[Daitoshokan no Hitsujikai patch out]

6 hours ago, Zakamutt said:

Yes, 'a displeased expression' being translated as 'a strange expression' is something only a true master of translation could avoid. When 'strange' isn't even in the edict definition list for 不機嫌 (probably the tl mistead it as 不思議 instead)

To be fair though, I can imagine myself doing the same at some point were I to fall asleep at the wheel, I just wouldn't do so over 800 times hopefully.

Which is not to say the inaccurate translation might not be fun to read, of course w

Doesn't really change the meaning of the sentence. 

[Daitoshokan no Hitsujikai patch out]

16 hours ago, 1P1A said:

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How about instead of assuming people who play exclusively play English VNs can read Japanese, you explain what the line is supposed to say and where the error is?

In any case, I stand by my assessment. A couple throwaway lines don't result in the entire VN being difficult to understand.