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19 hours ago, tahu157 said:

Wow, lo leí completamente mal, lo siento.

 

 

 

 

 

eso fue vergonzoso

don't problem, what is your opinion in itself

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8 hours ago, Astolfic said:

Aunque la parte del luchador profesional suena prometedora, parece que ambas ideas son recicladas del mencionado "chico coquetea en la escuela secundaria". Misma idea, diferentes escenarios. No obstante, te deseo la mejor de las suertes.

that may be true, but the approach is different, since he is not in school, and the women that he meets are from the world of wrestling, in addition to the fact that the protagonist must train to become a wrestler star, and he also has to deal with family problems beyond his control

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12 hours ago, tahu157 said:

Your character wants to fuck girls, or he wants to fuck /with/ girls? Those are two very different motivations.

Flirt exactly

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[LEEWARD Episode 1 It's now available!!!]

Hi people, I wanted to share the game that I have finished after many months of work

It's paid, and it is not a visual novel, but you have to start with something

I hope you like it, or that you share it. Cheers

 

 

LEEWARD EPISODE 1

A little girl named Wendy Fisher, from a fishers family, will be involved in an adventure in the four seas looking for her missing father, that's sound generic... but so it will be... she will bump with quirky and colorful characters with various personalities and lives, who try to help her or not in her adventure. Help Wendy in her crossing solving puzzles, dilemmas, problems, making friends or enemies and much more. or that's what we have to say to make it sound interesting. An adventure full of black and absurd humor, strange places, like its inhabitants  A game that is inspired by those graphic adventures of yesteryear and the popular culture

  

    

Buy the game  https://esterasbros.itch.io/leeward-episode-1

Episode 1 has an approximate duration of between 3 to 4 hours

 

All content copyright to Lautaro J. Esteras 2022 ©

[I'm working on in a Dating Game...]

hi folks, i'm in an early stage of development, i'm working on a dating sim game with some details of life simulation and humorous adventure ... the simple plot is of a teenager in the last year of high school who moves to a small town and live adventures there, work, fall in love, moments +18 haha, among other things ... I would like to know your opinions about what things you like about these games, ideas, recommendations, etc ... I await your answers ...

[I want your opinion on a concept]

I would love to know what you think about a question I have

I am working on a project that mixes funny things, humor, high school, many crazy and funny people and stories with black humor like south park...

I would like to know what kind of dating level would you like to have?  something light with simple references or something more explicit?

I wait your opinions

[Opinions to start a new project]

Hace 16 horas, Chronopolis dijo:

No sé, depende de la ejecución. Elija lo que desee para hacer más. Tú eres quien va a pasar cientos de horas en eso.

1. Esta es la idea más única, aunque el lector (incluido yo mismo) no va a ser un fanático de la lucha libre para empezar, por lo que desea alguna forma de que el lector se involucre (posiblemente un personaje principal con el que se pueda relacionar). Además, ¿qué tipo de juego?

2. ¿Por qué el personaje medieval está en cyberpunk, es ese tipo de mundo o se teletransportaron? ¿Cuál es el arco de la historia? El problema de tener un escenario / fantasía cyberpunk es que es difícil reducirlo a una historia de longitud razonable. Este VN me viene a la mente: https://store.steampowered.com/app/1047010/Synergia/ Si la historia es más como un adorno para el juego, entonces tal vez no importe tanto. 

Swords x Cyberpunk es genial, pero sí ... se reduce a si el juego es divertido, o cuál será la historia que te enganchará. Lo que publicaste ni siquiera es una idea real ... es solo un escenario + que dice que es un juego de rol de simulación.

Como desarrollador de juegos, creo que si estás creando un juego, la mayor preocupación es que el juego sea divertido, ya que si no lo es, podrías haber creado una VN que no sea de juego con mejor libertad / ritmo y mucho menos trabajo. (También es posible tener minijuegos que no ocupen gran parte del VN)

 

Gracias por su opinión..... answering your questions=

1-the game would be based more on improving physically and characteristics, to have better results in the matches... in addition to interacting with characters and your fans

2-I would not be a medieval character in the future... if not that the medieval fantasy world evolved so much that now it uses cyberpunk style technology.. imagine the lord of the rings, but hundreds of years later in the future

[Opinions to start a new project]

Hi guys i'm new to the forum and visual novels in general.. I've really played very few
I am an illustrator, writer and programmer, I am working on a graphic adventure style video game, being the first commercial game for me...
and i'm finishing it.... if you wanna check it = https://esterasbros.itch.io/leeward-episode-1
But that is not important

I want to do a second project experimenting with visual novels, and I decided to register in these types of forums to be able to get feedback and be able to do something better, and obviously meet people who are interested in my project and want to contribute things like a community of fans

I'd like to ask you a simple question to get started=
I have several ideas to make several visual novels, but I want to start with two that I have... Which of these two ideas is more cool to you?

1- You are a young wrestler that is making your way in the world of the indies while improving your character and meeting people, relationships, etc., until you reach the maximum wrestling company and you are a few years in it (more content could be added with updates)

2- You are a medieval fantasy character in a cyberpunk style dystopian future, where you improve your character, characteristics, etc., you meet people, and you fight in dungeons, secondary stories etc.

I would like to know your opinion, so... I'll begin to create the bases of this new project with your opinions

more late i'll determine deeper elements of the story, gameplay, monetization, or will it be a free game based on patreon support, idk

I await your opinions!!!