Deusre

Art looks nice, writing needs work
as a corollary you should have quality of writing both in your story and in your description/marketing/etc

Looks interesting. The art seems good, but we cant really comment on the summary alone.

Produced by MIYU Studio, MIYU is an upcoming commercial episodic kinetic visual novel about depression, mental health awareness, time, space, life and love.
One fateful night you’re walking along the beach a few days before your vacation finishes and you see a girl standing by herself. Not wanting to leave her alone you decide to interact with her. For this one simple action it catches the attention of Yahdeus the God Of Gods, it leads to a domino effect that changes your life forever and also the world. 
An episodic story that expands beyond multiple time and dimension where you must uncover the secrets of the universe and potentially discover a secret that has been kept away from humanity since the beginning of time. 

CHARACTERS:

 
Takeru: A shy but smart young adult who just finished college and has decided to take a break before setting off and finally starting his career as a Counselor. He's known for being shy and curious with knowing everything that there is to life. However, even his close friend Tomoya finds him distant at times. He loves to play games and read manga during his free time. Unbeknownst to everyone, Takeru suffers from depression and anxiety due to his traumatic childhood. 
Miyu: She’s a very sweet girl who wants to do her best in the world and leave her mark on it. However, she’s been raised by an abusive father and mother who constantly verbally abuse her for having mental development issues. There’s also this sense of mystery surrounding her life. Sometimes she hears voices in her head talking to her but the only word she hears is “Yahdeus”. She’s never figured out what it means but has decided to not tell anyone about it. Her hobbies consist of painting, bird watching and playing video games.


FEATURES: 

Kinectic Episodic Novel, 5 hours long


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DEVELOPMENT UPDATES


* Please check back around 3/31/2019 for the next update!



FUTURE PLANS: 

Demo, Kickstarter, Website Episode 2, Patreon for future projects


NOTE:


MIYU is an episodic kinectic visual novel that will be broken up to 5 parts.
The writing for part 1 is around 60% done.
It needs a significant amount of editing and proofreading,
but I’m hoping this story should be released in late July/August.
The character art that is currently displayed is a place holder until future notice when I am able to swap them out for the final character art.
The story will be commercial and should cost around $6.99
For more updates please check this post weekly for weekly updates. 
I am hoping to have a demo done in a month.
Tell me what you think about what is shown so far.
We will soon have a website completed for the project.

Hey there guys! I'm just wondering when do you guys play visual novels? I love playing them when it's late at night with my headphones plugged in. Something about it makes feel more intimate. 

I play them when I have free time irl, which is mostly at night.