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I drank some water and then some dripped out of my mouth.
 

"I'll let Fuwanovel decide."
You... You fool...

Too bad the protagonist doesn't talk, if I remember it correctly. I can totally nail a clueless Keanu Reeves "Whoa" and that would be all they need for the dumbass protagonist of that story.

Confession: even though I'm American, I kinda like soccer, and secretly long to be a soccer snob. But I want to be an extreme soccer snob and follow a league nobody else in America probably even cares about. It's too easy to follow the Brits or Spaniards. So naturally, I have an app that gives scores for Veikkausliiga installed on my smartphone. Now I need to pick a team and try to get a jersey and become instant super snob.

Here are the three essential truths of dating life:
The hot waitress is never into you. You might think she is, but she isn't. The hot best friend will never date you. Because she has horrible taste in guys, and will proceed to tell you about this at great length. The hot girl at yoga class is never single. Because she is hot. And she does yoga.
 

You know, it's a myth that librarians are all sexually repressed and just waiting for the right guy to get them to let their hair down, take off their glasses and loosen the buttons on their blouse, with a slight flush in their cheeks signalling both arousal and embarrassment that would cause even the most stoic of gentlemen to choke up a bit audibly while their eyes go wide amidst thoughts of freeing the ample bosoms from the constrictive prisons of standard 18-hour bras that, in the moment, are more sexy than anything Victoria's Secret could offer...  

Confession: Today, I found a packet of tissue in my desk. I don't remember putting it there at all. So I asked the girl who is sitting behind me if she put it there. The thing is I had really bad rhinitis these days and that's why I bought lot of tissue packs for myself. But...! I never ever bought this brand. And every time (in the past) I asked if the mentioned-girl had tissue because my nose was running a lot, she gave me the pack that was same brand. Although she denied putting it there, I still suspect her. 

6/10
Your description was fine but you should build up the tension more slowly

You know, it's a myth that librarians are all sexually repressed and just waiting for the right guy to get them to let their hair down, take off their glasses and loosen the buttons on their blouse, with a slight flush in their cheeks signalling both arousal and embarrassment that would cause even the most stoic of gentlemen to choke up a bit audibly while their eyes go wide amidst thoughts of freeing the ample bosoms from the constrictive prisons of standard 18-hour bras that, in the moment, are more sexy than anything Victoria's Secret could offer...  

You know, it's a myth that librarians are all sexually repressed and just waiting for the right guy to get them to let their hair down, take off their glasses and loosen the buttons on their blouse, with a slight flush in their cheeks signalling both arousal and embarrassment that would cause even the most stoic of gentlemen to choke up a bit audibly while their eyes go wide amidst thoughts of freeing the ample bosoms from the constrictive prisons of standard 18-hour bras that, in the moment, are more sexy than anything Victoria's Secret could offer...  

I don't think my falsetto would turn any guy on, though I could be wrong.
HEY HOT CHICK, HERE'S A SLIM JIM TO SNAP INTO BEFORE I BUST OUT MY THICK JIM INTO YOU! OOOOOH YEEEEEAH!

If it had sex, I'm guessing it would be Queen Opala's quality haha.
Man, I would love a Macho Man kind of voice-over for the male MC in a VN. That would be hilarious.

Confession: even though I'm American, I kinda like soccer, and secretly long to be a soccer snob. But I want to be an extreme soccer snob and follow a league nobody else in America probably even cares about. It's too easy to follow the Brits or Spaniards. So naturally, I have an app that gives scores for Veikkausliiga installed on my smartphone. Now I need to pick a team and try to get a jersey and become instant super snob.

It's football, fuck dammit!

Confession: even though I'm American, I kinda like soccer, and secretly long to be a soccer snob. But I want to be an extreme soccer snob and follow a league nobody else in America probably even cares about. It's too easy to follow the Brits or Spaniards. So naturally, I have an app that gives scores for Veikkausliiga installed on my smartphone. Now I need to pick a team and try to get a jersey and become instant super snob.

Hopefully it'll light your fire.

I know the truth... it will frighten you and change your perspective of the Heaven's Feel...

Too bad the protagonist doesn't talk, if I remember it correctly. I can totally nail a clueless Keanu Reeves "Whoa" and that would be all they need for the dumbass protagonist of that story.

At least you have some kind of interaction with girls ;__; It would be nice to talk to 3D girls. Even 2D imagination waifu men need it sometimes.

Everyone knows the christmas season officially begins two and a half years before christmas day.  This is normal!

Photic Sneeze Reflex. For some reason, some people (like me and Kiriririri) have a sneezing fit that triggers when we step into bright sunlight.

Here's a third for you:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-rNpeBAjAiI

It means that we should only stay inside playing porn games ; )

Confession: Same as me then : )