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    Diamon got a reaction from Loco15 in Lucid9 (available for free on Steam)   
    Hello everyone! After nearly a month, I believed it would be good to give some news about the project^^
     
    So :
    - First, the main page was updated with the new character profiles (+ some extras). The presentation style is different than what we had before and more generally the rest of the thread, it kinda hints at what type of UI we are planning to have for the game (You won't likely find that in the next demo though).
     
    - Second, project is still running well. I have to say plenty of assets have been created over winter break (I won't be putting everything on the thread though of course, because I don't want to spoil people! ). Writing word count so far is around 140k words which is quite an achievement in itself! The writing for the next demo is nearly ready (part of it still has to go through some editing), it is supposed to have around 80k words, but it might change depending on some factors. To compare, the current day 1 demo has ~7k words.
     
    - Concerning art, most of the sprites are ready (except a few ones that are being worked on). All heroines have now 2 poses! (Yay! ). It is not very likely that we'll find the time to create more than one or two CG for the next demo. I really wanted to have one intro CG for each heroine, but I guess it will have to wait for later x)
    Backgrounds are a tedious things to work on (especially since we decided to change BG style, we ended up having to redo all the previous backgrounds), but they are looking really awesome thanks to Yuuko, here, take a sneak peek
     

    We are still looking for people to help with backgrounds by the way, you don't have to be an artist for that (even though some experience in drawing might help), we just need people with decent-good photoshop skills! (More info on this thread : https://forums.fuwanovel.net/index.php?/topic/7998-recruiting-for-the-lucid9-project/)
     
    - Music is ready as well, except for two tracks that are being worked on.
     
    - Main menu, logo and GUI are being overhauled. Even though probably none of them will be final (=used for the final release), it should be more representing of the general theme of Lucid9, and (hopefully) prettier! 
     
     
    So as you can see, we're getting close to a new demo release. However, I haven't announced anything yet, and there's a reason for that. It's mainly that Greg, our programmer has personal issues (life happens, it sometimes can't be helped), and it forced us to delay the release date of the 2nd demo since we believe the engine is still not good enough from a reader's perspective. (Basically, you'd play under the same conditions of the current demo, with very minimalist options, and since the duration of the 2nd demo will probably be much longer, it would be very uncomfortable to play the demo). I'm deeply sorry for those who might be awaiting the next demo impatiently, I will have to ask them to wait a little more! While we are waiting for our programmer's situation to improve enough so he can resume working with us, we are also working on alternatives for the worst case scenario (aka if he has to definitely leave the project), so rest assured, a second demo will be released eventually, that I can promise!
     
    Finally, I have some questions for the people reading this post and interested in the project.
    1. Do you believe the description of the synopsis is fine? Would you like it to be more detailed?
    2. For those who might have visited the blog, or for those who frequent it regularly, what kind of blog posts would you like to see?
    3. Do you want the Lucid9 project to be more "interactive" with the Fuwanovel community (AMA, polls, events, backstage secrets revealed...)? If you'd like to see a specific type of event created by us on Fuwanovel, don't hesitate to say so!
    4. Besides update posts, what kind of posts would you like to read in this thread?
    5. Would you be interested in having us trying to take Fuwanovel's people opinion concerning ideas we had, have, or might have considering the development of Lucid9? (Doesn't mean it will necessarily be about writing and plot) Keep in mind that even though I'm asking that, it doesn't mean that it will happen for sure in the future.
     
    Thanks in advance for the people willing to take some time answering those questions! And thanks for all the people supporting us with messages in this thread! It really, really means a lot for us.
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    Diamon got a reaction from LinovaA in Lucid9 (available for free on Steam)   
    Hello everyone! After nearly a month, I believed it would be good to give some news about the project^^
     
    So :
    - First, the main page was updated with the new character profiles (+ some extras). The presentation style is different than what we had before and more generally the rest of the thread, it kinda hints at what type of UI we are planning to have for the game (You won't likely find that in the next demo though).
     
    - Second, project is still running well. I have to say plenty of assets have been created over winter break (I won't be putting everything on the thread though of course, because I don't want to spoil people! ). Writing word count so far is around 140k words which is quite an achievement in itself! The writing for the next demo is nearly ready (part of it still has to go through some editing), it is supposed to have around 80k words, but it might change depending on some factors. To compare, the current day 1 demo has ~7k words.
     
    - Concerning art, most of the sprites are ready (except a few ones that are being worked on). All heroines have now 2 poses! (Yay! ). It is not very likely that we'll find the time to create more than one or two CG for the next demo. I really wanted to have one intro CG for each heroine, but I guess it will have to wait for later x)
    Backgrounds are a tedious things to work on (especially since we decided to change BG style, we ended up having to redo all the previous backgrounds), but they are looking really awesome thanks to Yuuko, here, take a sneak peek
     

    We are still looking for people to help with backgrounds by the way, you don't have to be an artist for that (even though some experience in drawing might help), we just need people with decent-good photoshop skills! (More info on this thread : https://forums.fuwanovel.net/index.php?/topic/7998-recruiting-for-the-lucid9-project/)
     
    - Music is ready as well, except for two tracks that are being worked on.
     
    - Main menu, logo and GUI are being overhauled. Even though probably none of them will be final (=used for the final release), it should be more representing of the general theme of Lucid9, and (hopefully) prettier! 
     
     
    So as you can see, we're getting close to a new demo release. However, I haven't announced anything yet, and there's a reason for that. It's mainly that Greg, our programmer has personal issues (life happens, it sometimes can't be helped), and it forced us to delay the release date of the 2nd demo since we believe the engine is still not good enough from a reader's perspective. (Basically, you'd play under the same conditions of the current demo, with very minimalist options, and since the duration of the 2nd demo will probably be much longer, it would be very uncomfortable to play the demo). I'm deeply sorry for those who might be awaiting the next demo impatiently, I will have to ask them to wait a little more! While we are waiting for our programmer's situation to improve enough so he can resume working with us, we are also working on alternatives for the worst case scenario (aka if he has to definitely leave the project), so rest assured, a second demo will be released eventually, that I can promise!
     
    Finally, I have some questions for the people reading this post and interested in the project.
    1. Do you believe the description of the synopsis is fine? Would you like it to be more detailed?
    2. For those who might have visited the blog, or for those who frequent it regularly, what kind of blog posts would you like to see?
    3. Do you want the Lucid9 project to be more "interactive" with the Fuwanovel community (AMA, polls, events, backstage secrets revealed...)? If you'd like to see a specific type of event created by us on Fuwanovel, don't hesitate to say so!
    4. Besides update posts, what kind of posts would you like to read in this thread?
    5. Would you be interested in having us trying to take Fuwanovel's people opinion concerning ideas we had, have, or might have considering the development of Lucid9? (Doesn't mean it will necessarily be about writing and plot) Keep in mind that even though I'm asking that, it doesn't mean that it will happen for sure in the future.
     
    Thanks in advance for the people willing to take some time answering those questions! And thanks for all the people supporting us with messages in this thread! It really, really means a lot for us.
  3. Like
    Diamon got a reaction from Roach in Lucid9 (available for free on Steam)   
    Hello everyone! After nearly a month, I believed it would be good to give some news about the project^^
     
    So :
    - First, the main page was updated with the new character profiles (+ some extras). The presentation style is different than what we had before and more generally the rest of the thread, it kinda hints at what type of UI we are planning to have for the game (You won't likely find that in the next demo though).
     
    - Second, project is still running well. I have to say plenty of assets have been created over winter break (I won't be putting everything on the thread though of course, because I don't want to spoil people! ). Writing word count so far is around 140k words which is quite an achievement in itself! The writing for the next demo is nearly ready (part of it still has to go through some editing), it is supposed to have around 80k words, but it might change depending on some factors. To compare, the current day 1 demo has ~7k words.
     
    - Concerning art, most of the sprites are ready (except a few ones that are being worked on). All heroines have now 2 poses! (Yay! ). It is not very likely that we'll find the time to create more than one or two CG for the next demo. I really wanted to have one intro CG for each heroine, but I guess it will have to wait for later x)
    Backgrounds are a tedious things to work on (especially since we decided to change BG style, we ended up having to redo all the previous backgrounds), but they are looking really awesome thanks to Yuuko, here, take a sneak peek
     

    We are still looking for people to help with backgrounds by the way, you don't have to be an artist for that (even though some experience in drawing might help), we just need people with decent-good photoshop skills! (More info on this thread : https://forums.fuwanovel.net/index.php?/topic/7998-recruiting-for-the-lucid9-project/)
     
    - Music is ready as well, except for two tracks that are being worked on.
     
    - Main menu, logo and GUI are being overhauled. Even though probably none of them will be final (=used for the final release), it should be more representing of the general theme of Lucid9, and (hopefully) prettier! 
     
     
    So as you can see, we're getting close to a new demo release. However, I haven't announced anything yet, and there's a reason for that. It's mainly that Greg, our programmer has personal issues (life happens, it sometimes can't be helped), and it forced us to delay the release date of the 2nd demo since we believe the engine is still not good enough from a reader's perspective. (Basically, you'd play under the same conditions of the current demo, with very minimalist options, and since the duration of the 2nd demo will probably be much longer, it would be very uncomfortable to play the demo). I'm deeply sorry for those who might be awaiting the next demo impatiently, I will have to ask them to wait a little more! While we are waiting for our programmer's situation to improve enough so he can resume working with us, we are also working on alternatives for the worst case scenario (aka if he has to definitely leave the project), so rest assured, a second demo will be released eventually, that I can promise!
     
    Finally, I have some questions for the people reading this post and interested in the project.
    1. Do you believe the description of the synopsis is fine? Would you like it to be more detailed?
    2. For those who might have visited the blog, or for those who frequent it regularly, what kind of blog posts would you like to see?
    3. Do you want the Lucid9 project to be more "interactive" with the Fuwanovel community (AMA, polls, events, backstage secrets revealed...)? If you'd like to see a specific type of event created by us on Fuwanovel, don't hesitate to say so!
    4. Besides update posts, what kind of posts would you like to read in this thread?
    5. Would you be interested in having us trying to take Fuwanovel's people opinion concerning ideas we had, have, or might have considering the development of Lucid9? (Doesn't mean it will necessarily be about writing and plot) Keep in mind that even though I'm asking that, it doesn't mean that it will happen for sure in the future.
     
    Thanks in advance for the people willing to take some time answering those questions! And thanks for all the people supporting us with messages in this thread! It really, really means a lot for us.
  4. Like
    Diamon got a reaction from Mr Poltroon in Lucid9 (available for free on Steam)   
    Hello everyone! After nearly a month, I believed it would be good to give some news about the project^^
     
    So :
    - First, the main page was updated with the new character profiles (+ some extras). The presentation style is different than what we had before and more generally the rest of the thread, it kinda hints at what type of UI we are planning to have for the game (You won't likely find that in the next demo though).
     
    - Second, project is still running well. I have to say plenty of assets have been created over winter break (I won't be putting everything on the thread though of course, because I don't want to spoil people! ). Writing word count so far is around 140k words which is quite an achievement in itself! The writing for the next demo is nearly ready (part of it still has to go through some editing), it is supposed to have around 80k words, but it might change depending on some factors. To compare, the current day 1 demo has ~7k words.
     
