Little Busters! Avatar Group

[seventhfonist425]

In the foreign land of Fuwa, there were four avatar groups. They all lived in... peace? The LB! group, represented by blue were the first to come into light. They went from place to place spreading their ways but eventually they split apart. Not making as much contact as they used to. Separated. The next was the Baccano group. Represented by the white. They were an interesting bunch. However as time passed, every single avatar being used disappeared and the group wasn't seen again. The only memento are the lands that they once owned. The third was the Mekakushi Dan group shown by the yellow and green. At the present, the largest and most well known of the groups. As such they were able to conquer most of the land through conquest alone. Their presence at large. The last is the Kazama Family Avatar group represented by the red. Arguably the oldest of groups but only recently acknowledged as one. Boasting the same numbers as the Mekakushi Dan group, they have a formidable force. However, they don't have a large presence in this world...yet. They keep in their homes just welcoming anyone who stumbles upon their sacred land. But that all changed when the fire nation attacked. the Kazama Family Avatar group attacked.

 

It seems you've forgotten the most important part of the story. Don't worry, I added it for you.

[OriginalRen]

In the foreign land of Fuwa, there were four avatar groups. They all lived in... peace? The LB! group, represented by blue were the first to come into light. They went from place to place spreading their ways but eventually they split apart. Not making as much contact as they used to. Separated. The next was the Baccano group. Represented by the white. They were an interesting bunch. However as time passed, every single avatar being used disappeared and the group wasn't seen again. The only memento are the lands that they once owned. The third was the Mekakushi Dan group shown by the yellow and green. At the present, the largest and most well known of the groups. As such they were able to conquer most of the land through conquest alone. Their presence at large. The last is the Kazama Family Avatar group represented by the red. Arguably the oldest of groups but only recently acknowledged as one. Boasting the same numbers as the Mekakushi Dan group, they have a formidable force. However, they don't have a large presence in this world...yet. They keep in their homes just welcoming anyone who stumbles upon their sacred land. 

 

You missed the part about me being the distant traveler who came to the land and created the origin of the groups. Make sure to include parts about me being amazing and such. K thanks.

[Life]

In the beginning, there was nothing. The land was flat and Bleak. Devoid of anything. One day, a being from another plane of existence. He was the original... He shaped the world, grew something from nothing and people started to think. Eventually he started what is now known as the fours powers of Fuwa. They all lived in... peace? The LB! group, represented by blue were the first to come into light. They went from place to place spreading their ways but eventually they split apart. Not making as much contact as they used to. Separated. The next was the Baccano group. Represented by the white. They were an interesting bunch. However as time passed, every single avatar being used disappeared and the group wasn't seen again. The only memento are the lands that they once owned. The third was the Mekakushi Dan group shown by the yellow and green. At the present, the largest and most well known of the groups. As such they were able to conquer most of the land through conquest alone. Their presence at large. The last is the Kazama Family Avatar group represented by the red. Arguably the oldest of groups but only recently acknowledged as one. Boasting the same numbers as the Mekakushi Dan group, they have a formidable force. However, they don't have a large presence in this world...yet. They keep in their homes just welcoming anyone who stumbles upon their sacred land. But everything changed when the fire nation Kazama Family Avatar group attacked.

 

The story expands... This is going to end up as an essay...

[Aniki]

I think we need a more accurate map.