? That's Illya from Fate/Kaleid Liner Prisma Illya, she's not tanned though.
The tanned loli is a different character who also has a figure that hasn't been released yet.

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kind of question up for interpretation. i think dergonu has the right idea. its about two girls falling in love and only deepening that love. its just a pure love story. nothing more nothing less.

I'm not sure what's confusing you, so I just went ahead and translated it:
「なんか、過ぎてみればあっという間だったかな」
Looking back, it feels like it all happened so quickly. (literally, "now that we've tried going through it")
「そうですね……あっという間、でした」
Yeah... Everything went by so fast.
「でも、これで気ままな一人暮らしに戻れるよ」
But now I (you? I'm assuming every line flips speakers and there's exactly two, but...) can go back to living alone the way I like.
「やはり、病院はお嫌でしたか？」
So you really did hate the hospital?
「綾乃ちゃんがお見舞いに来てくれたおかげで、そうでもなかったかな。病院食も、意外と美味しかったし」
Not that much, I guess, since you came to visit me. (possibly "were always coming" or "kept coming," depending on context.) And the hospital food tasted a lot better than I expected.
「そうですね。最近は、病院の料理もだいぶ美味しくなったと、親戚の集まりで聞いたことがあります」
I see. I did hear at my last family gathering that hospital food has started tasting a lot better as of late.
「そうだね。でも、ちょっと濃いめの味付けが恋しくなってきたところだし、ちょうどいいかも」
Yeah, maybe. But I was just starting to miss food with stronger flavoring, so this might be just the right timing.

i know where the image is from.
 
Attack on Titan. now give me ma points!!

welp. thats another vn added to my list.

No i dont because, even though im confident that ill finish it, its gonna take me a loooong time to do so. ive been thinking about recruiting some help but i just dont wanna be in a position where someone just drops out without telling anyone, or they get half way through until they realize they cant do it and dont give back what they accomplished, etc etc. not sying this will be the case 100% of the time, i just wish to avoid that.

Let's work hard on our respective projects, Mitch

my own tears.

dont listen to fiddle. he/she has no clue what theyre talking about.

got another.
 
really, really, really, really, really, stubborn heroines.
 
im reading a vn right now and the heroine is literally blowing the guy, willingly, and claims to have no feelings for him. its just a reward for something trivial.
 
holding hands? might like the guy
kissing? she likes the guy.
sex? she really likes the guy.
blowing? WHATS THE POINT IN DENYING IT AT THIS POINT!!! 

"Well then, I'll come to visit you again tomorrow, so behave yourself ok?"
Those sentences are really simple, if you struggle with them maybe you should brush up on your grammar a bit or something? And don't use google translate to translate whole sentences, it won't work.

Then yeah, I'd just stick with.
MC: "Got it. Sorry to keep bothering you (with everything) / Sorry to keep bugging you / Thanks for all your help."
Girl: "Awww. Don't mention it."
And then put a translator's note if you're really worried.