ittaku Posted September 23, 2022 Share Posted September 23, 2022 Yuuna's route passed the playthrough with a few edits. I zipped through Tonoko's route since I recently proofread it but that seems fine too. Still have Miyabi and Shino's route to play through. Novel21, Ottes and rimvydasm 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ittaku Posted September 26, 2022 Share Posted September 26, 2022 Yuuna and Miyabi routes playthrough proofreads complete. No more outstanding bugs are obvious. I've committed quite a few proofread typo fixes, and alas there will probably be quite a few that still make it to the final, but overall it's pretty solid now. Tonoko's route was proofread in the lead up to this so it doesn't need proofreading. A quick play-test shows it works fine to the end. That leaves only doing a playthrough proofread of Shino's route, and I can then finalise the patch for release. That should hopefully be done within a week, barring finding any new bugs. Ottes, Novel21 and rimvydasm 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
littleshogun Posted September 28, 2022 Share Posted September 28, 2022 Good luck on the proofread for Shino's route there. ittaku 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ittaku Posted October 4, 2022 Share Posted October 4, 2022 The proofread is now complete. The final changes are all in. I'm now preparing the patch and testing it, so release is imminent. Novel21, Dreamysyu and rimvydasm 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ittaku Posted October 4, 2022 Share Posted October 4, 2022 Patch created and tested locally and passes all my tests, getting our programmer to check it. rimvydasm and Novel21 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Featured Comment ittaku Posted October 4, 2022 Featured Comment Share Posted October 4, 2022 And here it is. HataVNI, juliodion_12345, Dreamysyu and 3 others 3 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rimvydasm Posted October 4, 2022 Share Posted October 4, 2022 5 minutes ago, ittaku said: And here it is. I'm still blocked from posting on the other subreddit, so r/vns it is. Thank your for your work! ittaku 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HataVNI Posted October 4, 2022 Share Posted October 4, 2022 8 minutes ago, ittaku said: And here it is. I'm still blocked from posting on the other subreddit, so r/vns it is. You're linking to a sus site in that post even though it is just a patch. Are you sure r/vns allows it? Maybe you should upload the patch someone else or in a google drive? Anyways, big thanks for finishing this thing. Many people will probably appreciate and play it. Edit: The link links straight to the file and not to the site so I think it should be ok.... Consider an url shortener of sorts maybe. rimvydasm 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Novel21 Posted October 4, 2022 Share Posted October 4, 2022 Congrats with release patch and I'm going to play VN. It's 2 remained route not important since it's not translated? I understand which you guys didn't translated 2 remained route in English. I'm really looking forward to play this VN. ittaku 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ittaku Posted October 4, 2022 Share Posted October 4, 2022 21 minutes ago, Novel21 said: Congrats with release patch and I'm going to play VN. It's 2 remained route not important since it's not translated? I understand which you guys didn't translated 2 remained route in English. I'm really looking forward to play this VN. The 2 routes are not that good. It's explained in the announcement post. Novel21 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
juliodion_12345 Posted October 4, 2022 Share Posted October 4, 2022 Congratulations on the release ittaku 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hubb2001 Posted October 4, 2022 Share Posted October 4, 2022 Congrats on the release Ittaku! While it's the end of your fanTL era I'm sure people will be excited for what you have coming up officially . ittaku 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duckery Posted October 4, 2022 Share Posted October 4, 2022 Congrats on the release, been following the updates for a while and it is inspiring to see it released. ittaku 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ittaku Posted October 4, 2022 Share Posted October 4, 2022 Thanks all. Hope you enjoy it, it's a truly beautiful set of stories. HataVNI, juliodion_12345 and rimvydasm 1 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pomelo Posted October 4, 2022 Share Posted October 4, 2022 It's finally released! I feel pretty emotional about this, since it was my first ever editing job. I'm so grateful to both VS and Ittaku for letting me work on this project and allowing me to get my foot into the industry. (I doubt I would've had my current job if I hadn't worked on this and met the people I've met through it.) To recap, I worked on the prologue, the main school common branch, and Miyabi's route. Unfortunately, due to time constraints (and the fact that I worked very slowly), I wasn't able to work on Tonoko's route, but I'm sure it'll still be great! I also want to thank Marche100 for helping me out by editing the branch school common route, Yuuna's route, and Shino's route. I know he did a really solid job on those! Anyway, I hope you guys enjoy it! I've been really looking forward to reading Yuuna's story. Novel21, VirginSmasher, Duckery and 2 others 4 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HataVNI Posted October 4, 2022 Share Posted October 4, 2022 20 minutes ago, Pomelo said: It's finally released! I feel pretty emotional about this, since it was my first ever editing job. I'm so grateful to both VS and Ittaku for letting me work on this project and allowing me to get my foot into the industry. (I doubt I would've had my current job if I hadn't worked on this and met the people I've met through it.) To recap, I worked on the prologue, the main school common branch, and Miyabi's route. Unfortunately, due to time constraints (and the fact that I worked very slowly), I wasn't able to work on Tonoko's route, but I'm sure it'll still be great! I also want to thank Marche100 for helping me out by editing the branch school common route, Yuuna's route, and Shino's route. I know he did a really solid job on those! Anyway, I hope you guys enjoy it! I've been really looking forward to reading Yuuna's story. Oh hiya Pomelo! Fancy seeing you here! Great you helped on this and great that it helped you into the Industry. Since I know where you work now would you DM me a smol image of your company logo you are affiliated with so I can add the flair to your name? Would be much appreciated! Congratz for the release anyways! ittaku 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
