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Thanks for the warm welcome ^_^ I think there are a lot variety of OELVNs now, also a lot of creators! Also do you have any idea, is there any website that specifically reviews OELVN or VNs in general through submission? It might be a good start to seek feedback.

Thanks for the feedback! It's true that both the writer and me aren't native speaker of English, but I already asked someone else to proofread it. Granted because this is a free project (unpaid), I can't really ask professional help.

Hewwo! I just recently learn to make visual novel (OELVN) and I hope this is the good place to share my works and get some feedback. My newly released project is ALLBLACK Phase 1, and while it's not really your typical VN, I really appreciate if you interested to read it I am also freelance artist in the free time while not working in any projects, feel free to reach me on Discord if you need me! Thanks before!

ALLBLACK Phase 1 is a visual novel adapted from light novel with the same title. Follow the journey of the amnesiac and seemingly abnormal "Theodore Quentin" as he uncovers his identity while escaping from the people who wants him at all cost... Steam | Itch | Google Play Languages: English, Russian (more localization on the future!) Genre: Action, thriller, psychological, sci-fi Platform: PC (Windows, Mac, Linux), Android --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Synopsis: "What will you see when you are dead?" Last night, I woke up without being able to remember what had happened to me, as if I had just been born yesterday. But no one could also prove that "the past" is real. It's possible that I just "existed" now, and my memories were just fabricated. This is me right now, lost, confused, and don't know where to go. Maybe I was just being born last night, but somehow, "my past" still haunted me. I can't remember it, but they said I am the one responsible who dropped the helicopter. If only I could remember something. I can't even remember my own name. But why?! Even though I can't remember my own name, but I can remember the one who made me like this?! It's not only that....I'm not even sure if I'm a human being. Not after what happened today. I can stop the rain. No, it's not like I can change rain to sunny weather...I make thousand droplets of rain stop falling, hanging it in the air like defying the gravitation around me. .... Far from the bottom of my heart, I'm sure that I have to end all of this. My name is ............., let me tell you my story. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Features: 60.000 words, divided into 6 chapters Can switch the language halfway 8 achievements (Steam only) Bonus contents such as concept sketch from original light novel --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Team: Original work: fsc VN adaptation: TNR Russian translator: Blinded by Justice Voice actor: Josh Saitogami & Ronix VA