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  1. eeenseok

    Hi, Nosebleed!

    I've been reading all your postings regarding Lucy and Walkthrough.

    Such a wonderful work!

    Also, I'm so glad to know that people in Fuwa enjoyed playing Lucy.

    Thank you for recommending Lucy.

    Btw, regarding the English translation of Lucy, I have few questions.

    People say that English translation is a bit awkward/unnatural.

    I am not sure if this is because we've translated Lucy from Korean language and want to know if there's any room to improve this better.

    If you don't mind, could you give me few examples of unnatural sentences from Lucy and a guide, how to make it better?

    I'll take a look and see if I can fix it.

    Thank you.

     

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      Nosebleed

      Hey there. Yes, I thoroughly enjoyed Lucy and tried sharing it with as many people as I could, it was such an amazing visual novel.

      However, I'm probably not the best person to point out the issues in the English since I'm not a native English speaker. The grammar and spelling is all fine, so you don't have to worry about that, but maybe what bothered me were things like the 3rd person speech which is uncommon in English and maybe a few expressions here and there. Perhaps I exaggerated a bit when I said it sounded unnatural unnatural because it reads just fine to the average reader. I would suggest speaking to someone who's more knowledgable on English linguistics than I am though.

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  2. Lewycool

    YOU LIKE WORST GIRL!

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      Nosebleed

      You're waifu is shit

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  3. Nosebleed

    Nico Nico Nii~

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      Nosebleed

      The second last one was too embarrassing.

      Kaguya's was... no comments.

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  4. Nosebleed

    Struggling internally to decide who's best loli

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      Nosebleed

      Of course, you're always number 1 <3

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  5. Nosebleed

    Struggling internally to decide who's best loli

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      Nosebleed

      Nope, not quite there.

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