Mr Poltroon

Oh yeah I don't think I've actually stated my route/heroine preferences   

Character: Haruka > Rin > Komari/Mio/Kud > Kurugaya
Route: Rin > Haruka > Mio > Kurugaya > Komari > Kud


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If we were to throw Ecstasy into the mix,

Haruka > Saya > Rin > Komari/Mio/Kud/Kanata > Kurugaya > Sasasasa-salami

Edit: @TiagofVerela for the record, every time I'm about to respond to what you say I end up remembering your signature and.. yeah, end up not responding xD

Edit2: Hehe, sorry, just my attempt at being a troll ^^; I purposely spelt your username the same way Tay did in the Board Moderator thread :3

New Episode!
 

He did. It was incredibly successful. It was no ordinary 'dislike' either, it took a whole swag of points away from my overall rating. I encourage him to express his... displeasure more often. Against me. Cause I'm a fan of people having the... freedom to uh... express themselves 

Gotta say, I don't have the foggiest idea about the VN itself, your talent in translating/editing, translation speed, or any of that stuff.
 
But damnit, you have an extremely pretty site and project page with slidy lines and numbers that go up and I want to see more.

Here's something important.
People don't generally like to pay for products they don't feel are well polished. From what little I saw on the trailer and on the steam page, the writing seems to have various spelling and grammatical mistakes. It's by no means gibberish, but it's hardly the best English I've ever seen.
I think it's quite readable, but you might want to ask some people to read and spot the mistakes for you. Some editors if you will. 
 
Otherwise, this looks pretty good. I may or may not be playing it pretty soon. 
 
Edit: Actually, given it's a kinetic novel, even I should be able to help decently at spotting and fixing spelling mistakes. So if you do go ahead and do that, I can help.

Hello VN readers,
I'd like to introduce you my home-made visual novel done with a little indie team, Snow Light.
First of all, I don't like to disappoint, so don't expect an super-hyper-badass graphic quality as we can see in very professionnal works.
There is one artist in this work (me) not a whole team, it's not a complain but I think it have to be told

Sooo,
 
Snow Light is a Kinetic Novel, who propose some point-view choice (a few).  The game takes place in a close futuristic world where nations are living in a fragile peace, military conflicts have become commonplace since the scarcity of first resources and the rise of private armies.    You'll follow a professional of espionage missions, Snow, and will travel in various parts of the globe such as Turkmenistan, Russia or England. 

Click to see the game gallery   Snow Light Feature :  Story divide in 5 chapters, with more than 30 000 words dialogue length (~2h lengh) Anime inspired Graphic Style, CG based narration Intense action scene rythmed by Quick-Time Event Unique story arc, with some viewpoints changes 19 music tracks composed by two great composers, Petteri SAINIO and Christoph RAUCH   The story is linked to the on-going indie series "Dragon and Weed : Origins",events are chronologically between episodes 22 and 42 (chapters 51 to 71 for the 'paper' version), but you don't need to read the series to understand Snow Light narration.  
 
You can download the game on STEAM*
 
(*) : Or if you have no money, google told than you can download it some others plateforms, but if someone ask I didn't say anything/

I don't care of how you will have the game, but if you play to, I'd be very glad to have so feedback about no matter if you like or not the game.
I plan to do other Visual Novel and it's important to me, and my team to know what is good and can be improved.
 
Have a good read

 

The way she talked is great too! Fue? And how she says.... Totally dunno how to spell the romaji, "it's alright"

I might edit it/make another one later since I'm not really satisfied with this.
 
Edit: I think that the Fuwanovel's logo looks a bit pale in comparison to the rest of image. So here is the second version:

I'm pretty sure he explained the logic.

re: that line: It's... kinda weird, yeah. Should be more like, "Yamato-kun from the house of Naoe told me to hold back using eye contact." Though that phrasing still needs some work; it's too stilted for Kazuko...
 
 
Touma uses both "Naoe-san" and "Naoe-kun." Tadakatsu uses Naoe. Mayo uses Naoe-chan. Chika uses Naocchi. Chris goes for "Naoe Yamato" on occasion. Probably lots of others I'm not thinking of off the top of my head.

In other news, I've finished checking Moro's route; it's in Ouraibaa's hands now.

Y'all VN companies gotta stop spoiling my shizzle. I know you only got a handful of CGs for each route, stop acting like you can go around throwing them all over the place.

Anyone who shows up in this thread not expecting to get spoiled deserves to get spoiled. Actually, sounds like the kinda thing Funyarinpa would do.

My favourite characters are Hinata, Gundam, Mikan and Ibuki. My opinions may have changed since I last played it.
Stray Cat would know.

I think at the end of the day it is better people were truthful as it gives you a real view of how things are going. It would not be helpful if people had just said yes to pander. It's important to have accurate data.

Anyone who shows up in this thread not expecting to get spoiled deserves to get spoiled. Actually, sounds like the kinda thing Funyarinpa would do.

My favourite characters are Hinata, Gundam, Mikan and Ibuki. My opinions may have changed since I last played it.
Stray Cat would know.

I've decided on the route order - Yukie, Momoyo, Chris, Miyako, Wanko. Now I just hope that Miyako patch is released by the time I complete Chris's route.
 
I just started Yukie's route.

That hat she's wearing, it looks like a brown, flat, Millenium Falcon.
 

You're telling me the trial which is set up to be the last one would appear to be awesome?
You have to be joking. I can't believe such baseless nonsense.

You're telling me the trial which is set up to be the last one would appear to be awesome?
You have to be joking. I can't believe such baseless nonsense.

I have no such issues.

I submit. You are correct.

I submit. You are correct.

The sarcasm was entirely necessary, actually.