    - Concerning art, most of the sprites are ready (except a few ones that are being worked on). All heroines have now 2 poses! (Yay! ). It is not very likely that we'll find the time to create more than one or two CG for the next demo. I really wanted to have one intro CG for each heroine, but I guess it will have to wait for later x)
    Backgrounds are a tedious things to work on (especially since we decided to change BG style, we ended up having to redo all the previous backgrounds), but they are looking really awesome thanks to Yuuko, here, take a sneak peek
     

    We are still looking for people to help with backgrounds by the way, you don't have to be an artist for that (even though some experience in drawing might help), we just need people with decent-good photoshop skills! (More info on this thread : https://forums.fuwanovel.net/index.php?/topic/7998-recruiting-for-the-lucid9-project/)
     
    - Music is ready as well, except for two tracks that are being worked on.
     
    - Main menu, logo and GUI are being overhauled. Even though probably none of them will be final (=used for the final release), it should be more representing of the general theme of Lucid9, and (hopefully) prettier! 
     
     
    So as you can see, we're getting close to a new demo release. However, I haven't announced anything yet, and there's a reason for that. It's mainly that Greg, our programmer has personal issues (life happens, it sometimes can't be helped), and it forced us to delay the release date of the 2nd demo since we believe the engine is still not good enough from a reader's perspective. (Basically, you'd play under the same conditions of the current demo, with very minimalist options, and since the duration of the 2nd demo will probably be much longer, it would be very uncomfortable to play the demo). I'm deeply sorry for those who might be awaiting the next demo impatiently, I will have to ask them to wait a little more! While we are waiting for our programmer's situation to improve enough so he can resume working with us, we are also working on alternatives for the worst case scenario (aka if he has to definitely leave the project), so rest assured, a second demo will be released eventually, that I can promise!
     
    Finally, I have some questions for the people reading this post and interested in the project.
    1. Do you believe the description of the synopsis is fine? Would you like it to be more detailed?
    2. For those who might have visited the blog, or for those who frequent it regularly, what kind of blog posts would you like to see?
    3. Do you want the Lucid9 project to be more "interactive" with the Fuwanovel community (AMA, polls, events, backstage secrets revealed...)? If you'd like to see a specific type of event created by us on Fuwanovel, don't hesitate to say so!
    4. Besides update posts, what kind of posts would you like to read in this thread?
    5. Would you be interested in having us trying to take Fuwanovel's people opinion concerning ideas we had, have, or might have considering the development of Lucid9? (Doesn't mean it will necessarily be about writing and plot) Keep in mind that even though I'm asking that, it doesn't mean that it will happen for sure in the future.
     
    Thanks in advance for the people willing to take some time answering those questions! And thanks for all the people supporting us with messages in this thread! It really, really means a lot for us.
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    Diamon reacted to Darklord Rooke in Visual Novel test, are useless or not?   
    There are many different reasons. One of which is that some people take a lot of pride in their work, so even if they ARE doing it for free they want it to be of decent quality. 
     
    I should probably use an example. Many months ago I was head editor for a certain project and I made the test for editing positions VERY hard. Most people who rock up to apply for an editor's position are really trying to become a proof-reader, and I immediately dismissed all of them. When the leader of the group would hire editors indiscriminately I would get annoyed. In the 3 months I spent looking for other editors I found 1 other person I was happy with, and he was damn good. 
     
    The reason for this is I'm passionate about writing and the English language. REALLY passionate. I've spent the last 10 years studying how authors write and how they build their style, and I don't like reading prose that is... dodgy. So... I wouldn't be able to work on a project unless it maintained a certain standard, it would just be disappointing and I wouldn't be able to stand it. Because of this I put in place high standards for the editing team that I KNOW pissed off people.
     
    There's another reason and that is reputation. If translators are looking to build a career in the future, I'm sure they wouldn't want people bringing down the quality of their project and affecting their reputation. The same applied to me as well. As a person who's looking to build a career in writing, and maybe VN development, I wouldn't want people bringing (way) down the quality of edits on a project I'm working on.
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    Diamon reacted to MoonStar in Tears of Yggdrasil Patreon launch   
    Tears Yggdrasil Windows 1.0
     
     
     
    Description
     
    Our story revolves around our protagonist Yamakazi Kusanagi, an ordinary boy whose life was dramatically altered upon waking up in Alfheim, the land of elves, after a colossal Earthquake.
    Upon arriving in this magical land, our protagonist strives to find out if there are any connections between a phenomenon in Alfheim known as the universal tremor and the earthquakes back home while attempting to stay alive and discover who is trying to assassinate the princess of Alfheim and usurp the throne.
    Or perhaps, he has intimate connections with the very mysteries of the world itself...
     
    Features
     
    Tears of Yggdrasil is a fantasy themed, slice of life Visual Novel with a some elements of dating-sim and of course some echi and fanservice. It is fully voiced and extensively interactive!
    Each path you take will get you to a unique ending.– A unique story with unique plot.

    1. Full Voice Acting
    2. Original Soundtrack
    3. High Quality Artwork
    4. Full HD 1080p
    5. Fluid Gameplay
    7. Every Choice you make has impact on the story
    8. Multiple Unique Endings
    9. Music Gallery
    10. CG Gallery
    11. Scene Gallery( aka scene replay gallery)
     
    Artwork
     


     






    Characters
     
    Yamakazi Kusanagi
     

     
     
    While he's a lazy ass pervert who dreams of having a harem of girls at his feet, Kusanagi has a surprisingly kind hearted side. When he sees someone in trouble, he feels compelled to help them whether they be a family member, close friend or even a stranger.
     
    He started practicing jujutsu(an old kind of martial art) and kendo together with his childhood friend Kogara Sachi at the age of five, but stopped after breaking a bully's arm in a fit of rage.
     
    Besides his fruitless dreams of having his own harem, all he wants to do is become a NEET/hikikomori. It is not to be though, as Sachi has made a habit of waking him up and dragging him off to school whether he likes it or not.
     
    Kusanagi can be a charming, intelligent man when he has to, and knows how to carry himself in a fight whether it be fought with the sword, shinai, or his fists alone.
     
    Kogara Sachi
     

     
    Sachi is Kusanagi’s childhood friend since she was five, when Kusanagi saved her from a pack of stray dogs (which she believed to be wolves.) From then, she has helped him with everything from preparing his daily meals to helping him study. They both started martial arts around the same age, a sport that fostered their friendship and rivalry.  
    Alvaerele Ikeshia
     

     
     
    Ikeshia the elven princess of Alfheim, who after the death of her brother she was declared the next heir to the throne by her father. She is very cold in nature and trusts no one else other than her father and her maid Elisven.  
    Elisven
     

     
     
    Elisven is a maid at the elven palace (and Princess Ikeshia’s personal and most trusted maid, despite being somewhat awkward.) Due to her more darker skin tone, she has always been seen as a spy of the dark elves; thus, she has always been bullied and persecuted while growing up. Even now, after many years in service to Princess, she is often threatened and sometimes beaten by prejudiced individuals who still believes she’s only a spy. She is extremely loyal and feels indebted to the princess for seeing what she truly is beyond her physical appearance.  
    Tears of Yggdrasil Staff
    Main Staff:
    MoonStar and Mafuda
     
    Artists:
    Character Design: pinguin-kotak
    Backgrounds: Uncle Mugen and Aswaforce.
    CG: Artemisumi
    Logo: LucaMadison
    GUI: Aleema
     
    Writers:
    Writer: MoonStar
    Voice Actors Scripter: Marisa Lenti and MoonStar.
     
    Music:
    Composer: Florenz Dominic Sison and N.H.C
     
    Voice Cast:
    Yamakazi Kusanagi: Matthew Curtis ( En-Vision America; The Adventures of Lord Dinby, Duke of Space!; Conquest of Champions; LEGO Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix.)
    Kogara Sachi: Helen Ni
    Alvaerele Ikeshia: Marisa Lenti (Hasbro/Playdate Digital: My Little Pony: Twilight's Kingdom App: Princess Celestia & Cadance; ScrewAttack: DEATH BATTLE!: Noin; MirageV: Sacred Earth: Promise: Relima; A Wolf's Tale: Lina; The Mouth: Dragon , Libra & Eclipse Libra Fairy Tail(Funimation dub))
    Elisven: Adoxographist
     
    Please feel free to provide any feedback you may have!
    What im looking for so far is feedback critic preferably honest cruel and honest opinions with arguments why you think that.

    http://strawpoll.me/3069411
    https://www.surveymonkey.com/s/BZVH3GY

    Follow the development of the story here :yggdrasil.vnovel.com/
    Also Like; Rate and Follow us on Indie DB: www.indiedb.com/games/TOY
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    Patreon
     
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    Diamon reacted to Mr Poltroon in Violet Hill (DEMO released)   
    Too many images 0/10
    Not enough violet(a) 0/10
    Can't use F3 0/10
    My mobile (potato) phone can't handle it 0/10
     
    Overall 9/10 OP post.
     
    And yes. I've, in the meanwhile, finished the demo and enjoyed it thoroughly. I'll probably write up something more detailed later, maybe. Hopefully.
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    Diamon reacted to Helvetica Standard in Violet Hill (DEMO released)   
    Update: Main post has been updated! There's a little surprise there for you guys.
    We're looking forward to your continued feedback!
     
    Warm regards from Red Lattice Studio
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    Diamon reacted to Helvetica Standard in Violet Hill (DEMO released)   
    DEMO V4.5  (Trimmed prologue, a few minor changes) DOWNLOAD BELOW
     

    DON'T FORGET TO CHECK OUR WEBSITE FOR REAL-TIME UPDATES AND EXTRA CONTENT!
     

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    Diamon got a reaction from Silvz in VN with a lot of routes and options?   
    I think Little Busters has a lot of choices, but except for choosing the routes, they aren't really important to the story...
    What would be the closest to what you're seeking would be Fate/Stay night, as there are a lot of choices in the VN that all matters (a good chunk of them being life or death matters), but unfortunately there aren't many routes, which is compensated by the fact the routes  in fate are really long (I am not taking into account the 30 different bad endings, some of them are very short though)
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    Diamon got a reaction from DarkSin in Community Based VN Proposal   
    I've been wanting to say it for a while now, but why do you actually always feel the need to show your worth by belittling literally the whole EVN scene? I mean, of course you can boast about how your art looks nice, because it does, but at the same time if you're really confident in the quality of the art, can't you just say so without insulting every OELVN artist at the same time? What's more, taste in art is a very subjective topic. You say that japanese artists have a better approach of anatomy : Surely you've read KEY works right? Not sure I can say that the body proportions are "professionals" (I mean, dem eyes that take half of the face...), even though I do love Key art style. Believe it or not, Western people (and not necessarily us, since we are people who are accustomed to japanese animation) might actually prefer games where girls actually don't seem to all have breast implants, or have ridiculous body proportion that I doubt it's actually possible to attain in reality, or faces where the nose is nearly non existent and where eyes take half of the space?
     
    I just find it really rude, especially since you're partially also criticizing people that, them at least, managed to release a completed project.
     
    Also, from time to time, some humility wouldn't hurt. Hopefully you know this word if you're a writer. Maybe instead of going "I shall bestow upon thee the privilege of participating to what will become the most awesome project that you'll ever see!" , something like "I'd like to have some help brainstorming potential idea for the scenario!" would be a good change of pace. Well, I might be asking too much I guess.
     
    Anyway, still, best of luck on your future endeavors. Hopefully this time you'll manage to reach the kickstarter phase.
     
