Sharing My Prototype

[Guest]

So it's been a while that I'm making this Visual Novel RpgMaker game and it's still a prototype, but I think I will share it to you guys\gals\other anyway 'cause I would like to hear your opinion 'bout it.

So the ideia is to create a Multiple Route Mystery game, inspired in Vns like Corpse Party, with elements from other visual novels and horror games, the protagonsit would be a trans girl named Ana that studies in a university (the setting). Of course there are multiple routes, some that connect to the major plot and some that are their own story, also each character would have six endings with a invisible relationship meter similar to Tsukihime, the endings would be a True Ending, A Good Ending, A Normal Ending, A Bad Ending, A Fake Ending and a Extra Ending that it's unlocked after getting the first five endings, there are out-of -route endings that are Special Endings, also there are both Male and Female "Love interests" and one of them is a trans guy. 

Here are some pics from sprites that I made:

Spoiler

(Ana, the protagonist, she has a "solo route" which talks about her backstory.)

 

(Ross the Trans Guy that I mentioned, he is supposed to be Ana's Osananajimi or somefin like that, he's route is unlocked after beating Ana's Solo and Marla's route, he's connected to the major plot.)

 

(Carlos, Ana's friend, his route connects to the major plot, he also have a crush on other love interest (Eric) and with you aren't in his route he can end up with him)

 

(Eric, also Ana's friend, his route connects to the major plot)

 

(Clevis, my friend's idea of a character, he's supposed to be a bit tsunderish, he goes to Ana's university to investigate somefin, his route connects to the major plot.)

 

(Frederic, Ana's classmate, he has a crush on her and is also directly related to her past, so his route connects to the major plot, he can also end up with one of the love interests (Mikhael).

 

(Marla, Ana's Osananajimi, the idea is that you unlock her route after beating Ana's Solo Route since she's connected to Ana's past, also she's supposed to be demisexual.)

 

(Mikhael, a strange guy who appears just so happens to be there, his a Dorodere (Aka seems like a deredere but hides somefin about himself) type, he can end up with Frederic with you're not on his route, also his route is not related to the major plot.)

 

(Sophie, a Kuudere-ish type of girl, she's supposed to have a strange facination with sex even though she's asexual, her route is not related to the major plot, and my idea for her route is to be very philosophical in a way.)

 

(Tod\Ted, his route is not connected to the major plot, there's not much about him, As I'm still planning stuff.)

And that's it, what do you guys\gals\other think? 

Edited June 20, 2017 by Guest

[Novel21]

I sound like amazing game and I'm looking forward to play the game when it comes out

I loved the plot as well and I'm quite fan of mystery games althrough I'm not much fan of horror games

[Guest]

2 minutes ago, Novel21 said:

I sound like amazing game and I'm looking forward to play the game when it comes out

I loved the plot as well and I'm quite fan of mystery games althrough I'm not much fan of horror games

Thanks! The idea is that each route have a different pursuer, but the focus will be on the narative, so the majority of the game will be read only with some action sections.