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Any help would be appreciated Krill..If you good or bad..Even if you struggle you can ask a fellow Fuwanovelist to help xD.

Glad to have ya with us then against us Krill...Once we get our story and Genres and such details, we will move onto planning out the entire story..

Then we will move to Paneling out our Manga and then adding each part such as Text and Art xD..Even if you struggle with color, Its the lines and style that make the art xD.

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You are realy good, whell it isn't anime/manga style but still it is very very good.

thanx i personaly think im not very talented but everyone tells me i am just to harsh a judge of my self so blah.  i can do anime and manga style id just need to take the time to practice since its been a while 

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It's finally done. This is only the set-up to the story as well. All of the main characters have yet to be introduced. And remember, a lot of the fine details can be changed, like the HQ location, the names, things like that.

Spoilers for the huge size.

The year is 2123. The world was once a peaceful place, completely devoid of war and threats of terror. This was all thanks to the work of Total Liberation. Some saw this as a good thing, no longer having to live with the knowledge that they could be killed in some random act of terrorism or violence. Others however, knew about the other side of Total Liberation’s dealings. Secret raids, destruction, killings, and cover-ups, all in attempt to maintain control and order.

History

In the year 2019, all major powers of the world, the U.S, the U.K, China, Russia, France, Japan, and Germany joined together and formed the form T.L. the perfect government. In the following years, the surrounding countries began to slowly fall in with T.L. to the point of total control of the world. T.L. Used any means they deemed necessary to ensure that the world remained peaceful and that the citizens of Earth could live free of fear. They began by imposing hefty restrictions on driver’s licenses, travel, and power usage. Next they imposed outright bans on all firearms, non-medicinal drugs, tobacco products, and alcohol, and those who were caught with these contraband items were fined, imprisoned, or even executed depending on the level of the offense and if the person in question was a repeat offender. Finally, T.L. issued a worldwide curfew to all citizens, with some being allowed outside during the curfew under certain circumstances, less emphasis on general education, and more emphasis on job oriented education.

In the beginning, many opposed these new laws and restrictions through means of public outcry and protest. This however, did not stop T.L.. Those who were caught protesting were made examples of, to show others who may think protesting would be a good idea what is to come from such ideas. Others used a less conventional method to fight T.L.. Violent revolt. Many targeted the T.L. command centers, to cut off connection of their area to the main headquarters in what used to be London, England. T.L. however was prepared for such actions, and ensured that each command center was heavily secured and safe from any form of attack. After many failed attempts to bring an end to T.L., those who still wished to fight did so in different ways. Some began to open up schools in their homes to teach children not only general education, but the ways of the world before T.L. came to power, and ways that they too can resist.. Others worked to find ways of travel that could not be detected while the curfew was in place. Sewer systems that had been overlooked and were not under surveillance, trap doors and false walls in homes that would allow travel to other locations, any possible means of movement that could be used at night while curfew was in place.

 

By 2033 Total Liberation perfected space travel and began sending starships out to terraform and colonize planets in the habitable zone of other stars in the solar system. T.L. saw this as a way to expand their empire off of Earth and to the stars. What they did not expect was for this to be the very trigger to their fall from power and eventual defeat.

The planet Terramia was the first planet to be completely colonized in 2081. The residents of Terramia had more freedom from T.L. then those on Earth, but they were not free. All the laws and restrictions imposed on Earth were still in effect on Terramia, but they were not able to be as heavily enforced, and there were still Total Liberation command centers, however contact with headquarters was rare, and security was not as heavy due to lack of resources from the expansion.

 

Most of the original settlers on Terramia were resistors, and had seen this as a way to escape T.L., but they had never expected for T.L. to have such a weak grasp on Terramia. By the time they realized that there was a chance to free themselves, they had grown too old. But they had resolved themselves to teach their children just what T.L. had done on Earth, how Earth was like, and finally, they taught their children ways to rise up and fight against T.L. to liberate Terramia. Many of the settlers had connections with supply ships that would come from Earth periodically and were able to obtain a substantial stockpile of weapons and ammunition over the years.

 

Finally in 2107, the citizens of Terramia began their assault against T.L. to free their home. The revolution lasted five long, bloody years. Both sides suffered severe casualties. T.L. had the Terramian’s substantially outnumbered and had expect to quell the rebellion within the first year. They were gravely mistaken. Due to overexpansion, T.L troops were under-armed and had a short supply of ammo, as well as under maintenanced security systems. However, there was one other factor the contributed to the defeat of T.L. on Terramia. To T.L., Terramia was just another plot of land under their control. But to the children of the settlers that came from Earth, this was their home. The only home that they had ever known, and they would fight to their last, dying breath to make it free. Finally, in 2112, Total Liberation fled Terramia. The revolution had been won. The next seven was spent focusing to restoring all that was destroyed during the revolution, and establishing a new government that was oriented towards the people. And at the same time, Terramia began to rebuild and reinforce their military, which now included many weapons and starships left behind by T.L. And finally, on September 14, 2119, the one hundredth anniversary of T.L’s rise to power, Terramia officially declared war against the tyrannical Total Liberation.