    I saw what you did there...
  12. Like
    Diamon got a reaction from Miulei in VN with a lot of routes and options?   
    I think Little Busters has a lot of choices, but except for choosing the routes, they aren't really important to the story...
    What would be the closest to what you're seeking would be Fate/Stay night, as there are a lot of choices in the VN that all matters (a good chunk of them being life or death matters), but unfortunately there aren't many routes, which is compensated by the fact the routes  in fate are really long (I am not taking into account the 30 different bad endings, some of them are very short though)
  13. Like
    Diamon got a reaction from solidbatman in Community Based VN Proposal   
    I've been wanting to say it for a while now, but why do you actually always feel the need to show your worth by belittling literally the whole EVN scene? I mean, of course you can boast about how your art looks nice, because it does, but at the same time if you're really confident in the quality of the art, can't you just say so without insulting every OELVN artist at the same time? What's more, taste in art is a very subjective topic. You say that japanese artists have a better approach of anatomy : Surely you've read KEY works right? Not sure I can say that the body proportions are "professionals" (I mean, dem eyes that take half of the face...), even though I do love Key art style. Believe it or not, Western people (and not necessarily us, since we are people who are accustomed to japanese animation) might actually prefer games where girls actually don't seem to all have breast implants, or have ridiculous body proportion that I doubt it's actually possible to attain in reality, or faces where the nose is nearly non existent and where eyes take half of the space?
     
    I just find it really rude, especially since you're partially also criticizing people that, them at least, managed to release a completed project.
     
    Also, from time to time, some humility wouldn't hurt. Hopefully you know this word if you're a writer. Maybe instead of going "I shall bestow upon thee the privilege of participating to what will become the most awesome project that you'll ever see!" , something like "I'd like to have some help brainstorming potential idea for the scenario!" would be a good change of pace. Well, I might be asking too much I guess.
     
    Anyway, still, best of luck on your future endeavors. Hopefully this time you'll manage to reach the kickstarter phase.
     
    I saw what you did there...
  14. Like
    Diamon got a reaction from Nayleen in Community Based VN Proposal   
    I've been wanting to say it for a while now, but why do you actually always feel the need to show your worth by belittling literally the whole EVN scene? I mean, of course you can boast about how your art looks nice, because it does, but at the same time if you're really confident in the quality of the art, can't you just say so without insulting every OELVN artist at the same time? What's more, taste in art is a very subjective topic. You say that japanese artists have a better approach of anatomy : Surely you've read KEY works right? Not sure I can say that the body proportions are "professionals" (I mean, dem eyes that take half of the face...), even though I do love Key art style. Believe it or not, Western people (and not necessarily us, since we are people who are accustomed to japanese animation) might actually prefer games where girls actually don't seem to all have breast implants, or have ridiculous body proportion that I doubt it's actually possible to attain in reality, or faces where the nose is nearly non existent and where eyes take half of the space?
     
    I just find it really rude, especially since you're partially also criticizing people that, them at least, managed to release a completed project.
     
    Also, from time to time, some humility wouldn't hurt. Hopefully you know this word if you're a writer. Maybe instead of going "I shall bestow upon thee the privilege of participating to what will become the most awesome project that you'll ever see!" , something like "I'd like to have some help brainstorming potential idea for the scenario!" would be a good change of pace. Well, I might be asking too much I guess.
     
    Anyway, still, best of luck on your future endeavors. Hopefully this time you'll manage to reach the kickstarter phase.
     
    I saw what you did there...
  15. Like
    Diamon got a reaction from Down in Community Based VN Proposal   
    I've been wanting to say it for a while now, but why do you actually always feel the need to show your worth by belittling literally the whole EVN scene? I mean, of course you can boast about how your art looks nice, because it does, but at the same time if you're really confident in the quality of the art, can't you just say so without insulting every OELVN artist at the same time? What's more, taste in art is a very subjective topic. You say that japanese artists have a better approach of anatomy : Surely you've read KEY works right? Not sure I can say that the body proportions are "professionals" (I mean, dem eyes that take half of the face...), even though I do love Key art style. Believe it or not, Western people (and not necessarily us, since we are people who are accustomed to japanese animation) might actually prefer games where girls actually don't seem to all have breast implants, or have ridiculous body proportion that I doubt it's actually possible to attain in reality, or faces where the nose is nearly non existent and where eyes take half of the space?
     
    I just find it really rude, especially since you're partially also criticizing people that, them at least, managed to release a completed project.
     
    Also, from time to time, some humility wouldn't hurt. Hopefully you know this word if you're a writer. Maybe instead of going "I shall bestow upon thee the privilege of participating to what will become the most awesome project that you'll ever see!" , something like "I'd like to have some help brainstorming potential idea for the scenario!" would be a good change of pace. Well, I might be asking too much I guess.
     
    Anyway, still, best of luck on your future endeavors. Hopefully this time you'll manage to reach the kickstarter phase.
     
    I saw what you did there...
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    Diamon reacted to solidbatman in Community Based VN Proposal   
    Alright. Here goes my idea.
     
    Once upon a time, there lived in the land of Visnovella, a knight by the name of Omni. Now Omni was one of those old fashioned knights. He still followed the old religion of Visnovella, and resented those who realized the old religion was quite silly and oftentimes wrong in the face of fact. Still, nobody in Visnovella could question his drive. Omni, however, began to become upset by the new Visnovella. He hated the way the land was being ruled, and despised its new religion. So Omni picked the only option left to him... rebellion.

    Now, if you have ever read the account of Don Quixote, you might know where this is heading. Omni had grand dreams of remaking Visnovella in his own way. He dreamed of pure freedom. Everyone was entitled to anything, and he felt he had the masses behind him. 

    Sadly, in reality, he merely had himself and a small handful of like minded people. Without acknowledging this fact upfront, Omni unknowingly began sneaking around, trying not to draw attention to his greater plans. He sought after powerful allies who might lend him their strength in his crusade. 

    Meanwhile, a new enemy to Omni had appeared. The great dragon, Sepoj had entered the stage. Alongside Gangamamer, and Asuja, Sepoj began entering the lands of Visnovella. However, Visnovella and the dragons had long since set aside their differences and reached a peace agreement. Omni hated this and wanted the three dragons destroyed. Only then could Visnovella truly be free he felt. So Omni began making his moves. Grand moves, that in his mind, would crumble away the foundations of Visnovella and allow him to take charge. These grand moves, however, more resembled a child kicking and screaming that he didn't get what he wanted. 

    In the end, Omni continues his childish adventures, never realizing what a giant waste of time he is undertaking. Meanwhile, the observant citizens and leaders of Visnovella sliently hold in their laughter at this poor, misguided man.


    There is my idea. It's a tad depressing, but not all stories are meant to be happy I suppose. Thoughts? If this gets done, I'd like a nice commission please. 

     
  17. Like
    Diamon got a reaction from Funyarinpa in Anyone up for creating a (non serious) community VN?   
    Yo fellow people from fuwa. I was thinking about a potentially interesting concept,  I was wondering if anyone was interested in creating a VN in a participatory way : it would be basically a (nearly) free of access projects that anyone could access to at anytime and be able to meddle with what was already created, or create their own new project. I don't want it to be something where we need to create a "team" with "members", it would be some sort of public account accessible to anyone interested in Fuwanovel. As a result, you're free to invest yourself as much as you want on this, for example you could start working on a project for a week and then decide to drop it if you don't have the motivation to continue, and someone else could totally decide to take the reins if the project interests him. So really, anyone is free to participate, without specific amount of involvement or any specific skill required.
     
    We'll be using the beta site Cloudnovel which is a site where we can create a Visual Novel online, it requires no programming knowledge and is very similar to a video editor.. If you want to have access to the account, just make a post saying so in this thread, and I will pm you the ID and PW.
     
    Of course, I'm not expecting anything "serious" to come out of this because of the very nature of this project,  Also, you can create what you want on this editor, whether it is a seemingly more "legit" VN or whether it is a "trollish" VN (https://vndb.org/v14965 anyone?), as long as you respect DRM (= don't steal any asset from a real VN).
    If by chance it happens that someone wants to start a serious project on a separate and private account, they will just have to ask me so and we will create a personal account for that purpose.
     
    Ofc, I'm well aware that the biggest problem will be asset creation, and the only solution would be to use free assets :
    - Free of rights sprites (http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewforum.php?f=52)
    - Photo montage (Anyone wants to do a VN with a OriginalRen as a protagonist? )
    - Free of rights backgrounds (http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=17302)
    - Photographic backgrounds
    - Sprite makers (such as : https://forums.fuwanovel.net/index.php?/topic/7888-sprite-maker/?hl=sprite or http://pochi.lix.jp/k_kisekae2.html)
    - Free of right music / sound effects (easy to google)
    If ever some people want to create assets themselves for that purpose, it would be awesome, but I don't expect a lot of people to do so because it is kinda time consuming^^ The only knowledge that would be required is basic photo manipulation skills, since you will need to learn how to create picture with transparency, resize pictures...
     
     
    TL;DR : How does it work concretely?
     
    => Sprites, BG and music will be taken from assets on the web that are free of right and linked in the cloudnovel library by the users themselves (I will try to put some assets I found myself, but do not expect me to look for assets for you, it's easy enough to google and I linked quite a few things already)
     
    => How are the projects handled :
    - Person A decides to try creating something. I give him the password and ID, and he creates project1.
    - Person A finds assets he wants to use, upload them and start creating his VN.
    - Person B gets interested in project1 as well. He decides to meddle with project1 as well, and A and B discuss about what they want to do in this thread.
    - Person C is not interested in project1, so he decides to create his own project, project2. After one week working on it, Person C gets tired of working on that and abandon his project.
    - Person D notice project2 and finds potential in it, and decides to take over from where it was left.
     
    All of this only works if everyone respects the work of each other, so no trolling allowed (like deleting or completely changing someone else's project that is being worked on without asking them just to screw them). If ever something like that happen, I will immediately stop the whole thing and delete the account.
     
    So if anyone is interested or if you have questions, feel free to ask here!
     
    EDIT :
    It seems that most people prefer to have precise roles, so I guess I will list what are the different job required if you want to participate. Don't worry, there is no skill requirement^^
    - Asset finder : First, you need assets, so you need someone who can find assets on the web, or create them yourself. It can be photoshopped pictures, or filtered backgrounds, creating sprites from a sprite maker... That's what an asset finder is here for.
    - Writer : I don't really have to explain I believe^^
    - VN creator : Basically, the editor is the one that will put all the assets together with the writing in order to create the VN. he is the one responsible for creating the animations of the different sprites, put the sound effects, or the text effects... It's very similar to video editing.
     
    Of course, you can accumulate several roles, or even all of them at once.
    If you'd like to participate, please state which role you'd like to take on! I'll try to list everyone here!
  18. Like
    Diamon got a reaction from Rose in Anyone up for creating a (non serious) community VN?   
    Yo fellow people from fuwa. I was thinking about a potentially interesting concept,  I was wondering if anyone was interested in creating a VN in a participatory way : it would be basically a (nearly) free of access projects that anyone could access to at anytime and be able to meddle with what was already created, or create their own new project. I don't want it to be something where we need to create a "team" with "members", it would be some sort of public account accessible to anyone interested in Fuwanovel. As a result, you're free to invest yourself as much as you want on this, for example you could start working on a project for a week and then decide to drop it if you don't have the motivation to continue, and someone else could totally decide to take the reins if the project interests him. So really, anyone is free to participate, without specific amount of involvement or any specific skill required.
     
    We'll be using the beta site Cloudnovel which is a site where we can create a Visual Novel online, it requires no programming knowledge and is very similar to a video editor.. If you want to have access to the account, just make a post saying so in this thread, and I will pm you the ID and PW.
     
