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What are some already made characters? I'm making a manga and this is my group so far of ocs.

 

The current cast of SUH with pictures and backgrounds! 
 
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Gein.
 
15 aggressive half goat boy, teammate of Kaiser.
 
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Joey Hollin
 
Despite being 18 he has the build and facial hair of a man, his right arm is also shorter than his left! Short temper, he will easily cause conflict out of anger or for his entertainment. He’s enjoys killing, war, and work - he is mean spirited and manages to hold his grudges to the Gods.
 
Getting knocked down was a constant event in his life, but he shows no mercy in battle going for the kill at every second.
 
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Mrs. Mal 
 
A teacher of Earth. Duellant Academy for oils useage.
 
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Feuer E. Kaiser
 
Past memory in pieces, she manged to escape her Nations fate of death at age 5 wounded - she found her way to her new home, the Wind Nation. Not remembering much of anything, she solely focuses on school and sports, despite her early upbringings she is very warm hearted and opened. She is not a team player - but not by choice! If her teammates are in danger she’ll rush to help.
 
Her gloves and ankle handles have Rapid Fire Oil Gears for material arts movements, she also has a sword that she rarely pulls out.
 
Many know her as the Nation Hopper, trading nations is never an option. But apparently she isn’t the only Nation Hopper.
 
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Po Allen 
 
Writing, drawing, and laughing this is what Po spent of her time doing, day in and out - but laughing about what? Laughing about death, her favorite subject to study. Completely human, she uses her writing and drawings to help her in a fight - with oil their able to come to life. 
 
Her family dead, she spent most of time in a military training camp for kids, later on enrolling to Dullant Academy. Despite her loving death she is a go lucky girl, til you touch anything of hers without her permission.
 
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An elf who studies magic greatly, nothing more is known rather than he is 16.
 
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Sora & Tora Zwillinge
 
Tora ( Left ) & Sora (Right) -
 
Two twins who are in complete sync with one another despite being of a different species, Sora was born Human/Elf & Tora full Human! Sora hates more humans and like most nature elf’s she enjoys roasted nature oils & plants. It’s the only way to maintain her patience around humans, she lovers her mother & sister to death even though they’re humans.
 
Tora is greatly ashamed that she was born human, her hate for the Gods grow stronger by each days end. Sora is a natural hunter, armed with bow and hammer. Tora has always been too gentle and loving, she being armed with a Oils Fan is perfect for her. Both of them live on school campus due to the demand of their parents, wanting both of them to move up in school faster.
 
They have 3 older siblings waiting for the two.
 
Both aged 14, originally in 7th tier class they moved up in the ranks the last two years of schooling making the teachers around them notice and honor their skills.
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Your drawing are uneven. By which I mean they are asymmetrical. Straight more confident lines make the drawings look much better without doing much to change them. If you make the lines faster it will make your drawing look more powerful and deliberate.

Sorry if I sound a bit like a douche but there is almost no way to give criticism/advice without sounding like it. Especially if you are writing rather than talking.

 

Ps I like the colour schemes.

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