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Wonderful news, people!
The Remission of Sins has just been released on Steam!
Enjoy this Japanese horror visual novel for 10% off!
And make sure to play it in the language you like more!
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6 minutes ago, Zakamutt said:
People do not generally use "multiple idioms" to mean "multiple-language release" or "multi-language" for short. There is some use of "idiom" to mean "way of speaking / acting" but this is not really used for languages the way the title wants it to be — generally the form used for this meaning is "In the X idiom", for example "In the Renaissance idiom" and we can see here that style or fashion would probably be a better gloss than language. The meaning that would be most obvious to anyone reading, however, is a group of words whose meaning considered as a unit is different from the meanings of each word considered separately (Cambridge dictionary). This is why I used two idioms, one modified, in my initial post as a humorous way of showing my confusion.
Either way, sure, the tl may or may not be good. I suppose we will know in due time.
I changed the title to avoid similar misunderstandings in the future. Thank you for your time.
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4 minutes ago, Zakamutt said:
First you tell me there's some kind of "list" of "idioms" "above", but now you tell me they're not available? I really do not understand what you are trying to say.
To explain my own point on "I can only judge based on what I see", I can certainly see the supported languages on the right, but I can see no screenshots in English to base any judgements of the translation on. As such, the default assumption (now that you say a human did it) would be that they got some Japanese native with half-baked English skills to do it and the the result is going to look like some variation of phoenix drive's illustrious localization.
Okay, maybe not quite that bad. Call me a skeptic though.
Features -> 4th point
That's a list of idioms.
And they're not available because you can't download the game, can you?
Anyway, what I'm trying to say is very simple: you'll be able to play the game in different idioms.
What's so hard to understand?
As for the translator, they hired someone with experience translating Japanese games to English. This is not his first rodeo. But yeah, you won't be able to judge until you play it.
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1 minute ago, Zakamutt said:
Looks the post and Steam page over nope, not seeing any idioms.
I must admit I can only judge quality by what I can see, and all English text available looked like, well, it looks. If this somehow turns out decent, godspeed.
The idioms will be available when the game is available. Right now, it's under review. Two weeks until it's approved and it can be released.
Perhaps you're talking about localization?
And on the store page, you can perfectly see the supported languages on the right.
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1 minute ago, Zakamutt said:
Make the human translators do something about the steam store page description lol
I still don't get what the heck "multiple idioms" means
Working with Japanese devs can be... Painful.
And multiple Idioms means that you'll be able to play in, well, multiple idioms, the ones listed above.
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6 hours ago, Zakamutt said:
Multiple idioms what? Like a headless chicken? Too many machine translators spoil the broth?
Potentially interesting in Japanese I guess
As the post says, the game will be available in English, Japanese, German, Spanish, and Polish.
All of the idioms have been translated by human translators. I've translated the game to Spanish, for instance.
So don't worry, your chicken broth won't be spoiled.
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Overview
The Remission of Sins is a fully-voiced, multi-ending short horror visual novel. Depending on the player’s choice, it branches to 12 different endings.
Features
- Remission’s mysterious story consists of around 7k words (about an hour of gameplay) with multiple endings.
- This game includes 8 character sprites along with 11 images of landscapes and tools.
- The soundtrack is composed of a stunning theme song but it also counts with extensive voice acting in Japanese.
- The game supports English, Japanese, Russian, Spanish, and Polish.
Screenshots
Available on
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On 8/14/2020 at 2:58 AM, Palas said:
Sorry for my own late reply! I don't mind read the raunchier scenes and I'm sure everyone around here has read their fair share of kinky scenes, so I believe it's okay if you post them. But really, it's fine to have a preference for one kind of scene. It's just that making the motivations and feelings on the "other side" just as robust will make them even better.
Don't worry! It's summertime, am I right?
Anyway, if you think it's okay to post such sexually explicit stuff here, I'll go ahead and post it.
But I'll start with something softcore just in case
This is something I wrote some time ago, so the style's a tiny bit different from what it's now.
- Humiliation sex scene: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1HYYeUrM_i4ZL6yPwQd1sONGVbtVUb8bL/view?usp=sharing
- Gay sex scene: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1asM8GhKlBRFnxOzJMwBU8EBAupsTl4g7/view?usp=sharing
I hope you like them!