    Of course, I'm not expecting anything "serious" to come out of this because of the very nature of this project,  Also, you can create what you want on this editor, whether it is a seemingly more "legit" VN or whether it is a "trollish" VN (https://vndb.org/v14965 anyone?), as long as you respect DRM (= don't steal any asset from a real VN).
    If by chance it happens that someone wants to start a serious project on a separate and private account, they will just have to ask me so and we will create a personal account for that purpose.
     
    Ofc, I'm well aware that the biggest problem will be asset creation, and the only solution would be to use free assets :
    - Free of rights sprites (http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewforum.php?f=52)
    - Photo montage (Anyone wants to do a VN with a OriginalRen as a protagonist? )
    - Free of rights backgrounds (http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=17302)
    - Photographic backgrounds
    - Sprite makers (such as : https://forums.fuwanovel.net/index.php?/topic/7888-sprite-maker/?hl=sprite or http://pochi.lix.jp/k_kisekae2.html)
    - Free of right music / sound effects (easy to google)
    If ever some people want to create assets themselves for that purpose, it would be awesome, but I don't expect a lot of people to do so because it is kinda time consuming^^ The only knowledge that would be required is basic photo manipulation skills, since you will need to learn how to create picture with transparency, resize pictures...
     
     
    TL;DR : How does it work concretely?
     
    => Sprites, BG and music will be taken from assets on the web that are free of right and linked in the cloudnovel library by the users themselves (I will try to put some assets I found myself, but do not expect me to look for assets for you, it's easy enough to google and I linked quite a few things already)
     
    => How are the projects handled :
    - Person A decides to try creating something. I give him the password and ID, and he creates project1.
    - Person A finds assets he wants to use, upload them and start creating his VN.
    - Person B gets interested in project1 as well. He decides to meddle with project1 as well, and A and B discuss about what they want to do in this thread.
    - Person C is not interested in project1, so he decides to create his own project, project2. After one week working on it, Person C gets tired of working on that and abandon his project.
    - Person D notice project2 and finds potential in it, and decides to take over from where it was left.
     
    All of this only works if everyone respects the work of each other, so no trolling allowed (like deleting or completely changing someone else's project that is being worked on without asking them just to screw them). If ever something like that happen, I will immediately stop the whole thing and delete the account.
     
    So if anyone is interested or if you have questions, feel free to ask here!
     
    EDIT :
    It seems that most people prefer to have precise roles, so I guess I will list what are the different job required if you want to participate. Don't worry, there is no skill requirement^^
    - Asset finder : First, you need assets, so you need someone who can find assets on the web, or create them yourself. It can be photoshopped pictures, or filtered backgrounds, creating sprites from a sprite maker... That's what an asset finder is here for.
    - Writer : I don't really have to explain I believe^^
    - VN creator : Basically, the editor is the one that will put all the assets together with the writing in order to create the VN. he is the one responsible for creating the animations of the different sprites, put the sound effects, or the text effects... It's very similar to video editing.
     
    Of course, you can accumulate several roles, or even all of them at once.
    If you'd like to participate, please state which role you'd like to take on! I'll try to list everyone here!
  19. Like
    Diamon got a reaction from Emi in Anyone up for creating a (non serious) community VN?   
    Yo fellow people from fuwa. I was thinking about a potentially interesting concept,  I was wondering if anyone was interested in creating a VN in a participatory way : it would be basically a (nearly) free of access projects that anyone could access to at anytime and be able to meddle with what was already created, or create their own new project. I don't want it to be something where we need to create a "team" with "members", it would be some sort of public account accessible to anyone interested in Fuwanovel. As a result, you're free to invest yourself as much as you want on this, for example you could start working on a project for a week and then decide to drop it if you don't have the motivation to continue, and someone else could totally decide to take the reins if the project interests him. So really, anyone is free to participate, without specific amount of involvement or any specific skill required.
     
    We'll be using the beta site Cloudnovel which is a site where we can create a Visual Novel online, it requires no programming knowledge and is very similar to a video editor.. If you want to have access to the account, just make a post saying so in this thread, and I will pm you the ID and PW.
     
    Of course, I'm not expecting anything "serious" to come out of this because of the very nature of this project,  Also, you can create what you want on this editor, whether it is a seemingly more "legit" VN or whether it is a "trollish" VN (https://vndb.org/v14965 anyone?), as long as you respect DRM (= don't steal any asset from a real VN).
    If by chance it happens that someone wants to start a serious project on a separate and private account, they will just have to ask me so and we will create a personal account for that purpose.
     
    Ofc, I'm well aware that the biggest problem will be asset creation, and the only solution would be to use free assets :
    - Free of rights sprites (http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewforum.php?f=52)
    - Photo montage (Anyone wants to do a VN with a OriginalRen as a protagonist? )
    - Free of rights backgrounds (http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=17302)
    - Photographic backgrounds
    - Sprite makers (such as : https://forums.fuwanovel.net/index.php?/topic/7888-sprite-maker/?hl=sprite or http://pochi.lix.jp/k_kisekae2.html)
    - Free of right music / sound effects (easy to google)
    If ever some people want to create assets themselves for that purpose, it would be awesome, but I don't expect a lot of people to do so because it is kinda time consuming^^ The only knowledge that would be required is basic photo manipulation skills, since you will need to learn how to create picture with transparency, resize pictures...
     
     
    TL;DR : How does it work concretely?
     
    => Sprites, BG and music will be taken from assets on the web that are free of right and linked in the cloudnovel library by the users themselves (I will try to put some assets I found myself, but do not expect me to look for assets for you, it's easy enough to google and I linked quite a few things already)
     
    => How are the projects handled :
    - Person A decides to try creating something. I give him the password and ID, and he creates project1.
    - Person A finds assets he wants to use, upload them and start creating his VN.
    - Person B gets interested in project1 as well. He decides to meddle with project1 as well, and A and B discuss about what they want to do in this thread.
    - Person C is not interested in project1, so he decides to create his own project, project2. After one week working on it, Person C gets tired of working on that and abandon his project.
    - Person D notice project2 and finds potential in it, and decides to take over from where it was left.
     
    All of this only works if everyone respects the work of each other, so no trolling allowed (like deleting or completely changing someone else's project that is being worked on without asking them just to screw them). If ever something like that happen, I will immediately stop the whole thing and delete the account.
     
    So if anyone is interested or if you have questions, feel free to ask here!
     
    EDIT :
    It seems that most people prefer to have precise roles, so I guess I will list what are the different job required if you want to participate. Don't worry, there is no skill requirement^^
    - Asset finder : First, you need assets, so you need someone who can find assets on the web, or create them yourself. It can be photoshopped pictures, or filtered backgrounds, creating sprites from a sprite maker... That's what an asset finder is here for.
    - Writer : I don't really have to explain I believe^^
    - VN creator : Basically, the editor is the one that will put all the assets together with the writing in order to create the VN. he is the one responsible for creating the animations of the different sprites, put the sound effects, or the text effects... It's very similar to video editing.
     
    Of course, you can accumulate several roles, or even all of them at once.
    If you'd like to participate, please state which role you'd like to take on! I'll try to list everyone here!
  20. Like
    Diamon got a reaction from Helvetica Standard in Lucid9 (available for free on Steam)   
    (It feels I'm only posting picture after picture lately... Well, be it I guess.)
     
    A new character, Natsuki!
    Appearances can sometimes be deceiving... Who might she be...?
     

  21. Like
    Diamon got a reaction from Fuez in So you want to create a Visual Novel...   
    Disclaimer  : This guide is still very rough, I'll try to edit it and improve it gradually. Also keep in mind that I'm not pretending to be holding any universal truth, the advices that you will find below merely comes from my own experience.
     
    Hello everyone!
    So, I finally decided to create this guide about creating a Visual Novel, since I got a fairly decent amount of experience after managing this rather big group that is Fallen Snow Studios after nearly a year of trying to develop the Lucid9 VN. Hopefully it will serve to guide any person that would be interested to create a Visual Novel without knowing how to start!^^
     
    Also, this guide is quite long...
    But surely, if you're motivated enough to create a Visual Novel, going through this wall of text will be a breeze for you, right?
     
     
     
    0°) Introduction
     
    0a°) Should I try to create my own VN?
    So, you just finished reading what just became your favorite KEY Visual Novel, or got your mind blown by G-senjou, or even Steins;Gate… You’ve also heard of Katawa Shoujo and how it was all started by a bunch of amateurs on 4chan…
    And a little part of you is whispering : “I want to create a story like that as well!”
    And it also happens that your resolution for this new year is to try to create a Visual Novel...
     
    While many of you might just decide to ignore this little voice, some brave people might be ready to take up the challenge. That’s when you start to wonder “But is it really worth my time?”
     
    I’m only talking from my own experience, but the answer is definitely “yes”. It sure takes a lot of free time away from you, but it’s an experience that is both rewarding, and interesting. You will probably make new friends in this big adventure that is the creation of the VN. Feel very proud of being able to overcome all the hurdles that were in the way. And probably very satisfied!
     
    Except, successfully manage to release a complete game is a privilege that is reserved to only a few. Only to the most determined, but more importantly, to the people the most organized. And I’m here to give you a guideline about how you should organize, and what steps you should follow to start properly your project.
     
    0b°) Why Visual Novels?
    You don't need any heavy programming knowledge With only sprites, backgrounds, writing and music, you can create some of the most touching stories ever. You can technically manage to release a VN without any money. If enough effort is made and with the right people, the quality of a VN created by an amateur team can easily get close to professional quality level VN (see Katawa Shoujo) Visual Novels is a growing market in the west, and if you do things correctly, and with a bit of luck, you might be able to get money by selling your VN. It requires less work globally than your regular video game to create, and all the tasks can be handled by different people that have specific knowledge. You can do it as a side thing, while still having a job and other occupations in your life, granted you have enough people working on it and granted that you're organized enough.  
     
    1°) Deciding about the scope of your project
     
    So, you finally decided to cross the line, and to become a developer / creator. You’re full of hope and ambition, hyped like you’ve never been, and ready to even move mountains! That’s good, but let’s not rush things. You have 2 possibilities at this point :
    Decide about the scope of your project on your own, and submit those general guidelines you’ll have created to the people you’re going to recruit (meaning that they will have to accept those choices you made before joining).
    Recruit people first, and decide about the scope of the project together with all those people, probably by voting.
    I personally strongly advice to go with the first option, the second might make you find people more easily for your project, but it is more likely to create disagreements, and sometimes, it’s better to not use democracy.
    I will also try to touch a word about paid project and kickstarters, but since I’m less experienced in that, what I will say regarding them might be incomplete.
     
     
    1a°) Short, Medium, or big project?
    It’s one of the first aspect you want to decide before any recruitment or creating any content. It will basically decide how much involvement will be required by every member to complete the project. Keep in mind that the longest you want your VN to be, the more you will have to work on it, and that not everyone can work during 2 years or more on their free time until completion of your project.
    If you plan to create a short VN (2-3 hours for example), expect several months of work on it.
    If you plan to create a medium length VN (10-15 hours), expect at least a year working on it.
    If you plan to create a rather lengthy VN (20+hours), expect to work on it for several years, 1.5 or 2 years if you’re lucky, more if you’re not.
    It’s something important to decide before anything else, and you will have to make the people you recruit aware of that, to make sure that they will and that they can involve until the end.
     
