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  1. Support My Patreon (Making AMAZING Games!) http://www.patreon.com/smartapplegames As a preview of our first visual novel, here's a romantic scene from "I Drove All Night." Ophelia wakes up stunned. Ophelia: My God! You caught me off-guard, Augustus! Augustus: Sorry. Let’s just say I had to sneak my way in. He notices the bandage on her wrist. Augustus: You alright? Did you get hurt or something? Ophelia becomes uneasy, tries to shift the topic to something else. Ophelia: I’m fine, just a little accident, that’s all. Augustus: A little accident? Looks to me like – She leaps out of bed and stands before him. Ophelia: Augustus, do you like to dance? Augustus: Not really. Never really been any good at it, to be honest. At least none of that fancy shenanigan or anything like that. Ophelia: You mean ballroom dancing? Augustus: Yeah. Ballroom dancing, waltzing, ballet dancing. Anything you have to get all dressed up to do, isn’t my thing. Ophelia: Well, what else is there? Augustus: Oh, there’s a lot of dancing you never heard of. There’s the dancing we do in my neighborhood. Ophelia: Teach me. Augustus: You sure you’re ready for it? I gotta warn you, with this kind of dancing, you can get, you know, in the mood for something a little beyond. Ophelia’s face glows with a naughty grin. Ophelia: That settles it. Teach me! http://www.patreon.com/smartapplegames
  2. Naricssu* that's the type of story I like. Heart ripping. and they gave it away for free...
  3. All are interesting favorites. From the ones I looked seemed like CG intro played a part in creating atmosphere for a EPIC story, then go through typical anime dialogue. I can't afford animation in my game. It's very expensive. Not worth it for indie studio doing OELVN's. What was interesting what some of your favorites, only had one character. In my 2nd project im mixing art styles, to show the duality of the two most common western styles. Inspired by my forum post on here fuwa. and it's a comedy, so far its very funny.
  4. Hi, I'm working on the script to my 2nd Visual Novel game, it's a comedy, so I had to make it a Kinetic Story. This one, I'm going to keep it very simple, one background, 4 characters, and a very low price on iOS app store and google play. I'd like to know what are some of your favorite Kinetic VN's?
  5. The problem with One Day In London is, from there steam page, they got no reviews, so I take it they got no sales. Its been out for a year without reviews? But i say the art is good. Yes, simple is best.
  6. i posted this on facebook too, and end result A, is the winner. Why? 1) Fits Visual Novel Format whereas B is more suitable for graphic novels 2) Sell More Copies 3) Simplicity Thank you all for commenting, even if most of you like B. It's a risky if I went B, and I'm no gambler.
  7. dont you think it be off for visual novel format? i mean B is more graphic novel not visual novel...
  8. Which of these pictures do you like better? For my first visual novel game. Please leave comments thank! A OR B A) Disney Style B) Comic Book Style
  9. Hi, so while waiting for anime art assets from my highly talented artist, i'm pre-planning my next visual novel game. My first VN story is complete, the professional UI is done, and since I dont like doing nothing, must be productive in some way. I want to ask all of you, which of these stories would you pay to play? Rank each one based on whether you would pay to play it or not. Like 1-10. 1 being first pick, 10 being last pick. You also get my own personal preference. (1) I DROVE ALL NIGHT (Story Complete), is an indie Romantic Visual Novel, about two Lovers and their long distance relationship. Augustus is a member of a Notorious Gang, while Ophelia is part of High Society. Can the two from two different worlds keep their love alive? INSPIRED BY THE COUNT OF MONTE CRISTO, SHAWSHANK REDEMPTION, AND ROMEO & JULIET. (2) SURVIVE, is an Epic Survival Visual Novel, about a 13 year old boy who is deserted on an island after his plane crashes on his way to Japan for the holidays. INSPIRED BY ROBINSON CRUSOE, LORD OF THE FLIES, AND CAST AWAY. (5) SUMMER TIME, is a light-hearted Romantic Comedy, about a boy who meets a girl during summer vacation at the ocean-side along the beach. The problem is the boy, is actually a girl dressed as a boy... (3) REALITY, is a Sci-fi Thriller Visual Novel, about a not so distant future, where a popular Augmented Reality game, around the world, has players kill or be killed, and Death means more than just Game Over. (6) OPHELIA ALPHA LOLITA, is a Sci-fi Romantic Visual Novel, about the first Ai, a young girl, named Ophelia and the romantic relationship she has with her inventor. (4) SHE SINS IN PEACE, is a Erotic Romance Novel, about a billionaire and his concubine. A colorful life of Domination and submission where the Devil is a Religion. (9) HAPPY HOLIDAY, is a Comedy, about family and friendships. The wild and bizarre experiences everyone goes through on their way home for the holidays. (8) A CASUAL SMILE, is a Young Adult Visual Novel, about casual relationships. The life of a college student and how she pays for tuition to an Ivy League School by becoming a Hooker. (7) I AM KING, is Erotic Fantasy Visual Novel, about a King, a tyrant, who excites the flesh, and lures peasants and nobles, to his private estate, for deviant service. (10) CARTOON, is a Comedy, about artists with no talent, and those who are like Walt Disney. I plan on completing all of these VN stories just not sure in what order. That's why I'm here to ask you folk? I'm the Director, Producer, Writer, and Programmer. >>ANIME CHARACTER DESIGNS ARE BASED ON *A-LIST* CELEBRITIES<< =-) Each VN will have a Mini-game where you guess who the A-List Celebrity is. A little novelty to lessen the seriousness of the stories.
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