Nomad

O HAI, first time poster, long time VN/Writing enthusiast (and lurker on these here forums). Today ladies, gentlemen and cat folk I humbly ask you to take a quick read of the prologue for a novel I have started writing tentatively called phalanx. My aim with phalanx is to create a world which contains realistic levels of Sci-Fi aswell as deep character arcs and interaction that will appeal to audiences of all kinds and just generally be a world anyone can get lost in when they feel the need to send their brain somewhere else. Direct post to the prologue (2887 words): https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KSke3ninS94bG76gZAL560UrX7qFUqkSXtmxcG4K_fQ/edit?usp=sharing Link to my new tumblr with a small FAQ aswell as the prologue link again: http://phalanxsocial.tumblr.com/ Welcoming any and all feedback, preferably in english or Nyan's.