Wolfhound1730

We've decided to cancel this project. We feel the subject matter is too dark for us to properly capture. We have come up with a new idea that we can explore, that won't offend anyone or butcher any history

I've been humbled by much of the criticism I've received. Sometimes the best criticism isn't all that positive. So, I've decided to change the story quite a bit. First off, there will be no romantic subplots. That would be extremely rude to people who lived through that period, to boil their suffering to a mere romantic subplot, so we will remove that completely. The Jewish Girl, named Anna, will not be a doctor, but she will be hiding and you discover her on a patrol (MC joins the Nazis to track down the machine, by the way). And the Nazi girl, named Emily, will turn in Anna, and you have to save her from death. The machine is called "Die Glocke", by the way. It was a theorized Nazi time machine. MC will have to uncover the machine before they can take over the world. I want to make this as historically accurate as possible, at least in some respects, so we need to make sure we're not doing that is inaccurate. And we want to be respectful to the real people who suffered in this time period. I might want to create a fake history inspired by Nazi Germany, but I need to think about that for a while. Once again, thank you all.

My friend and I have been writing a historical VN for the past few weeks. The story is focused around an ex-military guy discovering a secret Nazi time machine. He decides to go back in time to stop the Nazis from using the machine to take over the world in the future. The game would focus on him and his interactions in the town, as well as figuring out who invented the time machine, and destroying it before anyone can use it to cause harm. The game would focus less on the time travel and more on Nazi Germany. There would be a few girls, one being a Jewish nurse, who is being forced to heal Nazi soldiers, or else she will be killed. And a Nazi Secretary, who will be shown why her ideology is fundamentally flawed, and that she should learn to love instead of hate. We wanted to make a few endings with different outcomes for the characters. In the True Route, he stays back in 1945 with the girl who you have more "Points" for. I really don't want to say too much about the endings, because I intend to sell the game for $5 USD on Steam. I hope that our idea would be good enough to release our first game. We intend on making the game around 3 hours long. The routes will play effect only in the last half hour or so. I'm aware this is light on details, if anyone wants to hear about more, I will discuss it more. If you want to criticize the idea, please leave it in the thread. We appreciate all the reviews we get, good or bad. If there are any good artists willing to support us, we'd really love to hear from you. We are broke, but we want to run a Kickstarter Campaign, so we would pay you once that has been done. If you are not comfortable with that, we understand. The world is a tough place, and you have to make money to live. But if you are interested, please send me your portfolio right away.