O. Van Bruce

Be creative... put your monitor inclined to a dead angle and use headphones. Also, damn, it's porn, what do you have for a roommate? a monk or a grill? just say what it is and that would end there, it's not like your roommante doesn't know you like manga and anime. Shino route would be the sweetest over the sweet route, it could even compare to Kosame's route in that sense. Also, the whole background they did for her was awesome and developed enough compared to other secondary chars like Mayaka and the teacher. Heck I'd even say she had a far better background story than Aoi.

Be a man and don't be ashamed of your stuff. I'm carefully reading eroges while on a hospital. It can't be that difficult to read and skip the h-scenes as they come. Meh, real milf route would have been Shino Kogasaka. I would have REALLY liked a route for her.

The epic 36 hit combo at the end of Tomoyo's route in Clannad.

When you are a teen you behave in strange ways... Please watch Working and also the second season. Inami s one of the most lovable girls I've ever seen in anime and manga.

Makina "What blasphemy! Underneath th' great an' beautiful cycle of existence, the journey from the cradle to th' grave, lies a foundation of sexual pleasure! the orgasm is life itself, ya know!?" I... I... Such wisdom! Makina is becoming my guru more and more.

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A pity then... just continue until the end but there are few more things that happen after this, besides the second H scene. PD: Makina: "Limp bread is for grannies with rotten teeth. Bread's gotta be bulky and crunchy when you bite or it's no good at all" I can only clap at such wisdom.

The magic stuff gets to a sweet spot in Chinami's route since is magic without any pretentious explanation. At least it was like this for me.

I honestly wish it would just end here, because I'm pretty sure I'll start disliking it once it goes into the h-scene territory. :S Well, they do call her a kuudere even in the VN itself. Yeah, I already got to that part. if they say she's a Kuudere... But man, this common route is so much better than Hoshizora's. It's packed with better humour and Characters are very likeable. My favourite scene so far is on my avatar. The only thing I don't like is that the story atm is being told in small pieces, presenting an small incident and then moving onto another day and so on. It feels kind of un-continous, like if I were reading a 4-koma manga. Finally about Michiru, I find her funny but it's a bit sad she's a punchbag and gag character until now, Having a self-proclaimed tsundere with the same face as Hachikuji Mayoi is very interesting. Guess I'll have to wait for her route. I don't get why people say they find her annoying.

Small things like avatar size limitation makes the total bandwidth used monthly on a webpage become less and saves storage room on the hosting . It also makes accesing the website noticeable faster for slow connections. Finally, people using the 3G mobile network to access the site using their phones will certainly benefit from small size avatars and images in general due to having a maximum monthly bandwidth restriction. In the end it makes all of us save money. So, please keep the avatars on the current weight.

Thanks for the list. Once I'm done with some VNs I want to read in english I'll jump into this.

I thought you were making this as a freeware. How do you plan on knowing if it will sell? If you really need funding you could make an early simple beta, present it on /vg/ roguelikes thread and then make a kickstarter asking for money for art and graphical design expenses... If people like it then the money will come... or maybe that's just wishful thinking.

Wait a moment, are you doing this for your own amusement or to sell it? I wouldn't think of paying someone for art if I were making a freeware game... It's kind of surprising for me

Who'll be doing the art? or ot will be only stats and numbers?

As I saw her she was tsundere haha And Eri was certainly a bit violent but not on the unreasonable side. If you want to talk about violent you could have mentioned Inami from the list I gave.

Don't mind me too much this since this are ideas I spew out. Not something I'm really asking you to put on your game. This would make the game more complicated to code but a "technology research" section would be a nice addition. Basically, the world (dungeons) advances automatically but you have to research and find new discoveries in weaponry and wizardry. Obviously, when you marry a princess you won't have only a child so you can assign others members of your family or people you meet in your adventures different background tasks like: - A diplomat: Get to know other dungeons and people who can help you on your research or unlock hidden paths in dungeons. - A treasurer/merchant: Someone who can boost the benefits of stuff you find on dungeons or can appraise unknown stuff you find on dungeons. - A blacksmith/alchemist: researches new weapons or improves the ones you have. - A sage/magician: interprets runes or old manuscripts which can unlock new magic or technologies. Managing well this background tasks would be neccesary to get stuff to advance or finding great princesses. Basically you'd be kind of a nomadic tribe who lives of looting dungeons and saving princesses. You could even work as mercenaries and have contacts on the biggest courts of the continent. haha

Only 4 hours into the common route I find her funny. And a Kuudere is not that aggresive lol. A kuudere is someone like Sakaki from Azumanga

https://forums.fuwanovel.net/index.php?/topic/3514-sdr2-canceled/ -_-

Take a look at Crusader Kings II genetics system (also, this article and this also) to get some ideas. More than stats, a group of traits and a series of events in which you can know about the childhood of the future hero would add a lot more flavour. Take a look at the game and play it... one of the best strategy games ever made. If you make it party based instead of solo I'd be very happy.

Playing Grisaia... this looks like it will be a fun read. I thought that the supposedly annoying tsundere would be Mishiru but is it Yumiko in the end?

Tsunderes I liked: Kashiwazaki Sena Katsura Hinagiku Nagi Sawachika Eri Mahiru Inami See? There are good tsunderes out there. Almost all of this girls end being very likeable. The main problem is that the most popular image of what a tsundere is has been defined by characters like Taiga or Louise... hell, almost every main char voiced by Kugimiya Rie (not in vain she's called the queen of tsundere). And those are the violent and unreasonable type of tsundere.

really surprised me. Personally, I would have preferred if You himself had Moving on to Komomo's route. Kinda unsure about her character; she's obviously tsundere, but I hope she's more than just that. I think I'd be a little disappointed if she isn't :/ Nah, Komomo is one of the best tsunderes you'll find. And this comes from a person who isn't specially fond of Tsunderes.

FINISHED HOSHIZORA! 7/10 at most. In my opinion: Read Asuho, Komomo, Kosame, Aoi and Chinami's route. Disregard Yume's and Mare's route. There were so much inconsistencies in Yume's route and Mare's route is just lolicon filler, sadly. Now onto Grisaia no Kajitsu

But Persona 4 Golden doesn't have a Fem protag. Can you surpass that? Nah, I'm kidding. Persona 4 is really the best they've done.

On Hoshizora Yume's route Let me tell you they completely RUINED this VN with all this fucking SciFi and fantasy stuff that doesn't even make sense.