littleshogun Posted October 5, 2022 Share Posted October 5, 2022 (edited) While I can see that you didn't want to work on the remaining two routes (And you already explaining the reason several time), I also understand that some may still have some regret on those two untranslated routes (Even if one of the untranslated route contained 7 to 10 sex scenes which to say is mentally taxing to translate). Still congratulation in regard of the release even though it's just partially translated here, and I hope many people would be interested to play this old Pulltop VN seeing that Pulltop themselves probably won't even be interested to localize it (It's not like I want them to localize it though, because it's pretty clear that they'll cut the sex scenes anyway). Edited October 6, 2022 by littleshogun Novel21 and HataVNI 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riku Posted October 5, 2022 Share Posted October 5, 2022 (edited) The VN's worth is Miyabi's route. As long as it's translated, everything is fine. Like, seriously, the route is just so well structured and Miyabi is such a good character (+Liida!). I'm glad people will be able to play it! Special mention to Shino who has one of the most memorable and romantic H-scene I've ever read. Still remember her dialogue to this day, 5 years later. Now the question is: should I replay Miyabi route in English? Edited October 5, 2022 by Riku ittaku 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ittaku Posted October 5, 2022 Share Posted October 5, 2022 13 minutes ago, Riku said: The VN's worth is Miyabi's route. As long as it's translated, everything is fine. Like, seriously, the route is just so well structured and Miyabi is such a good character (+Liida!). I'm glad people will be able to play it! Special mention to Shino who has one of the most memorable and romantic H-scene I've ever read. Still remember her dialogue to this day, 5 years later. Now the question is: should I replay Miyabi route in English? Miyabi's is a great route, but Lida also shines in it, alas suffering from the lack of her own route. I cried the most in Shino's route though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riku Posted October 5, 2022 Share Posted October 5, 2022 Yeah, it's a shame she doesn't get her own route. But because Miyabi and her are similar to Theia and Ruth from Rokujouma no Shinryakusha!? (light novel from the same writer) my head canon is that he ends with both of them. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ittaku Posted October 10, 2022 Share Posted October 10, 2022 It seems people have misunderstood my reasons for leaving 2 routes out of the translation. It wasn't just because I couldn't find another translator, it's because those routes are really average compared to the wonderful routes that I was happy to translate. If they were good, I would have just translated them myself. In my opinion, the game is better without them. adamstan 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Narcosis Posted October 11, 2022 Share Posted October 11, 2022 (edited) 2 hours ago, ittaku said: On 10/10/2022 at 6:39 AM, ittaku said: It seems people have misunderstood my reasons for leaving 2 routes out of the translation. It wasn't just because I couldn't find another translator, it's because those routes are really average compared to the wonderful routes that I was happy to translate. If they were good, I would have just translated them myself. In my opinion, the game is better without them. People have the right to speak against a fan translation, where fan translator's sole decision upon not translating said routes conveys to arbitrary fan elitism. A good translator translates everything - as it was meant to be - so people can experience the entirety, both good and bad and deduce their own opinions. Omitting the bad parts is basically manipulating the fanbase to build a faux image of a game in the vein of a person who translated it. I personally find this kind of behaviour - regardless of initial good intentions - incredibly deplorable and hurtful towards the original creators; it's one thing to have opinions and another to push them forcefully upon others. In other words - who do you think you are to decide what's in the best interest of other fans? Edited October 11, 2022 by Narcosis Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ittaku Posted October 11, 2022 Share Posted October 11, 2022 46 minutes ago, Narcosis said: People have the right to speak against a fan translation, where fan translator's sole decision upon not translating said routes conveys to arbitrary fan elitism. A good translator translates everything - as it was meant to be - so people can experience the entirety, both good and bad and deduce their own opinions. Omitting the bad parts is basically manipulating the fanbase to build a faux image of a game in the vein of a person who translated it. I personally find this kind of behaviour - regardless of initial good intentions - incredibly deplorable and hurtful towards the original creators; it's one thing to have opinions and another to push them forcefully upon others. In other words - who do you think you are to decide what's in the best interest of other fans? I'm not. I'm the only person who could be bothered translating this game so I get the right to choose to translate whatever I want, and express what I like about it or not since that's my opinion. I am not obliged to do any fucking thing at all as a fan translator. You can take it or leave it. Dreamysyu 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Narcosis Posted October 11, 2022 Share Posted October 11, 2022 3 minutes ago, ittaku said: I'm not. I'm the only person who could be bothered translating this game so I get the right to choose to translate whatever I want, and express what I like about it or not since that's my opinion. I am not obliged to do any fucking thing at all as a fan translator. You can take it or leave it. And if I paid you, would you? Nice attitude, by the way. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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