CrotakuShinobi Posted March 6, 2016 Share Posted March 6, 2016 This is based on a book I wrote. I already have everything planed out. I just need someone skilled to make it into a VN. If you are interested contact me via e-mail. The e-mail is in my info. Lookin foward to it. You can also buy the book here: https://www.shopmybooks.com/BE/en/book/mia-angela-maroh-1/albion-tournament-wars-1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deep Blue Posted March 6, 2016 Share Posted March 6, 2016 Welcome to fuwa, wish you the very best with your vn and I hope you can find the team to create it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrotakuShinobi Posted March 6, 2016 Author Share Posted March 6, 2016 1 minute ago, Deep Blue said: Welcome to fuwa, wish you the very best with your vn and I hope you can find the team to create it Thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arcadeotic Posted March 6, 2016 Share Posted March 6, 2016 Hm, that's intruiging. First of all, new user, welcome Secondöy, I myslef am not interested in this project, but you might want to give a better description about your story Good luck Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrotakuShinobi Posted March 6, 2016 Author Share Posted March 6, 2016 Story summary: The story is set in Neo Tokyo. A battle called the Tournament Wars or TW takes place. The main character is a summoned spirit Arthur Pendragon. His master, Morgana, is the main heroine. The VN is focused on their romance and Arthurs past. There are also battle scenes and interesting side characters. ヤミハナ 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rose Posted March 6, 2016 Share Posted March 6, 2016 Maybe you should try lemmasoft, they probably have more writers than we do. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tahu157 Posted March 6, 2016 Share Posted March 6, 2016 I apologize for the negative comment, but this seems like a nearly verbatim clone of Fate/Stay Night. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrotakuShinobi Posted March 6, 2016 Author Share Posted March 6, 2016 2 hours ago, tahu157 said: I apologize for the negative comment, but this seems like a nearly verbatim clone of Fate/Stay Night. Haha. That is because FSN inspired me. But trust me it may seen like a clone at first but later on you get a real plot twist. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OriginalRen Posted March 6, 2016 Share Posted March 6, 2016 I recommend giving your book a free trial for a limited amount of time. In my opinion, your limited description of the book and the amount of pages (roughly 130 of actual story) does not warrant a $15 price range, more so $15 without shipping included. Seeing how you structured the actual paragraphs, the actual length of the book could be read in less than an hour, and that's for the average reader no less. Honestly, the near carbon copy of a story, including the names being used in the description, does not sit well with me. After reading the previews, this book borders on plagiarism, and you charging money for is a very dangerous road to take. Be careful, because that crime is extremely serious. That being said, I wish you the best and hope it all works out! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkZedge Posted March 7, 2016 Share Posted March 7, 2016 Welcome to Fuwa and best of luck with your project.. i think you'll be able to find a suitable team to work with around here..many talented people around to ask for help too Hope to see you around and best of luck again Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dergonu Posted March 7, 2016 Share Posted March 7, 2016 15 hours ago, OriginalRen said: I recommend giving your book a free trial for a limited amount of time. In my opinion, your limited description of the book and the amount of pages (roughly 130 of actual story) does not warrant a $15 price range, more so $15 without shipping included. Seeing how you structured the actual paragraphs, the actual length of the book could be read in less than an hour, and that's for the average reader no less. That being said, I wish you the best and hope it all works out! I have to say I agree to this, especially the price for the amount of content. It simply doesn´t seem that justified. It is also difficult to know much about the story based off simply that short summary, and the little information one can get from the pages available in the preview. Still, best of luck on your project! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrotakuShinobi Posted March 7, 2016 Author Share Posted March 7, 2016 How much do you think the price of my book should be then? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zodai Posted March 7, 2016 Share Posted March 7, 2016 Honestly, it's very difficult to sell someone on a new author w/o some example of their writing. Give us a sample to judge from because concepts are actually cheap. If you already have a complete story though, you should be able to find a team to get it done with more easiy. Just expect to be putting a lot of editing in as well, even if it's already out there in this form. If the writing itself impresses then the people you're looking for should be willing to have faith. What's your wordcount? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrotakuShinobi Posted March 8, 2016 Author Share Posted March 8, 2016 16 hours ago, Zodai said: Honestly, it's very difficult to sell someone on a new author w/o some example of their writing. Give us a sample to judge from because concepts are actually cheap. If you already have a complete story though, you should be able to find a team to get it done with more easiy. Just expect to be putting a lot of editing in as well, even if it's already out there in this form. If the writing itself impresses then the people you're looking for should be willing to have faith. What's your wordcount? The wordcount of my story is 17130 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DEVGRU_P Posted March 9, 2016 Share Posted March 9, 2016 13 hours ago, CrotakuShinobi said: The wordcount of my story is 17130 That's not novel length, even novella. "In contemporary usage, the term short story most often refers to a work of fiction no shorter than 1,000 and no longer than 20,000 words." https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Short_story Novellas are 20,001-40,000 words or so. With a novel being anything more than that. Our Visual Novel is about 50,000 words (all routes) and can be read through in a few hours. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dergonu Posted March 9, 2016 Share Posted March 9, 2016 18 hours ago, CrotakuShinobi said: The wordcount of my story is 17130 On 7. mars 2016 at 8:53 PM, CrotakuShinobi said: How much do you think the price of my book should be then? I´d say maybe around half. For instance, the book I recently finished came out at about 46k words, with 139 pages. It seems you have a lot of paragraphs in the text, if it ends up being that long with that word count. (This is of course not a comment on the quality. It might still be very well written!) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrotakuShinobi Posted March 11, 2016 Author Share Posted March 11, 2016 Some of my friends read my book and said that its very good and that it would make a nice VN Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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