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Wow i can see a lot of effort in that and also theres a lot you could do with just that history..As i was reading certain plots and character types were coming to me...Such as The main character is first generation Terramia and he grew up with multiple people whom he calls friends..But he was forced apart from his one friend due to him being connected to T.L.. Years past and war has arrived..(Of course it would seem that this style is your typical Friend=Enemy type)..

 

I dont know but this style of story shouts out to me Mecha xD..I guess i love mecha to much..Anyway if this is sci/fi and if we going to incorporate action..We need to figure out what type of battles and how will they be fought..

 

Great story Stan..

 

If anyone else has some ideas or storys, Keep them coming..Well maybe a few more and then we can move onto the next step.

Keep thinking more about your story Stan..Even if we dont use it you should pursue this story, It has great potential. 

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That little story actually stemmed from a thought about what if all the members of Fuwanovel were party of a military, like the navy. Aaeru would be the Fleet Admiral and be in control of all from the flagship, All the mods would be Admirals and each have control of a fleet of ships, and then each ship in each fleet would have one of the regular members be the captains. that idea just went further with the idea of starships because space battles!

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Seems interesting :)

and great story stan.

 

i could try help draw on idea's as it comes to that point.

(i draw alot. but im not really good so)

but im extremly bad when it comes to story ideas etc. 

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That would be great Emi..All we have to wait for now is a few more ideas on story's.. if not we can go with a mixture between the previous stories..and then we need to plan on what to do next..

So far for a manga we need artist, so if possible could you post some drawing's or anything Emi?

As for the art we need atleast 3 people..1-2 on Characters and 1-2 on Backgrounds.

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mm unfortunately the images are not loading for me :\..

Well so far a few have liked to do things such as small art and backgrounds and so we still need character designs..

When we get out characters and character details ready i would like to see what your style of that character would be Emi..

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Hmm well since we can not wait for much longer in terms of geting a general story ready, i am setting a date to when we will decide on relative plots and storys that others have shared.. Once we got the rough story that we would like to do, I will set some Writers and artists so that we can practice the style of story and art..

Then over some time we will get our first few chapters in of our story and possibly post a new topic to share our Great work xD.

I will think about the details while im at work so Keep an eye open.

 

Edit: i think i will edit the first post so that its easier to keep track of details..

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o yea btw if iam gonna help with background art can you tell me before hand what kind of background you would like?

 

 

We didn't even decided witch story would we go with yet, we have to decide at least that before knowing wath kind of background will we need.

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Ok well i couldnt think during work so i guess i might just make the deadline for the New years..That way we can enjoy our holidays and get some time for a great story..and then we got at least a whole year...I dont want to set a deadline for the whole project because in my opinion, we will finish when we finish xD.

 

At the end of the year i will read through the posts and try and decide who will take up which position.. If possible i dont want to leave anyone behind but we will see how it goes.

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Hmm ideas on a New Action/Sci fi story.
 
This is a Rough story i though of..Tell me what you think..
 
 

Genres shall consist of Action, Sci/fi, Drama, Romance and maybe some other genre at a later stage..
 
In my opinion i would like the story to consist of at least 5-7 Main characters..
and quiet a few Side characters..
Either 3-4 Girl Characters and 2-3 Guys..
Im not focusing on Romance but i would like some drama later on in the Manga surrounding that group. and example i thought of is Gundam Seed.
 
The sort of Action im thinking of is...Futuristic militery..
The world is split into 3 Factions..Rouria, Midoristal and Raepista.
The three factions have each there own militery power and each are powerful at there own streangths..
2 of the Main girl Characters are in Rouria(The main Story's Faction.)
the other 2 are each in the other factions..
The story might seem like your average(Good/Neutral/Bad), Although it is like that, The main Story Rouria are Seemingly bad..THere really is no GOod or bad when they think of there own Decisions.
Rouria and Raepista have always been on bad terms and have always seeked each others Land and power.
While Midoristal has kept it to themselves, Hiding in the shadows.
The History of the story starts with the group of 7, Having Lived together and went to school..When war broke out in the year Ei-89 they went there seperate ways.(for information sake, THey were 12 years old..)
 
5 Years later in the year Ei-94.. War continues.. 
With no Knowledge of there childhood friends..The (3 of 7, 2 girls 1 guy) Has joined the Recon Force of there Country's Militery after they finished There basic training.
(This is only the general Story and still need to change if needed)
The type of things we would have to discuss would be how they would enter the military, why and what happens afterwards.
 