     
    1b°) Status of your VN
    Some people will want to write a Visual Novel only by sheer passion, and will just want to be able to share it with the world and spread Visual Novel love (most of the time by releasing a VN for free). That’s perfectly fine. But some people might want as well to try to get some money out of it by selling their creation. that’s perfectly fine as well. Added to that, you have the possibility to try to get crowdfunded or not by a kickstarter. If you do decide to go with a kickstarter, you might want to check section 1c°) before this one. Let me try to summarize the different advantages or issues for each possibility.
     
    i°) “I want to release this for free, without kickstarter.”
    Example : Katawa Shoujo
    That basically means that you will work by sheer passion, and that no one will get paid or get commission with your work. Keep in mind that the most skilled artist and composers are generally only willing to work with commission, however, it’s still possible to find hidden gems willing to work by pure interest for your project and for free, if your project is interesting enough that is!
    You will have to look for people as passionate as you, and ready to involve a good chunk of their free time for something that won’t bring them any money. It’s not necessary hard to find, except it might take more time for you to find such people for your team, and most of all, if passion ever runs out, there will be nothing to convince them to stay in the team.
    However, imo, it’s with this type of project that you are the most likely to meet very interesting new people with the same passion as you, and possibly the same goals, ambitions and mindset, and in the end, they will probably become your friends as time goes on.
     
    ii°) “I want to release this game for free, with a kickstarter”
    Example : Sunrider
    You already have a few example of Visual Novels released with this system, it’s not a bad idea and can be very beneficial for your project, but only if you manage to handle the kickstarter correctly. It needs a rather huge amount of planning and organization, you need to know how much budget you’ll need, and create a kickstarter page attractive enough so you can get enough funding. Best way to go is generally to recruit the members of your team first, ask for their prices, and calculate a budget from that, and while you’re recruiting your members, ask them to work for free to create enough assets for the kickstarter page. There are several articles on the internet about how to create successful Kickstarter campaigns, so take a look at them, also, my best advice is to go look at successful VN kickstarters and try to see how they did things.
    On the bright side, having money allows you to aim for a higher quality when it comes to asset as you’ll be able to pay to get more skilled people.
     
    iii°)  “I want to release a commercial game”
    Example : pretty much every VN on Steam currently.
    You have two choices at this point :
    With kickstarter : it’s basically the same as previously, except the people working for your game might ask you to get a set percentage of the benefits from the sales of the game. This might require further organization and further arrangement / agreements to make, but it’s essentially beneficial if you want to get money for yourself through the creation of your VN, or if you want to create funds for a future game you’ll create (that would mean for your team to become an indie game studios).
     
    Without kickstarter : If you have prior funding from the sales of a previous game or personal funding to create this game and that you’re willing to pay people from your own pocket, then, this is probably the easiest way for you to interest people when going for recruitment, as they are sure they will receive money (while in the other case, the kickstarter might fail). If you don’t have funding and that you’re only betting on the sales of your game, you’re basically nearly in the same situation as if you were releasing it for free without paying anyone, some people might not want to wait so much before getting paid, especially since how much they’ll get is completely dependant on how much the game sells (and if the game reaches completion in the first place^^)
     
    1c°) Type of story?
    i°) Genre
    So, it is now about time to decide about what kind of story you want to make. that’s where you decide about the genre of your game :
    Sci-fi, Slice of life, School life, Mystery, Romance, Drama, Comedy, Fantasy, Historical...
    Bishoujo, Otome, Yaoi, Yuri
    Charage, Moege, Nakige...
    H or non-H
    Kinetic, Choices, Routes, True route, True heroine…?
    Will it have gameplay elements? Will it be a rpg? Point and click elements?
    What plot outline do I want?
    How many heroines? How many routes?
     
    It is definitely something you’ll have to put a lof thoughts on, and it will take time for you to decide, but knowing where you want to go is something essential if you don’t want to get lost later on.
    I will also add this very interesting thread from Clephas here :
    https://forums.fuwanovel.net/index.php?/topic/7930-thoughts-on-vns/
    I’d advise you to read it, as it is very interesting and might give you original ideas for the creation of your Visual Novel.
     
    ii°) Prioritize plot or characters?
    A very interesting question that doesn’t have an absolute answer, since it basically depends on what type of VN you want to create. If your aim is to create a Charage, or a Moege, then it might be better to think about creating your character first, elaborate backgrounds and such, and fit them in a story that works with what you created.
    But if ever you want to create a plot heavy story, then it might be better to try to create the setting you want to work in first, decide what twist you want to include as your main mind-blowing plot twist, create characters as plot devices first, and after only elaborate on them and create a background and a personality that is convenient for you.
     
     
     
    2°) Recruitment and roles
     
    I’ll start by talking about recruitment.
    Depending on how you decide to organize, you might have decided to go with recruitment first, and recruitment is definitely one of the essential part that will determine whether your project will be successful or not. It’s not only finding the people with the right skill, it’s also finding the people with the motivation and the passion!
    Be warned though, recruitment is a very tedious thing, as the only way to know if someone is really a good fit for the project is trial and error. There will probably be a lot of people you will recruit, and that will either go MIA because of various reasons, or that you will be forced to kick out of the team because they have a bad influence, or because they are not productive…
    Sometimes, even during the middle of the project, you will have to replace someone and go through the recruitment phase again. It cannot be helped, and you have to be ready for it.
     
    The second thing I’ll explain in this section are the different roles, where you can recruit them, what is expected of them and how they should work.
     
    2a°) Define a clear hierarchy
    Once again, sorry for democracy’s fans, but the best way to get things rolling in a team is to get a clear hierarchy. That means you need a leader. Or at least a core group that will take the final decisions. Careful, I didn’t say that you need to organize like some sort of dictatorship, and have the leader force his decisions upon others all the time. Hell no, that would condemn your project. The best organization is to have the members plan and discuss together, while the final decisions is taken by the leader(s) in case there is a disagreement. It’s easier said than done though, a leader needs to be respected by his members in order to make sure no argument happen and that everyone follows his final decision. Ideally, a leader should be :
    Responsible
    Worthy of trust
    Respectful when talking to the other members
    Willing to discuss and compromise
    Organized
    Good at dialoguing, good speaker
     
    Also, the leader is one of the few members that has the duty to know everything about his project, whether it is art, writing, music, programming… He has to know what progress has been done in all the different areas, he is also the one that tries to solve the problems some members might have regarding the project. And ideally, he is also responsible for recruitment. And also firing people. I know, it's a tough job. It is also better if the leader is someone versatile that can understand as much as possible about everything that might be technical about the VN. For example, it's better if he knows at least how sprite drawing process works. It's also better if he knows or can understand how programming works. this way, he can gauge what time it will take to create X feature / Y asset, and can tell the people who asked him (most of the time the writers) if it's doable or not. 
     
    Note that someone can without any problem accumulate the duty of leader + another role (writer, programmer, artist…). However, I’d strongly recommend against that for bigger projects, as the more people you have to manage in the team, the more work the leader will have. Note also that the leader role can actually be a leader “team”, in which case you can have 2 or 3 people discussing between each other to take the final decisions and guide the ship. It has advantages and defaults, for example, being 2 to decide might bring disagreements, but at the same time you’ll have someone to point out your flaws when you’re doing something wrong. It is strongly advised to team up with people that share the same mindset as you if that’s ever the case.
     
     
    2b°) About recruitment in general
     
    i°) Stay humble and stay honest
    If I have only one thing to say about this, it would be stay humble, and stay honest.
    Whenever you try to recruit someone, either on a thread or either on a private message, it’s important to convey those two things.
    Do not try to promise stuff you’re not sure of to the person you’re talking to (Like, don’t tell him that your game will sell by million copies and that he’ll get rich, or famous). Don’t hide things in your message, try to explain what you want to achieve, what you need, and what you expect from this person. And most of all, be respectful. Try to show what potential your game / ideas have to that person (because at this point, you’ll have probably only ideas and concepts in store). Also be ready to get numerous refusals. Sometimes, the person won’t even answer your message, or no one will reply to your thread. Don’t get discouraged, and keep trying to find people.
     
    ii°) Don’t accept anyone
    Finally, even if you’re the one that contacts the person in the first place, don’t accept everyone that will show interest in your project! I know that it’s very tempting, especially at the beginning when you get started with recruitment, but you need to make sure that this person will be a good fit for the team and that he will fill your expectations. Make sure to have them take test to gauge their skills, and don’t be afraid to refuse the people that you judge not skilled enough. I know that it’s sometimes hard to reject someone’s good will just because of his lack of skill, but it can’t be helped, and accepting such a person might be a disservice for you in the long term.
     
    iii°) Be professional
    It might seem a bit controversial for some people, as professional messages might sometimes seem too "business like" (well, if your VN is a commercial one, it's probably better this way), but sending something that looks professional is definitely a must. It will show the people you are recruiting that you are someone serious, able to organize his posts (and as a result someone who has a sense of organization) : "This guy seems serious. He might be able to succeed!". Also, one important rule is to never neglect the first impression you give when first contacting someone. You most of the time only have one chance : the first message. So you might as well want to take all the precautions to be successful in your recruitment. What do you think is the difference between :
    "hey, you're really good, I like what you're doing, are you interested in creating a VN with me?" "Hello, I've just seen your message and noticed that you were interested in creating a Visual Novel! I've read what you did, and I think your writing is very clever and agreeable to read, it would be a perfect fit for the VN I'm trying to create with my team. *Add explanations about your project*. Would you be interested in joining? I'm pretty sure someone with your skills would be a great addition to our team, and definitely improve the quality of our VN!"  
    iv°) Where can I find people to recruit?
    Start a thread on the “Fan Project & Translation Discussion” board. Try to have an explicit topic name and try to give a good description of what’s your goal and what VN you’re trying to create. List the roles you need.
    Go on http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewforum.php?f=58&sid=3e3d4e1c6075671bec1bf2250f6dd19c and either post a thread, or PM the people that are proposing their services. More generally, Lemmasoft is a very nice place when it comes to OELVN creation, and there is a lot of people willing to give their time in order to create Visual Novels over there, so don’t hesitate to bookmark this site.
     
    Keep in mind that some people won’t accept to be recruited if there is not enough apparent progress made on your game. That’s how it is, and sometimes, it’s better to have a script prepared in advance so that the people producing assets are sure they won’t waste their time creating stuff for something that will never come to completion.
     
     
    2c°) Writers
     
    i°) One or several writers?
    One of the first question you want to ask yourself about writing is : “Do I want only one writer to take care of all the writing, or do I want several writers?”
    Each has pros and cons.
     
    One writer :
    Writing is more consistent overall
    No difference in writing styles
    Only one person to create the plot, which makes it easier to create a coherent and non conflicting plot line.
    No arguments or debates about how the story should progress.
     
    Several writers :
    The writing gets done much faster than with one writer (you generally use one writer per route)
    Each route feels more “personal” when it comes to the writing.
    Easier to brainstorm ideas with other people.
    More diversity in the characters personalities, ideas related to the story…
     
    ii°) What should I expect from writers?
    The writer is basically the cement of your project. It’s the most vital piece. None of the other area can progress if the writing doesn’t. As a result, your writer(s) will have to be someone trustworthy, passionate, and hard working. It will have someone that can get in touch with the other members to give directions as well (What should this character look like, what music should play during this scene…). Also, someone pretty much organized as the writer will have to plan ahead a lot before starting to write. (You’ll notice that it is pretty much similar to the position of leader, hence why writers, often make good leaders). When I say planning, I’m not necessarily talking about the story. For example, a good writer must plan his story according to the limited number of locations because of the limited number of backgrounds he has at his disposal. In a lesser way, same goes for the sprites. He also has to consider the music that is played during the scene to a lesser extent.
     
