Dergonu

I don't usually play kinetic VNs but this, this is an exeption. I don't know how the writer could make a story that's funny and far from boring, but actually really deep. I played it two times to actually understand the serious parts. It made me think about life, lies, people, everthing. And at the same time it made me laugh out loud many times. When I first finished the story I couldn't find the One Hidden Truth part, therefore I was a bit dissappointed. I thought that the writer wasn't very good with endings, just like Ciar. After my second play, I discovered it randomly and, let's say, there were a lot of tears.  
Anyway, I think it was a truly perfect and unique story. Thanks to the writer for doing this.

Nice progress so far! Good luck on your exams!

I definitely know the feeling of exams taking away from your porn games. 

Great work as always. I feel you with the exams, I have a very important set of exams that decide if I enter my career of choice in a couple of weeks.
Anyways, it's always good seeing progress of a project. Keep up the good work. 

Yay for progress. No yay for exams  but they're important so it's understandable that you'd halt your translation even if a bit for them.
Great work senpai and hope you're feeling well about getting back to it and that you can remain fired up about it as you are now.
Best of luck for what remains of the project aswell. 

Hey even if it's 1 line in 1 week it's faster than me  
Also it's normal to give the priority to your exam don't worry
Plus, taking a break from the tl may be good since once you'll come back you will probably notice some new tl error you failed to see before 
Anyway good luck for your exam and keep up the good work 

Well your shikai is too overpowered anyways, so maybe it was for the better. Everyone else would have lost instantly 

Great story. I enjoyed it a lot. I'm sad because I could've taken part in it joining a team when the opportunity arised, but I wasn't posting back then.
Anyways, keep being great as always Derg. 

GG WP.
The ending is a bit rushed imo, because I have been used to reading long and dramatic ones.
But still, the story is nice overall, it made me see another light in you, senpai. \  /
Very well done, and good job.

The epilogue left the greatest impression
A tad bit rushed, but your writing has developed splendidly
You can be proud of this series, as an achievement
Good job

God damnit, why couldn't I live just a little longer... :c
While others are complaining about how different these characters are from their real life counterparts, I'd complain this is too close to reality for me. I'm always within arms reach of victory, yet it always slips at the last second. FeelsBadMan
But rip that, let's hope hope Kaguya at least gets some Karma payback w

If I don't win, this is rigged. 

Valmore and Deep Blue - awww, thanks for jumping in defending my weak ass. Unfortunately it was in vain.
We sure took a beating. You will be mourned. @Valmore @Deep Blue @Satsuki
 
  As am I.  Your close combat skills with my range is a fine mix.
 
Derg, the extra day of writing time shows the difference. Keep it up!

Now the only ones who haven't fought are the GM's aaand ....... Me 
Yep this definitely means that I'm gonna come with full on OPness spreading Chaos everywhere.
All the dark rituals (watching animu) that I've been doing all this while shall finally bear fruit.

and im dead 

I call foul. The GM is using his own player character. If there was a table here, it would be flipped and you'd all be covered in Diet Mountain Dew. 

...

Well, shit. Looking forward to working with you, Kingdomcome
Nice chapter as always, Derg

Someday, someday I'll appear! Beware!

Your writing is getting better, keep at it!

I didnt mean to promote torrents or anything but I ended up sounding like that, sorry for that. Still people buying old vns should be careful about that issue.

Thank you so much for doing this. I don't pirate VNs, and haven't spent the time figuring out any of the websites for buying downloadable copies, so I've been stuck importing physical releases of everything unlicensed that I want to play, which is less than ideal... This is really helpful to me personally, and probably to many others as well.

Well, both the members in Team Down I was rooting for died in this chapter sooooo.... Go Team Kaguya!
Y'know, this is a lot more intense if you play some battle music in the background.
Awesome writing as always, keep up the good work!

Seems like your writing is getting better, senpai.
Yay for me, for surviving this week's brutal battle.
 

This is the most hurt I've felt in the last five minutes.