Totouri

Hellooooo everybody!
Welcome to my domain, my kingdom, the supreme place of ... Wait. No. Let's be serious. Welcome to my gallery, make yourself at ease, have a good time and feel free to comment the drawings! I'll try to update regularly (^ o^)/

[2015]  

Torta is my fave from SR, and I love SR, so I'm really happy 'bout the good fanart. Thankfully IceD had some actual decent criticism lol. I do think the initial composition was fine, and if you want to go dutch angle you should probably do it widescreen (the reason it became so prevalent in the first place.) Hell we've seen so many dutch angles in VN CGs maybe something more manga style is nice once in a while lol.
 
...and obviously Fal if you're picking heroines~

Got around to rereading it and drew my favorite character.
 
If you got any criticisms, please shoot.
 

Got around to rereading it and drew my favorite character.
 
If you got any criticisms, please shoot.
 

Got around to rereading it and drew my favorite character.
 
If you got any criticisms, please shoot.
 

Got around to rereading it and drew my favorite character.
 
If you got any criticisms, please shoot.
 

The legs seem a bit too short and feet are too small (aren't those boots too tiny for her feet? It propably hurts) compared to rest of the body and I could argue on overall composition, otherwise it's a really nice piece of artwork. Try looking up some similiar works on pixiv or DA to gain more ideas on how to creatively enchance art by using foreshortening and refrain from drawing overly empty shots, unless it's completely necessary to achieve a particular effect.
 
For example, I'd rather try with a close-up from a profile of her face and use the window as a background, or take a different shot from an angle (more from a corner of the cafe). Sorry if this doesn't help you much, but I might have gotten too used to a more cinematic experience and I've seen way too much visual novel art, it kind of infects my drawing habits.
 
Aside from that, this really reminds me of True Rememberance, with the only exception of your art being a lot better

Got around to rereading it and drew my favorite character.
 
If you got any criticisms, please shoot.
 

Got around to rereading it and drew my favorite character.
 
If you got any criticisms, please shoot.
 

Got around to rereading it and drew my favorite character.
 
If you got any criticisms, please shoot.
 

Hey, I'm Rinima
I've been in the VN community for a few years now, but mostly stuck to Lemmasoft.
Trying to expand how many forums I'm on.
 
Dev for Chloe. 

It was a joke. Don't worry about it.
 
Anyway, if you're worried about that, you can make a thread solely for your artworks, where you can compile each one in the OP. Then you can update that very thread with new artworks you make. It's something like a centralized thread for all your works. It would make browsing your works easier, and it'll prevent you from spamming new topics every time you make a new artwork.
 
Just my suggestion.

Got around to rereading it and drew my favorite character.
 
If you got any criticisms, please shoot.
 

Got around to rereading it and drew my favorite character.
 
If you got any criticisms, please shoot.
 

Got around to rereading it and drew my favorite character.
 
If you got any criticisms, please shoot.
 

Got around to rereading it and drew my favorite character.
 
If you got any criticisms, please shoot.
 

Got around to rereading it and drew my favorite character.
 
If you got any criticisms, please shoot.
 

Got around to rereading it and drew my favorite character.
 
If you got any criticisms, please shoot.
 

Got around to rereading it and drew my favorite character.
 
If you got any criticisms, please shoot.