    You need to recruit writers in priority, since no art or music should be created before the story is settled and the characters cast decided. Even with that, it’s better to have them work on a script right away. The writing should always be the part that shows the most progress, it always has to be ahead of art creation or music creation (ofc, since art and music assets should be based on writing).
     
    If you’re working with several writers, it might be good (but not mandatory) to have someone be the “lead writer”, generally the writer that will write the most of your VN, and will be used as a reference for the writing style. Also, you need to have the writers constantly share their ideas and progress with each other, in order to keep the story consistent. It’s not a good idea to have some of the writers work while being isolated from the others.
     
    iii°) Where can I recruit writers?
    Lemmasoft is your best bet, except a lot of the writers here are female. It isn’t a bad thing or anything, but guys and girls most of the time have a different view on how to create a story and characters.
    You can always try Fuwanovel, even though I have no idea if there are people experienced in writing out there (it would be great if we could have a list somewhere).
    https://www.fanfiction.net/ is another possibility, however the people you will find in here might be less interested in anime culture, and might not know what a Visual Novel is.
     
    Final tip, when recruiting a writer, don’t hesitate to ask both for a sample of their past work (recent if possible), and to give them a writing test. Visual Novel has “novel” in it name, so you’ll have to make sure the writing is of sufficient quality.
     
     
    2d°) Artists
     
    i°) Should the artists get involved with the story making?
    It’s a very legitimate question to ask, and I don’t really have a definite answer to that. The only thing I can say is that it’s up to the artist to decide whether they want to involve themselves with the story creation process or not, and that you should not force them to do so. Artists behaviors can vary greatly, some of them will just provide you the art asset you need without any question, nor without knowing for which purpose it will be used, some might take a little interest in it, but won’t ask because they want to keep the surprise for themselves (read : they don’t want to be spoiled), and some might just involve themselves heavily with the content of the plot while they create the art. Even though the third type is the type that is likely to be the more passionate about your project, be respectful and don’t force an artist to involve more into the project than what they wish to.
     
    One thing that is sure, is that artists won’t be able to get anything done without a character cast being set. I strongly recommand to have part of the script ready when creating the first sprites, so you know in advance which sprite expressions you’ll use.
    Also, some artist might ask to either provide written a description and details, or a visual reference before creating a character. It’s the role of the writer to provide him with those. It’s also always a good idea to give some freedom to your artists while they are drawing.
     
    Finally, the most important piece of advice I can give here is : Know what you want.
    Whenever you make a request to your artist, you need to have a precise idea of what you want as a result. Approximate directions will give an approximate result that might not please you, and the artist will have to start again the drawing which can be very frustrating for him. That’s also why most artist won’t accept to have free reign over the design of a character : they don’t want to have to redraw until it pleases the writer. Also, it’s always a good idea to ask the artist to share his work during the intermediate steps : don’t wait for when the sprite is done coloring to say that you want the pose to be changed, it’s something that has to be done during sketching phase.
     
    i°) Sprite/CG artist
    For this, you might need one or several artists, depending on how you want to organize. It’s important to know at least the basics of how a sprite or a CG is drawn :
    First, the artist starts with a sketch, that is often a concept based on the description they received. 
     
    Once the description is done, they lineart the sketch to create smooth lines that they’ll be able to color after that. 
     
    After that comes coloring with basic colors the linearted sprite : 
     
    Once all of that, the artist proceeds with shading the sprite (= adding shades and shadows to the coloring) :



     
    After all of that comes all the expressions, ofc. Don't forget also that each new pose for a character is basically redrawing a completely new sprite and might take time. Also, several sets of clothes are also additional work to your artist(s), even though more easier to do if the artist is working with a lot of layers.
    Based on that, there are two possibilities :
    One artist draws everything.
    You divide the different steps among several artists (one for concept art, one for linearting, one for coloring + shading).
    Take care though, some artists might have preferences about what role they have, and some might just prefer handling the sprites/CG creation from the beginning to the end.
     
    I strongly recommend to not split the art between your artists by characters (for example, X characters for artist A, and Y characters for artist B ) unless you are sure the two artists will be able to match each other’s style.
     
    ii°) Backgrounds artist
    This one is tough. There are very few BG artists, and it’s especially true if you’re looking for someone willing to work for free. Expect to spend countless hours skimming through forums and deviantart looking for the hidden gem. Fortunately, that’s not the only option you have :
    You can try to recruit someone willing to learn how to draw BGs. It will definitely take more time though. There are a bunch of tutorials you can find on the net about that.
    You can try to get your BGs done through 3D modeling software, such as Blender 3d, Google sketchup, and add effect on photoshop over them to get an anime BG feel. (See the videos and tutorial of Uncle Mugen)
    You can try to use normal pictures and use a paint over technique in order to make them look like anime backgrounds as well (using this kind of tutorials : http://lemur3s.deviantart.com/art/Anime-Visual-Novel-Backgrounds-from-photos-371395755)
    Finally, if worst comes to worst, you can use regular pictures and apply to them effect and filters in your favorite image editing software. 
    This time, I strongly recommend to plan your writing in a way that you don’t end up having to produce a tremendous amount of backgrounds for your VN.
     
    iii°) GUI artist
    Not much to say about this one, you will need someone able to create game user interface graphics, meaning a petty menu, nice looking logo, buttons, etc…
    Sometimes the people that know how to create GUI have also programming knowledge. Take care though, artists that can draw game interfaces, and artists that can draw anime style characters are generally two different type of artists. Sometimes, you'll luckily find an artist able to do both. But don't expect it to be the case most of the time.
     
    iv°) Where can I find artists?
    Lemmasoft is a good bet, and it’s where the artists are the most available. However, the quality of the drawings might not be good enough depending on what you’re looking for. Also the best artists often seek commissions here.
     
    As usual, you can always try your luck on Fuwanovel, I know that there are at least some artists lurking in the shadows in here.
     
    http://www.deviantart.com/ is also a very good idea, since it’s where you’re the most likely to find hidden gems (= skilled, available and interested). If you’re seeking someone willing to work for free, try to look for the artists with less exposure and less watchers, as it will be less likely that they will be busy with projects.
     
    2e°) Composers
     
    i°) Recruit real composers!
    Music people. What makes Visual Novels so great : being able to listen to emotional music while you read. Not much to say here, except one thing : don’t believe that people playing individual instruments can replace a composer. Having a pianist + a guitarist + a drummer in your team doesn’t mean you can create a soundtrack. First, everyone doesn’t have (good enough) recording equipment. Second, it takes an awful amount of time to create an OST this way, and it might just end up with a “meh” quality. It’s just much easier to have someone that has a synthesizer and that can use music softwares such as FLStudio or GarageBand, and that owns VST effects to simulate instruments. You can have several composers working on your soundtrack if you feel you will need a lot of tracks, but you’ll have to make sure that the VST used by each composers are somewhat similar.
     
    ii°) Where can I find composers?
    Lemmasoft, once again has a good amount of composers willing to work on projects and even for free.
     
    Once again, you can try your luck on Fuwanovel, who knows?^^
     
    https://soundcloud.com/ is the place where most composers gather. You might be able to find someone interested in working on your project if you pm composers here.
     
    Composers might ask for different types of stimulation to get inspiration. Some need artwork, others need writing, and some just need a musical reference. It’s a good idea to know what does your composer need for inspiration, and plan in consequence.
     
     
    2f°) Programmers
     
    i°) Should I use ren’py, use a custom engine, or…?
    It mostly depends of what type of VN you want to create, and how much time you have. If you already have skilled programmers ready to participate in the creation of your VN, and if you want your VN to have original gameplay elements, it might be interesting to try to create an engine from scratch. (It’s probably better to pay the programmer for that, since it’s quite a big amount of work)
     
    Else, if you’re going for something more simple, it’s better to use ren’py. It uses Python as a language, except the engine has it own specificities. It is very capable, and create very nice things (Katawa Shoujo was made on ren’py, same goes for Sunrider), and allows both the creation of standard VN, or gameplay oriented VN.
     
    If you’re aiming for a VN without gameplay elements rpg like, there is another alternative we are using for the project I’m working on, an engine in development that doesn’t require any programming knowledge and that is user friendly, called Cloudnovel (formerly Joilly). It’s very intuitive to use, and allows you to create your VN much faster since you don’t have to write any line of codes (it basically works in the same way as a video editor). The only thing being that it’s still in development, so there are some features and functionalities missing. (If you’re ever interested in using Cloudnovel, feel free to pm me)
     
    ii°) Where can I find programmers?
    Lemmasoft is a forum created for all the VN that were created with Ren’py, so you’ll most likely find a good number of programmers ready to help over there.
    Learning to use ren’py yourself is possible if you have the motivation and at least some very basic knowledge in programming
     
    2g°) Editors, proofreaders, beta-testers
     
    i°) Editors
    Not very high on the priority list, but essential if you want to save time, editors will be the people who will take a look at the writer’s drafts once it’s written and to suggest corrections and improvements to the flow of the writing (whether it is narration or dialogue). They also try to fix any plot hole they might find that the writer isn’t conscious of. That might require the editor to have a bit of knowledge concerning the plot and the characters though. If needed, the writer himself can serve as a editor as he goes back on his past work and edit it. To a lesser extent, they will be responsible for correcting grammar, syntax and vocabulary issues.
    Good level in english required.
     
    ii°) Proofreaders
    They will mostly correct typos and orthography / grammar problems that might have slipped past through the eyes of the editor. A good level in english is preferable as well.
     
    iii°) Testers
    Those are required only when the game is out, or at least when a demo is ready. their role is to test the game in every way possible in order to find some potential bugs / typos / issue and report them to the rest of the team.
     
    iv°) Where can I find them?
    You can find plenty of editors / proofreaders / testers on Lemmasoft, and on Fuwanovel. Don’t put too much emphasis on looking for proofreaders and testers though, since it can wait until the later phases of your project.
     
     
    With all of that, your team is now (hopefully) complete! Now in the next section, I’ll try to present some little tools and software that will make communication among the members of the team go smoothly.
     
     
     
    3°) Useful things to improve communication among the team members
     
    Now that we have all of our members, we have to make sure that they keep interacting between each other. Remember that creating a VN is a collaborative effort and the last thing you want is to have everyone working on his own, without any exchange or discussion.
    This section will be pretty short, but very practical.
     
    3a°) Skype
    Make sure that all of the members have a Skype account. If that’s not the case for some of the members, ask them to download and install it. Create a general chat with all the members invited in it, and make sure to tell the members to use the skype command /alertson [keyword]
    in order to receive a notification only when “[keyword]” is written (where keyword is replaced by the word you want ofc, it’s a good idea to use his own pseudo here).
     
    Try to encourage your members to discuss and participate on the skype discussions on a regular basis (if possible, a daily basis). Ofc, don’t expect the discussion to be 100% of the time productive, the Skype discussions are also meant to be chattery and to have people get to know each other. You can also create separate conversations for serious talk and chatter.
     
    It’s also actually possible to create moderated chats on skype, just check : https://support.skype.com/en/faq/FA10042/what-are-chat-commands-and-roles
    Also, I recommend to give priority to written chats over voice chats, especially at the beginning, since most people might be uncomfortable with talking with strangers. When you get to know other people well, voice chat has some advantages though, mostly it is faster to share information through voice than writing.
     
     
    3b°) Trello
    This one is an awesome tool. It’s called Trello : https://trello.com/
    It allows you to create boards where you can create different cards under different sections. Those cards contain a title, a description, and can contain various attachment such as audio file, youtube video, picture that you can upload on the card, and that everyone who has access to it can download. People can also comment about the content of the cards. You can also add checklists to the cards, to know what you need to do and complete it the more you progress.
    You just need to have all the members of your team to register on the site, to create an organization and add everyone in it.
     
