[Memories Within: BNB [BxG][BxB(Stretch Goal)][ADULT, DRAMA, ROMANCE, BRANCHING]]

On 02/05/2018 at 9:12 PM, Dergonu said:

First and foremost, you should get someone to look over the promotional material. I saw a number of grammar mistakes, typos etc.

The art is really nice overall, background, sprites and CGs alike.

There isn't too much to go on right now story wise. While what little is here does sound interesting, it's hard to make a real opinion on it, because of the lack of information. So, a little more information about the story would be nice.

You mentioned "gameplay" in the opening statement. Does this mean there is gameplay beyond just reading and choice making, or was this just poor wording?

The title also has "adult". Does the game feature H-scenes, or does this just mean the themes are "adult" like?

Editted accordingly~

[Memories Within: BNB [BxG][BxB(Stretch Goal)][ADULT, DRAMA, ROMANCE, BRANCHING]]

Romance, Comedy, Drama and an Emotional Rollercoaster

Memories Within: BNB is a visual novel with dating elements allowing the player to move about and arrange a day or night out with specific characters in the game.

You play as Ed Murray, a former professional pianist who has left his past life aside after your wife passed away when your daughter was born. 11 years have passed, Claire, your daughter has lived a peaceful life at the farm which your family owned for many generations.

The both of you decided to open the farm and house as a Bed and Breakfast inviting people from different walks of life to enjoy the scenic life.

During this period you will have to entertain your guest and if possible maybe a future Mrs. Murray. Make the right decisions to balance your relationship between your daughter, guest, and the farm.

Genre: Romance, Drama, Comedy  

Romance: B x G  

Rating: 16+  

Features:

Your Choice affects relationships and story
Multiple routes and endings
5 Romanceable Characters (Possible Additional Characters)
Interactive phone and text system for dates
Exploration System
Relationship management between guests
High-Quality Artwork
Partial Voice Acting (Stretch Goal: Full Voice Acting)
Beautiful OST

Height Chart of the Current Characters

BNB Piano Room Interior

Dirt Road to the BNB Entrance

BNB Kitchen Interior

Beach Town's Beach

Banana French Toast

Alpha Demo will be release 10 days before end of Kickstarter.

Our plan to create 4 different wallpaper for our supporters. This is just an example.

We will be approaching Alyx including Bou to help in creating more music hoping to have a new updated version of the Original Sound Track. 

https://soundcloud.com/user-36132053/sets/memories-within

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