Yuuko Posted April 1, 2016 Share Posted April 1, 2016 6 minutes ago, Arcadeotic said: One question Mitch died earlier, yet still appeared later in the chapter, even though generals will revive next week, not instantaneously Why is this? Because Derg forgot his own rules? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
greenshadow622 Posted April 1, 2016 Share Posted April 1, 2016 Fite me 1v1, kiriri! I dare you! \ / Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arcadeotic Posted April 1, 2016 Share Posted April 1, 2016 5 minutes ago, Kiriririri said: Because Derg forgot his own rules? Sounds like Derg alright Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yuuko Posted April 1, 2016 Share Posted April 1, 2016 1 minute ago, greenshadow622 said: Fite me 1v1, kiriri! I dare you! \ / greenshadow622, Dergonu and 12kami 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dergonu Posted April 1, 2016 Author Share Posted April 1, 2016 13 minutes ago, Arcadeotic said: One question Mitch died earlier, yet still appeared later in the chapter, even though generals will revive next week, not instantaneously Why is this? He was ressurected by Nosebleed Since he was picked again the the RNG rolls, I had to bring him back right away. Kaguya does make a comment about it in one part Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nebjula Posted April 1, 2016 Share Posted April 1, 2016 Holy shit, I actually killed someone and didn't die horribly. I can rest in piece, knowing that I stomped Velo into the dirt (nothing personal) and got one step higher up in the food chain. Dergonu 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dergonu Posted April 1, 2016 Author Share Posted April 1, 2016 @Flutterz __________________________________________________________________________________ List of currently remaining members!! #Team Nosebleed: Members, Mitchhamilton (- 1 life) , Kiriririri - (1 life) , Satsuki , Valmore , Deep Blue (-1 life) , Nebjula , kingdomcome #Team Down: Members, Tiagofvarela (- 1 life) , Babiker , Maxel , Fred the Barber , Nohman , Totodile , FinalChaos , Kawasumi , Flutterz , Turnip Sensei #Team Kaguya: Members, Dergonu , Nimbus, Gijimu, Greenshadow622 (- 1 life) , Eclipsed, Zebhra , Duyy , Jade __________________________________________________________________________________ Will add this to the thread and latest chapter as well Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr Poltroon Posted April 1, 2016 Share Posted April 1, 2016 1 hour ago, Arcadeotic said: 'Twas fun till it lasted Until it lasted... What? The RNG could only curse us so much... Eventually there'd be so few of us the statistics would become our ally! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fred the Barber Posted April 1, 2016 Share Posted April 1, 2016 I don't think that's how the Law of Small Numbers works. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingdomcome Posted April 1, 2016 Share Posted April 1, 2016 3 T.Nosebleed vs 3 T.Kaguya on the open field. Our whole team comes out alive. Team Kaguya better luck next time. Kiriri get a damn weapon. Dergonu 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yuuko Posted April 1, 2016 Share Posted April 1, 2016 5 minutes ago, kingdomcome said: Kiriri get a damn weapon. Love is the most powerful force on earth and it's most efficiently delivered through hands~ <3 12kami and kingdomcome 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dergonu Posted April 1, 2016 Author Share Posted April 1, 2016 Tell you what Kiri, I'll give you a stuffed loli that you can use to slap people. kingdomcome 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yuuko Posted April 1, 2016 Share Posted April 1, 2016 Just now, Dergonu said: Tell you what Kiri, I'll give you a stuffed loli that you can use to slap people. Give me a stuffed loli and I will go behind a tree and gyehehehe. Kawasumi 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zebhra Posted April 1, 2016 Share Posted April 1, 2016 I find it a bit ironical what first blood spilled on a team Kaguya was VirginSmasher Oh and i see what you did there...now all generals have just 1 life 4 hours ago, Dergonu said: Don't worry though, we will totally come back from this! All hail #Team Kaguya! No worries, we are all well-trained elite soldiers...noone will