Arturia

haha welcome, im surprised to see another one like yusai..Well im not going to make the mistake of asking you to call us Onii-sama and Onee-sama xD..Yusai seems to have caught it.. Anyway Welcome and enjoy the Vn's.

Alright, Well it was just a sugesstion xD anyway cant wait to see how it turns out for him xD.

Wow...Only one guy stands above the rest for me...He was the only character that made me cringe and swear at a character, He really made me want to be their and smack the Sh** out of him... Sugou from SOA...Can not stand the guy...no other character that i have seen was that infuriating.

Its alright Zucco, Well as for my idea of those 2 kids, it was really just a thought and if Okami doesnt want it then its cool.. I think the thought of them role-playing would be ironic when later the group would be reffered to as Black Ronin..Maybe that would make them nostalgic and long for thier childhood friends..In a bit i will rewrite a bit of the first part and then head onto the second.. If there are any other questions about my first part just tell me so i can change it.. Anyway going to get started in a bit.

Hmm i can take a try at it when i can..Although dont focus on me haha, might not be good or might be a bit late for you but i will try it.

haha i see you didnt mention Sachi, Hmm well the only one that seems intristing to me is Michiru i guess the others are alright xD..Well Hope you do well and spend tons of time on Vn this holiday xD.

I could try, but with the word try means that i can draw...but i dont have confidence about my drawings..I tend to do better if i have an example but drawing from my mind tends to be counteractive..

HMm i enjoy those designs there..I feel like that Masked cannibal you have there as a deeper part in the story then you letting on xD.. for some reason from my dialogue and this guy, an idea poped up thinking that one of those 2 kids who dissapeared on the night is him, but that was just an idea i thought xD..anyway ill continue my part 2 in a bit.

haha, i am enjoying it so far, but the character that really stands out to me is Michiru...i just love how she is trying to be a tsundere and the way she acts is hillarious haha..any character caught your eye yet?

haha that was pretty funny xD...I myself am also doing Grisaia, But been busy lately to finish it, hope you enjoy it xD.

It looks great, i jus tfeel that the drop shadow is a bit too much, Maybe lighter would do it better...not sure xD.

Welcome Yuno-San, Great to have ya with us. I don't know if its true but i am pretty sure your the youngest around us xD..haha call us Onee-sama and Onii-sama xD. Jokes aside, i hope you enjoy it here and hope to see more posts from you. Welcome.

Haha, i mostly only done it to one of my signatures before, im sure its someone in this post, of Arturia. one of my earliest signatures and yet i am still proud of myself of doing something like that with no knowledge of how to do most of the things in Photoshop..

wow those are excelent..i love how the characters go out of the Signature, i love doing that to signatures..You seem good at cutting the characters out, what tool you use? i tend to use Pen tool as it seems to be the most acurate even though it takes awhile.

Well in my opinion i would like to see a Valvrave xD..the dead ends and game overs in that game would be intense as well as the amount of girls there are.. but anyway another one i would like is a GoSick Linear Vn..just the story and the decisions you make would be a nice game. Edit : Just wanted to edit saying this marked my 300th post xD..

so wait...the tally so far is 2 Yandere's, 1 Tsundere....and the rest Kuudere's and Dandere's :\...this is the type of thing you can see what type of people get pulled into Vn's xD. Well just my opinion

Ah yes Black Ronins would do just fine...and thanks, i often get told my Dialogue is like forming a poem for some unknown reason.. Haha i thought as much when i made the dialogue of them sounding a bit older, i will try and change it a bit later...In terms of the chan, i just wanted her to seem to have a closer relationship to Mahiro then the others. i will change it then. As for the beggining i was a bit sceptical about having the introduction as the history, but i will add that to the beggining. Thanks for pointing it out, i will get back to it in a bit.

it would be funny if we do xD.

haha thanks xD..we working on it slowly..But ya i think im already in my dere faze, as i have been here for awhile and dont mind "opening up" xD.. but my Kuu/Dan part really only comes out when you see me in person...i have problems with talking to people in person haha..but ya its those two rather then a tsundere or a yandere. xD

Hmm well i guess most people would find it hard to tell what they are, but in my opinion irl im more likely to be a Kuu-dere. or so i thought ill i read that list of Dere's..i am actually a dandere...i usually don't talk apart to people i know. but i guess im kind of a Kuu aswell, dont really show emotion till you know me i guess :\. Edit: My bad, i took the quiz on that Dere page and in the end it tells me im a Kuudere actually xD...but ya i can relate it to..

Hmm, i tend to use "hmm" at the start of my sentences aswell as use the word "Anyway".. I also tend to use the Emoticons :\ and xD... thank god i stoped useing the word "lol" dont know why but dont like it..if i want to show my laughter i use haha... Well as a form of my writing i also tend to capatilize most of my letters at the start of the word..sometimes.

oh ya reminded me of the Opening for Death note both of them aswell as watemote...i enjoy the dark themed openings

ok well, here is part one of chapter one..i underestimated on how long this will be with dialogue..so for now ill put them into parts..Um i already managed to see i may of made a mistake though, the way i worded or the part of speech might seem a bit older then what we wanted them to be..but try imagine them a bit younger xD. that would be the end of DAY1...i know, i think i over did it.. but then again i feel that a bit to little information in the beggining was bad..after this part i plan to get them to go to the cave at night, and then Rouria will attack them at same time..the 2 random kids will go and see what the noise was about, but never returned...and there but will get the rest done soon.. Enjoy. Edit: By the way thanks for that AMV Okami, It was great.

Alright,　good work as usual Okami..i will get to work on first chapter now..I am not perfect either in my english, Like vocabulary, grammer and spelling..but will do my best xD. Edit: Just read the Chapter 3..Really got me on my seat there Okami..Great work...I think i have noticed something..Most of your story is abou 70% narration..i dont see anything wrong with it...but if i were to help with the dialogue im sure the drama and suspense in the story will triple.. and once im done we can go over it and improve it... Can't wait for those names and chapter 4, Keep it up Okami.

i want a waifu :\...(ie Dakimakura xD) anyway, i got to keep my otakuness at bay now so i can save up for course expenses xD.(i know im going against my very way of living xD).