In my winter break ennui-fueled translation spree I've finished the second hypnosis scene. Again, criticism welcome, and again, don't expect me to maintain this pace once the semester starts.
https://gitgud.io/WJHB/saimin-yuugi-translation/-/tree/rui
I haven't bothered to merge the upstream changes back into my branch or significantly modify my workflow (I don't mind doing word wrap manually and the commas fuck up the spacing anyway.)