fail Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nimbus Posted April 1, 2016 Share Posted April 1, 2016 NO! Not Arc I'll avenge you my friend. I'll kill Taigo and make him suffer for it. Then I'm finishing off Mitch. He and his cohorts will pay for their crimes against Lord Kaguya! Dergonu 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mitchhamilton Posted April 1, 2016 Share Posted April 1, 2016 27 minutes ago, Nimbus said: NO! Not Arc I'll avenge you my friend. I'll kill Taigo and make him suffer for it. Then I'm finishing off Mitch. He and his cohorts will pay for their crimes against Lord Kaguya! Spoiler Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nimbus Posted April 1, 2016 Share Posted April 1, 2016 2 minutes ago, mitchhamilton said: Hide contents Spoiler mitchhamilton 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arcadeotic Posted April 2, 2016 Share Posted April 2, 2016 5 hours ago, Nimbus said: NO! Not Arc I'll avenge you my friend. I'll kill Taigo and make him suffer for it. Then I'm finishing off Mitch. He and his cohorts will pay for their crimes against Lord Kaguya! Rip me indeed You have to finish the fight in my stead Bring honor to my grave and to Lord Kaguya Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
babiker Posted April 2, 2016 Share Posted April 2, 2016 Well, at least we won this RNG fiesta this time. RIP team Kaguya Also, I feel like it was a little too long this time, I found it very hard to read every single exchange. I'd recommend you add more group fights, rather than individual or fights with only a few members, in order to shorten it. But nice writing as always~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr Poltroon Posted April 2, 2016 Share Posted April 2, 2016 22 hours ago, Fred the Barber said: I don't think that's how the Law of Small Numbers works. Take these random numbers. 25 people. 10 Kaguya, 10 Down, 5 Nosebleed. The RNG plays. It has 10/25 chance of hitting team down. This continues until it's 9/24, 8/23, 7/22, 6/21, 5/20 and so on. As more of our members fall, the less the chance we're hit again. Kaguya's becomes 10/24, 10/23, 10/22, 10/21, 10/20. I don't doubt I may have committed a fallacy, but I'll need you to point it out to me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dergonu Posted April 2, 2016 Author Share Posted April 2, 2016 7 minutes ago, babiker said: Well, at least we won this RNG fiesta this time. RIP team Kaguya Also, I feel like it was a little too long this time, I found it very hard to read every single exchange. I'd recommend you add more group fights, rather than individual or fights with only a few members, in order to shorten it. But nice writing as always~ Thanks for the feedback, I am actually planning on getting a small poll out so I can figure out exactly how I should keep the structure going forward. The current chapter was just above 6k words, where as chapter 1 was 4,3k words. Going to start writing up the questions now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dergonu Posted April 2, 2016 Author Share Posted April 2, 2016 I have made a poll so that I can imrpove the structure of the fanfic for the next weeks. You can vote here: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dergonu Posted April 3, 2016 Author Share Posted April 3, 2016 Ok so I have gotten some good feedback, and I will write the next chapter with all of this in mind If you still want to give me some feedback on the fanfic, just comment here. Oh but do make sure you do it in caps lock so it's obvious that you are mad at me for being horrible at writing. Thank you. Zebhra 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duyy Posted April 3, 2016 Share Posted April 3, 2016 Oh good, some of us will become girls.... Can't wait to see how that turns out. kingdomcome and Dergonu 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zebhra Posted April 4, 2016 Share Posted April 4, 2016 15 hours ago, Dergonu said: you still want to give me some feedback on the fanfic, just comment here. TEAM NOSEBLEED IS TOO STRONK! NERF!!!!111ELEVEN WHERE IS MAH RICHES!! TEAM KAGUYA NEED A BIGGER CASTLE SO I COULD STUFF MORE CUTE GIRLS IN IT! GIEF MORE CUTE GRILLS!!!11 ALL HAIL KAGUYA SAMA! \ / Dergonu 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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