[Looking for feedback on OELVN demo]

Thanks the feedback. It is very helpful, mostly I need to check that the story is conveying what I am going for.   Typing in word is probably a very obvious solution to misspelling, I honestly didn't think fi that for some reason,  

I feel I must mention that the bg music is all from soundimage.org, so it's freely available. 

 

I really hope to just have good enough art to give direction to a real artist. 

 

Though if anyone wants the three d sprite models I can provide them and make put on blendswap. 

[Looking for feedback on OELVN demo]

Hi

I'm hoping to get some feedback on a visual novel demo. It have builds on all pc platforms and android. I do hope to be able to improve the artwork, as it stands now, it's only me working this project. 

Thanks in advance  

 

http://www.pandadeath.com/rio-demo.html

[Renpy Work in Progress]

Hi, this is a work in progress which is a physics-based dating simulator.  I wanted to sort of show what it is like to be a female physics student, be a little educational, and allow you to pursue boys (or allow boys to pursue you depending upon how you play).  I am hoping to get some more feedback on it, on the gameplay and the physics lessons.

 

http://www.pandadeath.com/physics-otome.html

 

Thanks.

[Mannequin - A 2D Character CG Generator]

That seems perfect for all the non-artists.  It is definitely something I would consider.

[Renpy help]

Hi,

I was wondering if anyone could perhaps tell me where I am being dumb.  I want a button to add to a "completion" value, but for the life of me I can not figure out where it is not working.  I have flat out just copied the code from the tutorials trying to make this work:

init python:
    showcompletion= False
    completion = 0
    def display_completion():
        if showcompletion:   
            ui.frame() #This is optional. It adds a frame around the text.
            ui.text("Completion: %d" %completion)
    config.overlay_functions.append(display_completion)

 

my python init for the "completion" value from https://www.renpy.org/wiki/renpy/doc/cookbook/Simple_Onscreen_Inventory

 

and here is the button:

    screen P_tube_options00:
        modal False
        imagebutton:
            xpos 0 ypos 500
            idle "idle.png"
            hover "hover_text.png"
            action [Hide("imagebutton")]
        imagebutton:
            xpos 180 ypos 180
            idle "blank.png"
            hover "hover.png"
            action [Jump("P_tube00_description"), SetVariable("completion",completion+1), SetVariable('T_options00a',True)]
            

This is from https://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=8&t=9412

 

However, whenever I print the "completion" afterward, it is still 0.  If I hard code a $completion+=1 in the main script I get the "completion" counter to increase by one.  However, if I put  SetVariable("completion",completion+=1), or $completion+=1 in the imagebutton tabs, I get an error.

 

I know I am missing something very simple and sorry if it is not explained well.

[Early feedback [original artwork]]

I have since made some less sack-puppet looking people. 

[Early feedback [original artwork]]

Hi.  I have been working on a visual novel.  I'm not an artist though and unfortunately do have any money to hire an artist so I am a bit stuck having to do the art myself.  I decided to go with rendering scenes with three models and was hoping to get an idea if the artwork is passable or not.  However, I can't figured out how to put the pictures in the post.  Sorry (believe me, I know it is stupid and I only have myself to blame, but the only thing I can do is apologise for the inconvenience, and I do know that there is a simple solution, sorry again).  I put in a link (http://pandadeath.com/annes-book) (I really don't know if that is against some kind of internet protocol manners, if it is then I am sorry for that and maybe one day will figure out how to put the picture in the post.  

Thanks.

[EVN.moe A place for english visual novels]

I echo the same question.  It would be nice to be able to get feedback as the novel is developing for me at least).

[Hello, another new person]

Thanks.  Sounds good to me.  It is nice to see how many active people there are here.  

Also yeah, I didn't mean to say that Persona and Life is Strange are visual novels, I just heard about visual novels through the comparison.

[Hello, another new person]

Hi, I am new to this forum.  I was looking for a group of active visual novel fans and developers.  I am somewhat new to visual novels in general, though I have played games like the persona series or life is strange.  I mostly became interested in the genre through hearing about visual novels increasingly on video game podcasts and then finding a connection through learning python and pygame programming.  I am mostly interested in the diversity of visual novels, from those that play like a choose your own adventure story to dating sims to rpgs.