    Purposes of trello :
    Very useful to have recaps and explanations, and it’s a good way to have information accessible to every member of the project at any time.
    Can allow you to organize all the information concerning the story in a condensed way (our story board for our own project looks like a wiki).
    An easy way to store and organize assets, whether it is for art or music.
    A great way to comment other’s people work, and to make one’s opinion visible on the card.
    A great way to have asynchronous talk if people cannot be free during the same time frames.
    It will be the primary support for conversation between members working on different aspects of the game (writers can comment about the art, the music…)
     
    I cannot stress enough how useful trello is. It might be just the tool that make it that people will want to work for your VN or not.
     
     
    3c°) Google drive.
    Google drive is mostly useful for writing. It allows you to share the content of the writing with the other members, in a way where they’ll be able to comment or edit in real time the documents. Extremely useful, especially for editors. It’s also a good way to be able to monitor writing’s progress.
     
     
     
    3d°) Have your own development forums
     
    I’d recommend that mostly if a lot of people on the team are allergic to Skype and Trello.
    Basically, most of your exchange will be done on some sort of “private” forums divided in sections where the members will create threads and post in those threads. It has some advantages, mostly :
    It’s the best for asynchronous talk (especially useful if people live in different timezones)
    It always keep a written trace of what has been said / made
    You can add attachments to your posts
    It is however much slower and reactive than the other options mentioned above (I personally prefer trello over this.
     
     
     
    4°) How to be efficient as a team
     
    Now that you’re all set, I’ll just give some tips gathered from my personal experience in order to get a better efficiency from your team.
     
    4a°) Importance of communication
    It feels kinda obvious when I say it, but it’s strongly underrated, communication among the members of the team is the key to success. It is generally the responsibility of the project leader to ensure that everyone on the team communicates. The leader has to coordinate the whole progress of the project, and make sure he’s available to discuss with any member about a problem he/she might have encountered, and if necessary, be the relay / intermediate between the different members of the group. (For example, if an artist encounter a problem with drawing a sprite, the said artist talks about it to the project leader, who will himself question the writer concerned, and if needed will ask the writer to directly talk with the artist.
     
    Also, as it’s the project leader role to make sure everyone is okay with what they are doing, and to make sure that no one feels too shy or scared to share their concerns about any topic. He has also to make sure that everyone tells him when someone has to leave for a determined or undetermined period of time. It’s also his duty to make sure that everyone is aware of the latest news concerning the project, whether it is meetings, deadlines, goals, etc...
     
    One other issue that you might encounter, is people that are not reactive on Skype, and only send a message every 2 weeks before going back MIA. Generally, it’s not a good sign concerning the involvement of the person on the project, but if ever that’s the case, try to send a nice but firm message explaining how you’d wish that this person would involve more on the project. If no effort is made, it’s your choice to whether kick out this person out of the team, or to keep him. Just remember that having someone slack off on his duties (communicating regularly being one of those duties) can be harmful for the whole team if this person has an important role.
     
    Sometimes, it will be necessary for you to set up meetings through Skype in order to share info to several people, or to have them communicate with each others. It’s an important thing to do and is a good way to create teamwork spirit in your team.
     
     
    4b°) Plan ahead!
    Be a master of planification , create checklists, try to think of every hurdle in advance, and try to take preemptive measures to counter those possible future problems. As a general rule of thumb, try to avoid putting all your eggs in the same basket, especially if there’s a lot of work to do. Time isn’t your ally, and the more time goes by, the more it is possible that something might happen to one of your member IRL. So try to have several people work on one same thing, so that one can replace the other if ever something happens, and so that progress doesn’t stall. Everyone is not easily replaceable though, so sometimes you might not have a choice.
     
    Don’t wait the last moment when you have something to ask to someone. Always try to do things the earliest as possible, but at the same time, don’t ever plan something you’re not sure to use (never ask a composer to make a track you’re not 100% sure you will use for example).
     
    Try to always have a plan B and a plan C for every issue that you might foresee in the future. You might prepare yourself for nothing sometimes, but the more you’ll be ready when an issue appears, the more smoothly you’ll be able to deal with it, and the less it will stall your project.
     
    Another important thing : get to know who you’re working with. Every member of your team is a human being with different sensibilities, different way of working, different organization, and different work speed. Try to gauge what you can reasonably expect from that person, and plan in consequence. If a composer believes he needs at least two weeks to create a decent soundtrack, don’t expect to have more than 2 tracks per month, and plan in consequence.
     
     
    4c°) Deadlines
    Some people find it bothersome, others like them. I have only one thing to say : Set deadlines for your project. They are your bread and butter, what will make that your team will work to reach your common goal. Without a deadline, one's mind will waver, and might succumb to procrastination (your worst enemy).
     
    A deadline is meant to positively “pressure” someone to make him do the work, it is meant to be like a reference or a checkpoint for the person working. “Am I late compared to the deadline? Will I make it in time?” A good set deadline is meant to pressure enough the members of your team so that they can have motivation to accomplish their jobs, and at the same time should never feel too overwhelming (which would have the opposite effect). Also, a good deadline is set never too far in the future, but never too close at the same time. If your goal is to release a demo, don’t put the deadline 2 weeks after the current date. Give it at least a month or two.
     
    It’s however always a good idea to have an estimated time of release for your full VN, as it gives a good idea of what intermediate deadlines you need to set to reach this goal. For example, if I want my game to be released on Spring 2016, it might be a good idea to consider a release of a demo as an intermediate deadline in Summer 2015.
     
    You might also want to micromanage your team, and set individual deadlines for each precise task. It’s definitely doable, but is a lot more work as a project manager. However, it is definitely a good way to make sure work is done at a regular pace. You might even want to set deadline for people even if there is no practical goal for that, and it’s totally okay to set deadlines just for the sake of seeing progress being made.
     
    A final word on this topic : sometimes, some people might not be able to respect the date of the deadline. It will definitely happen, and that’s something you should expect to happen. That’s why you should always try to give yourself a margin when setting a deadline. If you want something to be released by June, set the deadline in May. And don’t be harsh on the people that are late, especially if you see that they are hard-working. If the deadline was not respected because of pure laziness from the member, or because of a lack of communication (aka : you only receive a message from this person once every month), that’s another story.
     
     
    4d°) Have fun!
    Sometimes, trying to have too much productivity kills productivity.
    Forcing people to work on something might result in a lack of quality, because your members will be working on something without motivation. It’s just better sometimes to take breaks, or to laugh and joke together. Heck why not even play online games (that’s what we’ve been doing recently)? It’s always better to not force the chat to be serious 100% of the time, try to be a bit lax from time to time. Take some time to have people get to know each other. To create friendship.
     
    Don’t underestimate the contribution of bonding to your team’s moral. You’ll be always more motivated to work for friends, than working for “clients” or “strangers”. Also, seeing the people you enjoy being with motivated and giving their best to accomplish your goal is a huge motivating factor.
     
    Finally, at some point, it might happen that someone don’t feel like working on the project because he doesn’t find the motivation. Maybe that person will feel that currently, workin gon the project is a burden. It’s something that can happen to anyone and that is perfectly natural. The best I can advice in those cases, is to take a break from the project, a short one, and do something else instead. Play a Visual Novel. Go back playing to the new extension of your favorite MMO. Go spend some time with real life friends. And (hopefully) come back with your spirit renewed and with full motivation!
     
     
     
    5°) Create some awareness for your project
     
    Well, everything is all good and all set, but let’s not forget our primary goal. You obviously want to create a Visual Novel, but you also want it to get recognition, to be read by people all over the world, and possibly to be sold. So basically, you need to do PR job. Don’t believe that PR and marketing are things should be addressed only once the game is created. It is something that should progress at the same pace as the development of your VN. Here are basic things to do to ensure a solid foundation for the marketing and PR of your future VN.
     
    But, what is awareness? It's very simple : it's having people know that your VN exists. Your goal is basically to create a system like this :
    - At the top, a source : basically you and your team : you are yourself the main advertiser of your own project, and most of the content you release has one goal : create some sort of "fanbase"
     (see next point)
    - In the middle, a "fanbase" : people very interested in your project that will do their best to support you and share the word because your project is awesome. Most of the time, it will be them who will retweet your messages, share your facebook posts, create forum threads about your project, create let's play and reviews... They are your most valuable help in advertising your VN, so don't neglect them!
    - At the bottom, normal fellows : they will be the people that will skim through your website and different pages briefly, without necessarily taking a lot of attention, or without being very interested. It's fine that way, the only thing you want is to make sure thosse people know about the existence of your VN, and that the title will stay in their head. This way, the day when your VN will launch, it is most likely that this person that, at the time, saw your project developing, will say "I think I've heard / I know about this game... Might as well give it a try."
     
    Keep in mind that those should be done only once you actually have content to show or tease about, and if you’re sure that your project is going in the right direction, or at least somewhere. Also, don't expect your different advertisement pages to be swarmed with messages and followers as soon as you create them. It's only the beginning, be patient, and have low expectations. Don't try to create the buzz by all cost if nothing tangible has been created yet. Don’t put the cart before the horse
     
    5a) Create forum threads
     
    i°) Where do I create forum threads?
    Fuwanovel : https://forums.fuwanovel.net/index.php?/forum/87-ongoing-projects/
    The ongoing project section is where you want to create your thread. Make sure to create an intro post organized with sections, pictures, screenshots, a synopsis about the story, information about the characters, what you’re planning to do and what is the current progress. You can also list any role open for recruitment in this post.
    Here are some good examples :
    https://forums.fuwanovel.net/index.php?/topic/2957-violeta-hill-community-based-visual-novel-project-demo-released/
    https://forums.fuwanovel.net/index.php?/topic/4543-demo-available-lucid9-project-a-mystery-vn/
     
    Lemmasoft : http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewforum.php?f=43
    Same as previously, make sure to take care of the look of your thread.
     
    ii°) Tips and advices :
    Be respectful with all the people that will take the time to read what you wrote on your thread, and take some time to comment it. Some people will support you and encourage you, don’t forget to thank them. Some people might come and try to give their opinion about your project :
     
    Sometimes it will be interesting and constructive criticism, and if that’s the case, you should try to open the dialog with that person, and thank him for sharing his opinion.
     
    Sometimes, it will merely be someone voicing that the game is not to his liking. Everyone has different things they like and dislike, and I can’t help but share a wise quote about that : “You can please some of the people all of the time, you can please all of the people some of the time, but you can’t please all of the people all of the time”.
    Assume the choice that you made, and ignore the complains that you might receive. Take care though, if several people complains about the same thing, it has to ring a bell for you and it might be a good idea to question yourself if your decision is a good idea or not.
     
    Sometimes, you might meet trolls, or haters. It’s unfortunate, but it happens. Just ignore those people. Or tell them that you read their messages and that you will take what they said into account. In any case, always stay polite, and never start a flame war on your own thread. It would send a very bad image of your project, whoever might be the responsible for starting it.
     
    Don’t spam your own thread. When I say spam, it means don’t write post several messages next to each other without a reply from someone else in between (unless you have some juicy news to share, ofc).
     
    Don’t post a message only for the purpose of bumping your thread. It is not very well seen in forum communities in general. if you bump your thread, always have a valid reason to do so (relevant information, replying to someone’s question…)
     
    5b°) Get yourself a blog / website
     
    It will basically become your public window display for your VN. Make it attracting visually, try to have a visual theme that fits your VN. Also, try to make it so that the name is easy to google.
     
