Zodai Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 Wouldn't a bit of bias be a good thing anyway? I imagine 'spicing things up' would do nothing but improve the story or at least make it funnier Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darklord Rooke Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 THIS SHIT IS ADMIN APPROVED?! Tyrael and Emi 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kurisu-Chan Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 You could still resume the entire story of this thread by. Miyako x 5000 times, and you havea text with 5000 words. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nahichun Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 I would volunteer to work as an historian if there is still a need. With a little help I could summarize the main events and PM them to Zodai. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zodai Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 I would volunteer to work as an historian if there is still a need. With a little help I could summarize the main events and PM them to Zodai. Thank you. According to the clarification I won't be able to write the entirety of the assignment, but at the very least I can get out a minor plot outline to help the others, and maybe run through for some minor continuity editing to ensure everything flows smoothly. This way we should get it done before the deadline without too much of an issue, though I wouldn't say you should get relaxed too quickly. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nahichun Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 Then I will post my findings some time tomorrow with a small assortment of characters, that are in some way mentionworthy + their traits. Maybe it will be inspiring to someone. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zodai Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 Some information on Ourai might be good as well. He seems to be important and I'm trying to decipher what kind of a role he might play. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B0X0R Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 The one that I started is not as on point as the new one. How about this, Keep working on the new one (the one that's more on point) and once you get to the end, we just add the old version to the end. That way we have an actual retelling of the history along with a silly over the top ending. For the historical part, go here. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mtNwNd0ueQ5IKnCSSFDQlLYYOHNDXJRICauboDHQCck/edit For the balls to the wall epic ending go here https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-BeJwHYLXHulmsIMym91dkXzgDDOKPfv8xHXliQakdU/edit?usp=docslist_api Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nahichun Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 I can give a basic overview of Ourai now, if you'd like. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr Poltroon Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 Please note Ourai is here for the show. Oh, and so am I. Please go on. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zodai Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 I can give a basic overview of Ourai now, if you'd like. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zodai Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 The one that I started is not as on point as the new one. How about this, Keep working on the new one (the one that's more on point) and once you get to the end, we just add the old version to the end. That way we have an actual retelling of the history along with a silly over the top ending. For the historical part, go here.https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mtNwNd0ueQ5IKnCSSFDQlLYYOHNDXJRICauboDHQCck/edit For the balls to the wall epic ending go herehttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1-BeJwHYLXHulmsIMym91dkXzgDDOKPfv8xHXliQakdU/edit?usp=docslist_api Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B0X0R Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 Not...'entirely' sure how I feel about that, as such a tone shift doesn't feel right to my writer's senses. I still say we adapt the existing history to the full-on fantasy to the best of our abilities. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zodai Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 Do as you feel is just. You've been here longer then I have so I have complete trust in you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zodai Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 Actually, I think my main writing tank has been exhausted for the day. A good 1.5k words today, but my tank doesn't run for as long as I'd like it to sadly. I'll finish up the fight scene tomorrow, and when we get a good summarized history I'll try and work on a plot outline for the others. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyrael Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 Ah, good thing there are so many people around who know the history of this thread I wouldn't be able to contribute myself, sadly Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zodai Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 Ah, good thing there are so many people around who know the history of this thread I wouldn't be able to contribute myself, sadly The writing soul calls to me. I couldn't really walk away if I had a choice Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kurisu-Chan Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 You need a tank? i have panzers! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nahichun Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 I'll just quickly dump some of my findings. They are still relatively incomplete, but I am tired... pg 304 family bonding pg 305 Ourai leaves the thread pg 330-333 epic dance off pg 334 return of Ourai pg 402 Ourais anus gets plunged (also butt talking) ~pg 405 Tiago enters the stage pg 417 Arrival of the messenger of doom (Kendjin) pg 434 Holy Australian World war against the emu threat pg 435 Nahichun and Ourai as the great flamefuckers (< would this be considered narcisstic?) pg 503 attack by DokiDoki and basuquero using his male charms to counterattack pg 509 infamous spoiler traps and tiago & ourai bickering like a married couple pg 512 thread gets closed?!?! pg 515 it doesn't (it never will) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zodai Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 I feel like...the focus is set in the wrong places. It's a lot more broad then I was asking for. For example, let's take DBZ as an example. I'm hoping for something simple in terms of an outline, such as maybe 'Saiyan Saga - Goku beats Vegeta. He's another monkey-alien like Goku, and Vegeta's whining because he's a price.' Or maybe 'Cell Saga - Evil time-traveling insect named Cell tries to destroy earth. Goku fights him, Goku dies, Gohan kills him.' In comparison, you've given me something along the lines of, say... 'Saiyan Saga - Raditz comes. He has a lot of hair. He reminds me of a Radish.' and never gets into the emotion or general conflict behind the scene/arc. It doesn't have to be very in-detail, but it just has to outline the most important parts in as briefly as possible while still staying coherent. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kurisu-Chan Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 Well, if you wanna create a crazy fucked up plot for the UCW history, you can count on me, i have unlimited imagination works. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouraibaa Hjyuraa Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 Please don't count on Risu. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zodai Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 Well, if you wanna create a crazy fucked up plot for the UCW history, you can count on me, i have unlimited imagination works. Right now I don't think it'll be crazy/fucked up, but it should at least be fair enough. Best-case scenario we get something faithful to the thread history yet that still allows the other writers to put their own spins on it. Just need more data... Also, I don't know who Risu is. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kurisu-Chan Posted January 6, 2015 Share Posted January 6, 2015 It's me...and a new nickname... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brawlbankai Posted January 6, 2015 Share Posted January 6, 2015 I'd really like to help out, but I have no idea what to do. I've only been here a short time so I don't know anything about its history really. I've only been active since it became the random thread after all. Let me know if there's anything I can do to help. I can only spare a few hours a day, but I'll do what I can. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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