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  1. On 6/10/2017 at 0:18 AM, Obentomori said:

    Thank you for your feedback! It will be very helpful for future demos and hopefully the end result provided we get there! We plan on fleshing out the story a lot more if our goal is met so it's good to know scenes like this should be something to work more on!
    I am a bit confused though, by "M" what do you refer to? Sorry for not understanding right away ;;
    I believe the word count targets currently set are there to develop future relation/story paths but perhaps it can be worked on with fewer after all~ 

    M = mascot

    Good to know you're taking in the feedback. Do make sure not to redo things too often though. What really matters is reaching the end point. ;) 

     

    Best of luck! 

  2. The part of the story where

    Allie turned into being terrified of swimming was a bit too sudden and felt a bit forced. You might want to add a few more lines or scenes(to empahsise on it) so the transition is more seamless. 

    The demo was a bit underwhelming for me: it was too easy to tell the "M" was going to be involved 'cos all the focus was on it instead of on other people. 

    Personally, I'd prefer that you set far lower and less ambitious targets. Less is more, in terms of word count.

    Or if not, break the game into 2 parts. That way you can use the experience gained from the 1st part to improve the 2nd part. 

    In terms of visuals and audio, pretty cool. 

  3. Thanks everyone for the replies! They're all really interesting to read. :P

    Still, one has to wonder why the hell most eroge/nukige companies don't diversify and take up skills and go into other markets like creating software or selling services to companies(while either waiting for the market to recover or waiting for new chances/markets). If they're so damn worried about the stigma of sex/whatever, they could do that under another company name(as long as they can't trace you).

    I guess some of their problems boil down to Asian society's fear of failure, fear of risks and their belief "if you work really hard, you will be able to achieve sucess, no matter how impossible, in the face of overwhelming odds"(like hell it does). That's probably why they keep doing the same thing over and over again, even if the results willl doom or bankrupt them.

    I actually wonder why the hell they don't make a F2P biishoujo game which is split into chapters or segments, and which is published online.

    Also found a completely non-VN related link, related to software: https://www.disruptingjapan.com/can-this-startup-solve-japans-hidden-mental-health-problem-hikari-labs/

  4. On 5/31/2017 at 7:29 AM, Darklord Rooke said:

    Google translate is notoriously unreliable. Allow me:

    Asonn: "Your avatar looks delicious! Wouldn't even need much, lightly fried with maybe a small amount of salt and pepper."
    Zakamutt: "By Merlin's suspiciously sticky pants, not more salt! There's enough salt floating around Fuwa already. I recommend grabbing the rodent while it's still alive and just swallowing it whole."

    This accurate translation service is brought to you by Rooke. Also welcome to Fuwa :) 

    Yeah now I changed to a chicken so you can have fried chicken... yay! :D 

     

    LOL So Zaka is into eating of live animals, eh? I should stay away then. :)

    On 5/31/2017 at 9:29 AM, Fred the Barber said:

    It's internally consistent, so it must be correct. Has my editor's stamp of approval.

     

    Also, welcome to Fuwa, mushrabbit.

    Thx, hey wai... wait? Mushrabbit? 

     

    On 5/31/2017 at 1:16 PM, littleshogun said:

    Welcome to Fuwanovel, and by the way your avatar was quite good imo (Cute rabbit there). By the way, if you need new VN to play you could ask us and hope you have fun here.

    I will... once I finish what's on my list. :)

    On 5/31/2017 at 6:15 PM, HMN said:

    フワノベルへよこそ!

    どうぞよろしくお願いしますわ~

    Haha... what's with the amount of Japanese, man? :D

     

    On 6/1/2017 at 4:37 AM, Akimoto Masato said:

    welcome sir have a lovely day or yesterday because im late

     

    Haha yeah.. it's all right, man :) 

  5. I'm roastedmushroom. I've played visual novels before but stopped for about 6 to 7 years, I think. 

    Anyways I've decided to come back and try them again.

    Please, take care of me! :)

     

    Btw, what do you all think of my avatar and signature? Not too bad, right? :P 

  6. Piece of Wonder. The disc version. I think it was rushed out 'cos the developers likely ran out of money. They tried to go for an epic story but due to inexperience and time constraints, had to cut out the backstory for some of the villains. I mean, you even get some random character who runs towards Shoko and is then forgotten(guess they didn't get time to cut him out). The slice of life was okay, nothing very great and the battles were decent: they went from too easy to too hard(not enough time for proper balancing). It was about 6 to 7, I think. At least they bothered to try and wrap up most of the story with the Extra story. Some games are just shipped out incomplete and never ever finished. 

    This marks my 2nd visual novel after about 7 years hiatus. The 1st was Cartagra: it wasn't too bad and I liked quite a few of the characters. The twist at the end... hmm, took me by surprise.

     

    I thought Arishima-san was delaying things 'cos of his superiors but... never did I guess the actual reason.

     Though according to some post on some site, it had more sex scenes than a lot of nukige, which kinda put me off. I'll have to replay it to understand the True Ending. 

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