    You don’t exactly need a website to start with, a dev’ blog is probably enough to start with. (An example here : http://katawashoujo.blogspot.fr/)
    What will you be talking about in this blog? The progress being made so far by the team, teasers about features to come, publish assets in exclusivity…
     
    If you try to get yourself something more looking like a website, it’s different. You should organize and create section, like what you did in your forum thread. Also, make sure that people can find what is the VN about. An example here : http://lucid9.weebly.com/
     
    Try to update your blog/website regularly (at least bi-monthly), even if you don’t seem to have any follower. Having regular posts and updates show that you’re serious about your project and indicate some professionalism coming from you.
     
    5c°) Social medias
    They are your best allies, granted you know how to use them correctly and granted you know the different "codes" and specificity of each social network.
    One thing to realize is that followers will come naturally as your VN progresses, so don't be too obsessed by trying to get the highest number of followers as possible in the beginning.
    Also, one thing that will make you much more succesful in social networks, is that you need to "give and take". If you want other people to share your messages and to take interest in you, you need to interact with the countless other actors of the social sphere first. Meaning that you need to reply to the messages people send you, and you also need to show interest in other's people projects, to comment their status / tweet, to share yourself other's people posts...
    A facebook group is always a good idea to have.
    A twitter account is a must have, since it’s a good way to grab the attention of people if you get re-tweeted.
    Tumblr is also something you can think about, even though I’m not too familiar about it.
    deviantArt is surprisingly a very good place to garner attention if you share art assets from your Visual Novel with the artists in there.
    Having a soundcloud account for your project might be a good idea as well, since it will allow you to embed music in your various twitter / facebook / blog posts.
     
    Note that getting more people to follow you and take interest in your project is sometimes tedious, and probably won’t happen before you get content release.
     
     
     
    6°) Conclusion
     
    Creating a Visual Novel is definitely something that is not easy, and that requires efforts. You will have to be patient, be extremely organized and clever if you want to avoid your project to fail.  But in the end, it’s something you won’t regret doing, as it will make you learn how to work in a team, and as it is certainly thrilling to know that you might be able to share one of your creation with the entire world! As for myself, I know that I’d be very proud to be one of those artisans that contributed to spread and share this wonderful thing that is the Visual Novels love.
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    Diamon reacted to LinovaA in Writer's Block <Combating It>   
    So now that we have a creative corner, I figured I would try and contribute some my knowledge to the wonderful people around here. That and maybe I am just bored and done all of my assignments. 
     
    I am still pretty new around here, but if I can help even one person with this, well… that is good enough I guess.


    So, as the title says, we will be talking about one of the main struggles almost every single writer will go through at least once during one of their projects. Whether that project be a novel, visual novel, heck even essays and translations to a much lesser extent; it will strike all of us eventually. It is more than likely that you, the reader, have already experienced Writer’s Block at some point, so you already understand the pains associated with it. Or maybe you are one of the lucky few who have never had to deal with such a thing, in which case I envy you entirely and completely.
     
    You could be going at breakneck speed through your manuscript, writing tens of thousands of words without having any issue, but sooner or later… you may find yourself smacking your head against a brick wall of blankness unable to figure out where to go from where you are.
     
     
    So first off, let’s talk about Writer’s Block and what it is.
     
     
    What is Writer’s Block?
     
    Writer’s Block, by definition, is when an author loses his ability to produce new work thus creating a block in his creative train of thought. This block can run you down for a few hours, to a much longer time over the span of years when in extreme cases.
    So looking at this as writers, this is not something we particularly want. We want to be able to avoid this sort of thing happening to us. But how do we do that?
    Well the tough answer to that is that we cannot just so easily prevent it. There are some ways that help keep our minds fresh and circulating new ideas, but there is no sure fire way to keep yourself safe from breaking against the Great Wall of Blanking Out.
    Writer’s Block can be entirely discouraging for an author, and for someone who is just getting used to writing larger works; can be absolutely catastrophic in terms of their will to keep writing. I know when I first started trying to write my first manuscript for the first… second… third… fourth… fifth… and sixth times. I honestly lost track after that, but my real problem was that I would get so far in, maybe about 2000 words and all of a sudden everything I had in my head would simply vanish. The Great Wall of Blanking Out would suddenly raise itself in front of my word count and would not allow it to progress any further.

    So let’s talk about ways to prevent Writer’s Block, even if it is in a small way. None of it is a guarantee, as everyone is different; but these are the ways that I have found to work and that have worked for the people I have helped through their own Writer’s Block issues.
     
    Preventing Writer’s Block:
     
    So as we know, Writer’s Block affects our ability to create new work. This does not mean that it only affects new project ideas, but rather it affects the entire creation process. You get so far in and all of a sudden your train of thought is just gone and you have nothing left you can put out because you have hit The Great Wall of Blanking Out. Some don’t even make it as far as the keyboard, thinking that they have not developed their idea enough, or that they just do not have time.
     
    So let’s get down to it:
     
    1. Outlines Can Be Your Bible/Insert Religious Text
     
    One problem I have seen a lot of people run into is that they can go so far in, but all of a sudden lose everything they were about to write. When they just got an idea and started writing, they did not think ahead, and only knew the general plot outline of what they wanted.
     
    That is not to say you can't do this, but you run the risk of hitting a wall sooner or later if you don't really know where you are going. Kinda like wandering around the woods when you have never been inside those particular woods before. Go too far and you may end up a tad lost.
     
    Taking time and writing an outline of the events that take place in the story is an excellent idea. It provides you with a foundation to build upon when you go to sit down and write. This outline is merely just an outline, so just like your first draft (which I will get to next) you can spill your raw creativity into it and just let the ideas flow out on to the page.
     
    Your outline doesn't even have to make coherent sense, just so long as it gives you an idea of the direction you are heading. As long as you have a general idea of what you are doing, the risk of suddenly losing yourself and your story in the first 5-10k words can be greatly reduced.
     
    2. Your First Draft is not Your Final Draft
     
    Here is another hang up that can easily discourage anyone who is writing. As writers, it makes sense that we have all read wonderful stories. Masterpieces in our own eyes. So obviously, when writing our own works, we want them to be just as good if not better if you are feeling really ambitious.
     
    So you sit down and you start writing. You get through the first chapter and you feel pretty darn satisfied, but you take a look through what you have written… and realize that it is not to the quality that you want it to be… so you start editing… but all of a sudden, you realize there is more wrong with it so you start editing that stuff too. Before you know it you have spent two hours editing the first chapter/portion of your work and you just feel absolutely drained from the ordeal. Most people I talk to end up losing their creative flair for the work after that, or if they get any further, end up losing it after subsequent bouts of this over editing process.
    So what is the problem here?
     
    Editing your first draft to look like a final draft before you have even written the whole thing is just bad news. The Writer and the Editor within you coexist, but they should not be working together at this early stage in the game. The first draft, just like outline, is where you can poor out your raw creativity and just roll with it. No author just sat down, puked out 100k+ words and created a masterpiece… and if they claim to have done so, I am going to call absolute bullshit.
     
    Writing a good work takes time, and one needs to force their inner Editor to just calm down and be patient. While the Editor is critical and meticulous, the Writer is freeform and creative. The critical side of the Editor can stifle the creativity of the Writer if they are working side by side at the same time. They do complement one another, just… not at the same time.
     
    3. Keep Writing
     
    Another pitfall that one might want to avoid is not continuing. You may start with the intention of finishing, but maybe tomorrow you just “don’t feel like it”. But then, the next day after that… you find that you “don’t feel like it again”.
     
    Once you start making an excuse not to write like that, you are already on a road to pain when it comes to finishing your work. Writing a story is a time investment, and you are going to have to want it in order for you to even think about finishing it. “Not feeling like it” just isn't in the equation.
     
    The problem with this, is that after enough days of not feeling it, you might decide to come back to it. However, this is another lead in to allowing The Great Wall of Blanking Out to encroach on what you are trying to write. Writer’s Block will settle in and all of a sudden you have nothing for what you want to write.
    Even if you only write a single sentence, coming back and visiting your project each day is a good way to prevent it from fading in your mind. For one of the main things that Writer’s Block thrives off… is stagnation in the creative sense.
     
    _____________________________________________________________________________________
    I struggled for years with Writer’s Block. I first started writing original works back in grade four. Until about four years ago, I had never finished anything. Writer’s Block would simply come over and snatch my ideas away from me. Once I hit Grade 9 and came up with a new story (where my Username originates), I just kept in my head, afraid of having development of that halted by another bout of Writer’s Block.
    These are just a few techniques you can use to prevent it. Curing Writer’s Block however, is a lot easier than one might think. It requires a lot of willpower, but it can be done.
     
    LinovaA’s Method for Working through Writer’s Block:
     
    Now while it is no guarantee, as with all of the things in this guide (oh gods this has become a guide?), it may help you if you find yourself in the middle of a particularly long bout of Writer’s Block.
    So what happens when you hit this Great Wall of Blanking Out? You run out of ideas. So where do you even go there?
     
    The best way to explain is to show an example of what I did.
    I sat down and looked at the paper and decided I needed to come up with something of my own creation. Doesn’t matter if it is cliché, but it needs to have a small level of originality to it.

    So the best bet was to just come up with a random scenario. However that is normally impossible with Writer’s Block. So here is a format I came up with
     
    <Adjective> <noun> <verb> <noun>.
    That is all.
     
    It’s best not to agonize over this. Seriously just pick any random adjective and any random noun that fits for the first two.

    Of course it ended up being this for me:
     
    Purple Elephants attack Earth.
     
    Not exactly the most elegant of scenarios, but we’ll work with it. So now that one has this completely strange scenario, you need to expand it somehow. So you simply need to add one detail at a time.
     
    Purple Elephants attack Earth and enslave humanity.
     
    Great. Just great.
     
    Add a few details, but after adding a few more details in this fashion… you take your pencil and scratch out something and edit the grammar of the sentence. I of course edited out Purple Elephants.

    Earth is attacked and humanity is enslaved by pseudo-Humans from Titan, enforcing a dystopian society.
     
    Voila. A scenario. This generally will not work the first time to fix your Writer’s Block. You need to do this over and over again until your brain starts easing up and those little details start coming to you much quicker. Or perhaps until you no longer need to use the simplistic format I laid out earlier.
     
    While a lot of people would say to go out and wait for the ideas to come to you, I believe and more proactive approach of force starting your creative engine to be the more efficient way when in a deep rooted bout of Writer’s Block. Of course, the less proactive approach may work with you more. I can't tell you if it is or not because everyone is different.
     
    The End:


    I do hope I have helped someone out here. I understand Writer’s Block being a huge challenge for a lot of people who are into writing like myself. Hopefully you come out of reading this learning something new, and if you didn’t… well thanks for giving me the time of day regardless.  None of this is guaranteed to help, but hopefully I have helped give you some tools to help you keep writing and avoid Writer's Block, and perhaps even conquer it.
     
    So yeah, thanks for stopping by and giving this a read.
     
     
    Edit: I will be coming back to fix any typos when I get home.
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    (It feels I'm only posting picture after picture lately... Well, be it I guess.)
     
    A new character, Natsuki!
    Appearances can sometimes be deceiving... Who might she be...?
     

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    Diamon reacted to Lambda in Lucid9 (available for free on Steam)   
    I got a spare half an hour, so I read the demo and I must say I'm intrigued. Especially about how the protagonist will fit into the murder mystery part..... Red, red, red, red, red~ But I prefer blue. Anyway, I'll be looking forward to the full game!
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