Naoe Posted May 10, 2016 Share Posted May 10, 2016 I wrote a bit of something for a VN i'm doing. Before I even continue. I would like someone to take a look at it. Tell what I could improve and stuff like that. I'll send a message to you with a doc link to my script. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaguya Posted May 10, 2016 Share Posted May 10, 2016 I'm by no means a good writer, but I could take a look at it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makudomi Posted May 10, 2016 Share Posted May 10, 2016 Indie VN devs 'gotta stick together. Send it over if you want. Naoe 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dionysus42 Posted May 13, 2016 Share Posted May 13, 2016 Also send me a copy if you'd like. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
URV Posted May 13, 2016 Share Posted May 13, 2016 I certainly wouldn't consider myself a good writer, given that I hardly ever succeed at writing more than a few pages. Regardless, I do enjoy providing feedback, whether it is related to grammar, writing style or the story itself. I'd be interested in taking a look as well, if that's alright. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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