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On 8/10/2020 at 11:47 PM, waterflame said:
Any chance of a linux version for renpy? While it runs fine gameplaywise in WINE. The audio doesn't play nice.
Hi! First of all, thank you for showing interest. It means a lot to me and my team
Yes, there'll be Linux version for Renpy, but since the team is still rather small, we're focusing on Windows and Mac.
Sorry for the inconvenience!
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KICKSTARTER LINK: https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/thehiddenlevels/cosplay-convention-crisis-0
From the links below you can download a demo and a patch for demo (18+ only!) for it:
STEAM / itch.io / Mirror / Mirror (mac) | 18+: Patch / Mirror (win) | Patch / Mirror (mac)
Cosplay Convention Crisis is a Visual Novel that puts you in the shoes of Jacob Kirby: middling athlete, student, and casual nerd. Guide Kirby over a handful of days across the paths of three strange and powerful women. Think the convention scene is easy? Try to survive magical girls, aliens, robots, femme fatales armed with eldritch artifacts, and convention cafeterias. You might be proven wrong!
Manage your schedule, collect trivia, and try not to die as circumstances spin wildly out of control. Attend panels, acquire merchandise, trade barbs with super-fans, ponder the meaning of life, watch the latest super hit’s trailer, and attempt to romance strange and powerful girls.
Assemble a quirky ensemble costume for a contest and try to get back home!
CCC: It's a great time in the making!
Genre: Sci-Fi, Parody, Comedy, Romance Sim.
Platforms: PC and Consoles. (Xbox One & Series X, PlayStation 4 & 5, Nintendo Switch).
Language: English & Русский.
Launch Price: $19.99
Release date: around September 7, 2021
About 100,000 words of text.
4 or more endings.
3 beautiful girls.
More than 5 backgrounds and 20 CG are in the demo and more are planned!
MAIN MENU THEME: https://soundcloud.com/user-763184136/cosplay-convention-crisis-main-menu
KICKSTARTER LINK: https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/thehiddenlevels/cosplay-convention-crisis-0
- Mr Poltroon, Emi and waterflame
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On 7/13/2020 at 10:15 PM, Palas said:
They all have a graceful quality to them, starting right before the action begins and savoring the ending. I especially like how you always close up each scene with some sort of punchline that indicates more scenes are to come. I imagine the fourth scene was the hardest to write, because a Goo Monster doesn't have that much of a personality, but nevertheless I liked how you built the scene's emotion from terror to some sort of fucked up cumplicity by the end -- that's a little different from the sheer mind break you usually see in scenes like these.
It's interesting that all scenes have the protagonist as the character being seduced, or at least the first character to blush. Even in the second one, Edward is sort of being lured into touching and ogling Ivonne. So I'd like to see how you'd go about writing a scene in which the protagonist actually wants to initiate the action. So, for instance -- how would you write the first scene from Emma's perspective? I'm sure doing it at least as an exercise would help building more intense dynamics.
So take the first scene. I love the game that Emma proposes to John, and I like how all of it happens while he's blindfolded. But although she seems to like it and is described as a dominant, mischievous person, she gives in all too easily to John. Having her actually punish John for failing the third stage in their game would generate tension that would reinvigorate the scene from his and her perspective. All scenes, I believe, would be even better with this kind of exercise.
That said, I really like these. I don't think we see threads like this often, and it's great to have them.
Thank you very much for your comment! (and sorry for my extremely slow reply T_T )
I didn't notice that in my scenes the main character is always seduced or lured into sex. I've read the rest of my scenes and it's like that in most of them! I wasn't aware of it :0
I guess that it's easier for me to write erotic scenes like that. It's hard to explain, but I feel that it's more natural like that. I have a few ones in which the action is driven by the main character, but those have some kinky content and I'm unsure if I can post them here.
I'll definitely work on this in the future. There's always room for improvement, right?
Anyway, once more, thank you very much for your comment! It means a lot to me \_＾▽＾_/
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Hi guys!
I'm Kyoki Chiho, an erotic VN writer that has some NSFW scenes to share!
