RedK

Picked up xD

It does not have any sex scenes in the first chapter, but it has nudity. I plan on writing in a sex scene in the second chapter though. I wasn't quite sure how to go about it in the first one, but have it planned out for the second one.

Congratulation, and good luck for the last half there.

Cogratulations to @RedK

Hello ladies and gentlemen of fuwa! Today I will be sharing with you a little writing project I've been working on. Thanks so much to Forgetful Frank for agreeing to edit the book for me! When I started I was editing it myself, which is slow work and I often miss mistakes in my own writing, and so this way it should be a lot better for everyone involved Also, a big thanks to Melowbee for making the illustration for Kitsune! It's a wonderful confidence boost to actually have someone make drawings for my story!  
 
On to the book:
 
キツネと私 - Kitsune and me
 
Summary:
After spending half a day locked in her clubroom at school, Sakura heads home in the middle of the night, in pouring rain. Taking refuge from the terrible conditions, she stumbles into and old and mysterious shrine. Here she discovers a strange little artifact that she thinks may have been stolen from a museum. Wanting to get it checked out the next day, she brings the artifact home. But as the artifact ends up coming to life in the form of the ditsy, energic and completely stunning Kitsune, Sakura's life will never be the same again...
 
Information on the book:
Kitsune and me is primarily a comedy, focusing on the relationship between the main character Sakura, and her new guardian ... fox-girl, Kitsune Mimiko. When writing it I focus primarily on having fun and silly interactions between the two, and purposely try to use clichés from common visual novel, anime, manga and light novel works. It's a fun little project I recently decided to start working on, and it's not meant to be taken too seriously. The story offers elements of comedy, romance (yuri), fantasy and action. The structure is fairly similar to most VNs, in that it starts of fluffy and is riddled with mainly humor, and then it gets more dramatic towards the end.
 
Also, note that this is written in English, though I use certain words and phrases from Japanese. Again, this isn't meant to be taken too seriously. Words such as bentou will be in the book to keep the essence of the "Japanese setting" and words such as "ne" will be left in Kitsune's sentences, as they are a part of her speech pattern and that doesn't translate as well into English in my opinion. I also keep Japanese titles when I see fit, like using Kitsune's name. For these parts, translations are on the side of the Japanese symbols.
 
DIGITAL PDF DOWNLOAD FOR THE BOOK!
 
A sketch of Kitsune made by Melowbee!

 
Art made by Melowbee, thank you x100!!
Editing is done by Forgetful Frank, thanks so much for that!
Special thanks to Nosebleed for helping me with Kitsune's name!
 
 

Welcome

Hey everyone!
I am glad to announce that @RedK finished translating the Tsugumi route yesterday!
With that we also surpassed the 50% translation mark

Sums up most of the problems I have (am having) with it. 
I'm kind of iffy on the SoL scenes. Some are great, but ultimately I feel like it suffers from there only being like 5 characters in the 2050 portion. 
That and the repetition of some stuff... As much as I enjoy hearing Tamura Yukari scream out KAKUGOOOO, there only needed to be one toy gun fight scene in the school. 

I thought it was boring and it sucked. And I'm not even more than 5 hours into it.

It's not fair to compare PE with Himawari, one is kamige and the other a doujin desu.

https://fuwanovel.net/reviews/2017/01/18/himawari-the-sunflower/
 
So this game was moderately hyped and I personally was really excited for it. I didn't exactly like it as much as a lot of other people, though. For funsies, here's a list of VNs I think are better than this legendary doujin kamige, according to my VNDB ratings:
Princess Evangile Noble ☆ Works Osananajimi wa Daitouryou: My Girlfriend is the President. Maji de Watashi ni Koishinasai! S Deardrops Games I think are exactly as good as Himawari, according to my VNDB ratings:
Edelweiss Duel Savior What great company Himawari keeps.

Alright, everything should be up and running again Let me know if you encounter any problems.
- Atom

Glad you liked it ^^.
PS: Somehow the image on the first page doesn't update :/, but you can check our progress in our website http://kachinkachin.xyz/lover-able-progress/

Our servers will be offline for the next few hours. Some images may not display properly and the downloads won't work  

Narcissu sumire 
I just checked vndb and it seems it's already released x10

It's a game with spectacular presentation, very unfortunate that you weren't able to enjoy it.

Sorry for late posting my impression here. I'd finished the trial and overall I didn't had any problem with the translation (English not my first language here to be honest), so I think you did the job fine imo. For the story, it's quite interesting that MC (Haruki) here was quite interesting taste of humor (I mean will you do NTR roleplaying to ingredients when you cooking? Well, Haruki did). The girl was quite cute and Kaho could be mischieveous there to Haruki (And brocon as well). The voice was fine and quite in seiyuu range. That's all I could write for now.

Note that Angel Beats is being localized to English officially.
I imagine you can get a full toolset from the group that was translating it before the official release was announced, if you ask nicely. Here is the project leader and TL.

Slow down Houdini 

He gave the mother extra time to give birth to her child and the "butterfly" that is more or less the mother's soul, came to thank the reaper for it

I have the same problem with Pale Moon.
It seems that the only plausible solution is to ban Jun Inoue.

Image 1 says: Please insert disk
Image 2: The disk isn't found. 
So either buy the game instead of trying to use a crack version or crack it right. 

A-a new onii-chan! Welcome to the forums. Please treat me nicely!