Since the theme is futuristic, The World has changed into more technological and scientific. The era of Machinary and stealth fighting is upon the world.  And as such, The Recon Force the new three man team will begin there first stealth mission into Raepista..
(ok from here onwards would need some planning and thinking but the average ending of the first chaptor would be like this)
 
So far i have no Dialogue for the story but will plan it out if nessocery.
While deep into the enemy's land, on an island ofshore near the Capital of Reapista.
The three childhood friends of the recon were recently discovered because of (Still need a name) had tripped and hit the alarm switch.
(drawing would show them behind a corner peering around to see the guards positioning themselves.)
But when they about to turn around to head the other way..
The person they least expected to see was standing there with a Pistol to one of the girls heads.
That person was the oldest and felt like the leader...among the childhood friends.
 

 
This is what you would call a Rough of a rough draft of my story..
I really just thought about it and wrote it down..Unlike my "Into the Night" story this had no planning.. But i would like to do the planning as a team.
Anyway i would like to ask a Staff member if they can add a Poll to the TOpic if its possible..
That way we can decide what 2 stories we can decide to work with..Mix and match and come up with an excelent manga we can be proud in..
 
(By the way among the 7 Friends..3 are in Rouria, 2 in Reapista and the other 2 are in Midoristal)

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Hmm ideas on a New Action/Sci fi story.
 
This is a Rough story i though of..Tell me what you think..
 
 

Genres shall consist of Action, Sci/fi, Drama, Romance and maybe some other genre at a later stage..
 
In my opinion i would like the story to consist of at least 5-7 Main characters..
and quiet a few Side characters..
Either 3-4 Girl Characters and 2-3 Guys..
Im not focusing on Romance but i would like some drama later on in the Manga surrounding that group. and example i thought of is Gundam Seed.
 
The sort of Action im thinking of is...Futuristic militery..
The world is split into 3 Factions..Rouria, Midoristal and Raepista.
The three factions have each there own militery power and each are powerful at there own streangths..
2 of the Main girl Characters are in Rouria(The main Story's Faction.)
the other 2 are each in the other factions..
The story might seem like your average(Good/Neutral/Bad), Although it is like that, The main Story Rouria are Seemingly bad..THere really is no GOod or bad when they think of there own Decisions.
Rouria and Raepista have always been on bad terms and have always seeked each others Land and power.
While Midoristal has kept it to themselves, Hiding in the shadows.
The History of the story starts with the group of 7, Having Lived together and went to school..When war broke out in the year Ei-89 they went there seperate ways.(for information sake, THey were 12 years old..)
 
5 Years later in the year Ei-94.. War continues.. 
With no Knowledge of there childhood friends..The (3 of 7, 2 girls 1 guy) Has joined the Recon Force of there Country's Militery after they finished There basic training.
(This is only the general Story and still need to change if needed)
The type of things we would have to discuss would be how they would enter the military, why and what happens afterwards.
 
Since the theme is futuristic, The World has changed into more technological and scientific. The era of Machinary and stealth fighting is upon the world.  And as such, The Recon Force the new three man team will begin there first stealth mission into Raepista..
(ok from here onwards would need some planning and thinking but the average ending of the first chaptor would be like this)
 
So far i have no Dialogue for the story but will plan it out if nessocery.
While deep into the enemy's land, on an island ofshore near the Capital of Reapista.
The three childhood friends of the recon were recently discovered because of (Still need a name) had tripped and hit the alarm switch.
(drawing would show them behind a corner peering around to see the guards positioning themselves.)
But when they about to turn around to head the other way..
The person they least expected to see was standing there with a Pistol to one of the girls heads.
That person was the oldest and felt like the leader...among the childhood friends.
 

 
This is what you would call a Rough of a rough draft of my story..
I really just thought about it and wrote it down..Unlike my "Into the Night" story this had no planning.. But i would like to do the planning as a team.
Anyway i would like to ask a Staff member if they can add a Poll to the TOpic if its possible..
That way we can decide what 2 stories we can decide to work with..Mix and match and come up with an excelent manga we can be proud in..
 
(By the way among the 7 Friends..3 are in Rouria, 2 in Reapista and the other 2 are in Midoristal)

 

 

Since you are the OP of this topic you can add a Poll yourself, go into your first post edit>Use full editor>Menage topic poll.

 

As for your story I think it needs alot of editing, details added but I do like the plot and I think we could make it into a great story/Manga.

 

About your idea to choose 2 stories and mixed them, I think it would be better to choose 1 main to go with and then if we can we add things from other one onto it as a side plot or back story as I think that mixing 2 stories equally would ruin both stories since our stories are very different.

 

EDIT: You might want to create poll with multiple choices allow for thouse who can't decide between 2 stories (just check Allow multiple choice).

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That sounds fantastic. And I know how you feel when it comes to dialogue, I'm pretty well next to useless when writing out dialogue.

 

Edit - Sorry about the double post. Could a mod delete this one

Edited by Stanleys

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I like the plot and the military setting, i think it can work but don't turn it into mecha :P

 

Yea I am against mecha too, I don't dislike mecha but you need alot of experience and professional writing skills to make a good mecha story without turning it into a kids' story.

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