In order to improve my writing style, I've been practicing quite a lot lately, and since it'd be a waste to let all these scenes go unnoticed, I've decided to post them here!
I posted them on Twitter too (hence the names).
Anyway, have fun!
- Blindfold sex scene: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1WZRpPkEvDw11DrYfsc2XVa0GSJok3KPm/view?usp=sharing
- Public sex scene: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1LvKpqIRex2-hEkchC83HOfoXqPAZTyJK/view?usp=sharing
- Yuri sex scene with reverse pet play: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1nJLir0y5c6PuswTRBXBHMkxBYIPEE5zT/view?usp=sharing
- Tentacle sex scene: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ejG2bUIG8Wt3DZyuhtwrtUSajBWRSDt-/view?usp=sharing
Oh, by the way...
If you want a customized erotic scene, feel free to contact me, either here or on Twitter!
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Nijowari: Where Angels Fall takes places in a not-so-distant dystopian future where the demise of a major international power has made the world tumble, ultimately forcing it to evolve or die.Experience this broken world through the eyes of William and Adeia, survivor and victim of what is now an unforgiving reality. Will they be able to cast some light to the darkness that surrounds them?
Overview
Nijowari: Where Angels Fall revolves around an enticing yet dangerous world presented by two different protagonists, each one with its quirks and complex personality.
William Steele
"I was just an ordinary kid when my world blew up."
William Steele, a young man with a calling and our first main character, discovers that his region is home and that is worth protecting.
Bent on helping his community, he ends up becoming a "fixer", a counselor, sometimes friend, always driven to help people who deserve it.
Adeia Berith
"It's not time to overthink... It's time to enjoy!"
Adeia Berith, our second main character, is a coy, fearful, and innocent newcomer to Nijowari, a strange city with a peculiar society.
Trusting the world she's about to enter is as gentle as her, she's forced to find her way, ultimately discovering a dark reality nobody knew existed.
Along the way, both William and Adeia meet a cast of supporting characters that change their fates, for the better and the worse.
Features- A thriving story around 110k+ words long (from 12 to 16 hours of gameplay)
- 3 different points of view
- 1920x1080 high quality graphics
- 22 unique CGs (some of them animated) with 670+ variations
- 90+ photo-realistic backgrounds with multiple variations
- 16 fully colored characters
- Visual effects such as rain
- A wide variety of sound effects totaling more than 150 sounds
- 75+ original music tracks
- Image gallery, music room, and replay scene functionality
- Fully customizable gameplay
- Achievements, Easter eggs, and more!
Available on
Steam
Itch
GameJolt
You must be 18 years or older to use this software in any way, shape, or form.- Mr Poltroon and Gibberish
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[OPEN][NEGOTIABLE PRICE][FAST DELIVERY] SFW & NSFW Writer For Hire (Experienced)
in Recruitment
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Hello. My name's Kyoki Chiho, and I'm an experienced creative writer very familiar with Ren'Py coding.
I've worked on several projects before and developed my own visual novels.
You can visit my portfolio here: https://kyokichiho.github.io/
Crafting complex plots with heavy character development isn't a problem for me.
I can write comedy scenes along with virtually any topic/theme, including NSFW.
I can write detailed smut scenes, any pairing is good, and I don't have qualms when it comes to fetishes.
My rate would be 7 cents per word, but I am open to negotiating it. This rate includes proofreading and editing. Also, I can make as many changes as required.
Attached to this post, you'll find three erotic scenes and a regular scene that'll serve as a sample. You can find these scenes in my portfolio as well.
Public sex scene:https://drive.google.com/file/d/1LvKpq ... sp=sharing
Yuri sex scene with reverse pet play: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1nJLir0 ... sp=sharing
Humiliation sex scene: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1HYYeUr ... sp=sharing
The Aftermath: https://www.wattpad.com/977636709-the-aftermath
If you're interested or you want to know more, don't hesitate to contact me by email [email protected] or on Discord at kyokichiho
Thank you for your time!
- Some of the projects I've worked for -
Nijowari: Where Angels Fall
Sakura Bunny Girls
Dawnbreaker - Aeon's Reach