FSZ

Thanks Dowulf, twdark, I think your explanation was really good. Also I finished reading the rest of Majikoi and other than a really rough patch in that route, everything else is great. You guys did an amazing job and we're really lucky to have you. I'm going to find all the incorrect lines from that route, screenshot them, and provide recommended fixes for them. Other than that, the only work I think you guys should consider is harmonizing "Kri" and "Crit". It's sort of jarring that her nickname is consistent in the prologue and 2.5 routes but then changes. But you guys did an amazing job and after seeing the rest of your work, it's all very good. I'm happy to help out with Post-Production stuff if you need a volunteer, but I'm really confident Majikoi S is going to be great. You guys are awesome and its great to see that.

I guess my main question is sort of related to whether or not there are going to be changes to the editing/QC process. While going through the Miyako route there are some lines that a good process would have caught and I think while doing the translation for S you might want to check in and make sure that you're confident with editors/QC. Even the best editors and translators get tired/sloppy/etc, it's pretty human. Specific lines at issue: - Many issues with plural/non-plurals towards the beginning of the route. There's a series of exchanges where the word "equipments" is used over and over again (at least 7 times). It is not an actual word so it makes the translation look really childish. - Specific line "They're saying whatever they want...!! These premium ears can hear their talks." That's something editors or QC should see immediately (the part at issue is "can hear their talks"). - Wrong Word "Could you right a more feasible dream?" Right should be write. I think you guys are doing a lot of great work so spending a bit more time on polishing it would be good.