Tay Posted April 14, 2013 Author Share Posted April 14, 2013 When our hero protested, Gangamamer flew high into the air, then dove at the hero -- raking his armor with this terrible claws, and biting off the lower half of his left arm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eldin Posted April 14, 2013 Share Posted April 14, 2013 but it's ok, it'll grow back in a few days because he is part lizard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tay Posted April 14, 2013 Author Share Posted April 14, 2013 Couldn't help myself. So, after such laughs and giggles, our hero decided it was time for lunch. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
solidbatman Posted April 14, 2013 Share Posted April 14, 2013 But Gangamamer wasn't just satisfied with the arm of our hero, he hungered for more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tief Blau Posted April 14, 2013 Share Posted April 14, 2013 Knowing he was outclassed as an individual, Gangamanger went to find more allies Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tay Posted April 14, 2013 Author Share Posted April 14, 2013 Indeed, as fate would have it, our hero and the dragon shared a name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eldin Posted April 14, 2013 Share Posted April 14, 2013 that name being their last name, smirphenhoffenheimer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
solidbatman Posted April 15, 2013 Share Posted April 15, 2013 Though all of the hero's friends just called him Manbat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steve Posted April 15, 2013 Share Posted April 15, 2013 Manbat knew straight away who to ask for help, his best friend Tseev and his cute little sister Yumiko were always there to help him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eldin Posted April 15, 2013 Share Posted April 15, 2013 but unbeknownst to tseev or manbat, yumiko was actually none other than the cross-dressing villain yat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
solidbatman Posted April 15, 2013 Share Posted April 15, 2013 But then Batman kidnapped Tseev and Yumiko and delievered them unto Gangamamer for justice knowing that things were about to get really, really moe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tay Posted April 15, 2013 Author Share Posted April 15, 2013 They were eaten and died a permadeath, never to come back ever again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steve Posted April 15, 2013 Share Posted April 15, 2013 A sad end for Manbat and his friends, to die like this, but a new hero shortly risen from the ashes of bones of these 3 unlucky ones, Yat the Undying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mephisto Posted April 15, 2013 Share Posted April 15, 2013 where has this gone... Yat the undying did not deserve his name, since after his reincarnation he quickly died once more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
solidbatman Posted April 15, 2013 Share Posted April 15, 2013 It was at this time, the leaders of the kingdom of Fuwanovel demanded order in the lands and an end to the murdering of heroes. it became a competition to kill each others characters. im not apologizing for starting it either Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mephisto Posted April 15, 2013 Share Posted April 15, 2013 Actually, should we start over since there are so many contradictions? E.G: Gangamanger Manbat goes to find allies.. goes to tsteev and yumiko... then batman kidnaps tsteev and yumiko and delivers them to Gangamanger lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shcboomer Posted April 15, 2013 Share Posted April 15, 2013 In all truth, all of what had happened was only a dream by our real hero... How's that for a restart? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kinghidetora Posted April 15, 2013 Share Posted April 15, 2013 He woke. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steve Posted April 15, 2013 Share Posted April 15, 2013 next to his cute little sister dont you dare to kill another imouto xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kinghidetora Posted April 15, 2013 Share Posted April 15, 2013 "Onii-chan..." she whispered sleepily, covering her soft hair with a pillow, "just five more minutes..." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steve Posted April 15, 2013 Share Posted April 15, 2013 finally its going somewhere xD "There is not much time", he replied. "Get dressed up, I will prepare breakfast" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
solidbatman Posted April 15, 2013 Share Posted April 15, 2013 One sentence Steve. Keep it down to one sentence please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kinghidetora Posted April 15, 2013 Share Posted April 15, 2013 "But onii-chan..." she started, before falling back into a peaceful and very cute slumber. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steve Posted April 15, 2013 Share Posted April 15, 2013 One sentence Steve. Keep it down to one sentence please. it says one line that would be one line in VN as it is just one line with a speech indicator "he replied" (hell if I knew how you call it in english xD) it could be written as a whole with a comma and the "he replied" at the end but this formating suits better as its VN like Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tay Posted April 15, 2013 Author Share Posted April 15, 2013 One sentence sounds right to me. We'll keep it at that from here on. The smell of bacon and eggs soon filled their small house. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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