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SupremeTentacle

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  1. How about "holding hands with the one you love"? or entwining fingers with instead of holding hands with
  2. 素早さ is used for stuff like the pokemon speed stat. Not sure if this'll help with your understanding of it, but it works for me. In other words, you could think of 素早さ is more of a measure of how agile you are where as 速さ is a measure of how fast you are.
  3. 1) Depends on how famous the voice actresses are. Some are paid upwards of $200 an hour, though this is for anime.
  4. I second this. The game is fairly boring if you're looking for anything other than a good fap or two.
  5. Good day, I've recently run into a strange issue, after a recent windows 10 update, where all of my fonts got messed up. This applies to both English and Japanese text, and only seems to have occurred for visual novels. Anyone got a fix for this? Here's an example of what I mean; these are some random VN I opened. Edit: As you can see, the spacing is off for the English, and the very top of the Japanese text appears to be cut off. Some of it also feels like its a bit misaligned. Edit: Some stuff is still normal, like Grisaia. I'm assuming its a font issue? But I'm not so sure what the hell the update did to my fonts.
  6. I think I've got a general idea of it now, ish. Thanks.
  7. Hi guys, I'm having a bit of a problem where I suck shit at translating H-scenes. Does anyone happen to know any well-translated H-scenes that I could use as a reference? Optimally speaking, I'd like something that either has well done H-scenes early on, or a 100% save that's easily publicly accessible. And - what do people value more in H-scene translation? Do they prefer it to be perfectly accurate, or do they want their to just have something that helps them spank their monkeys?
  8. The voice you use here doesn't really sound it it fits imo. The style seems like something you're not used to. It's good to use short sentences to emphasize things, but using too many in a row just ruins it. How does your text display? Paragraph by paragraph? Sentence by sentence? That changes things significantly. For now, I'll assume its paragraph by paragraph. Sorry in advance if this sounds rather harsh. The first sentence just sounds strange. Wouldn't it normally be "surging winds force me awake"? I'm not sure about the paralyzing part, because it doesn't appear overused specifically in the chunk that you've provided us. However, the voice you use here... just sounds strange. I personally would not have used "my beating heart" the way that you did. I would have separated the two thoughts, as you just had a sentence with identical structure immediately preceding this one. If it was intentional, then it didn't sound very well done. Why are you describing a carpet as lifeless? That doesn't even begin to make sense, unless it was alive in a previous scene. This is where it starts getting excessive. The preceding paragraph proved that your character is not panicked to the extent where they are unable to think in longer sentences, which just makes this part feel... rather poorly done. I disagree with your editor with regards to the sentence "A burning pain, like bullets of acid." While it doesn't really flow well, I don't think that it doesn't make sense. The tearing gash part is, again, repetitive. I advise you choose a different adjective. Your editor is right in both scenarios. And again, this paragraph is composed of way too many short sentences (I know its part of the previous paragraph, I just felt obligated to reiterate it as its rather annoying to read). The word above is not really necessary there. You already used surge to describe the wind just 2 paragraphs ago, use something else. Cold is fine, ice is fine, the countless shards part makes it sound like you're trying too hard. It also doesn't make logical sense, as a large block of ice should be colder. "unrelenting thunder that refuses to surrender" You seriously repeat yourself too often. I'm starting to suspect that this is a stylistic thing that you would be better without. At the very least, split it into two sentences. "Like my bones want to collapse" doesn't really describe how painful it is. It makes the character sound more frail instead. "It's not a useless effort" seems out of place. You don't feel pain in your mind. It's not your mind that will be snapped in half. That's just silly. Again, this paragraph just feels... clunky because of the style you used. It doesn't sound like the character's thoughts are in disarray, it sounds like the writer's thoughts are. It's almost like you're just slapping down the first thing that comes to mind. How does the character know the skin is cold without touching it? Besides the head. Add something about the atmosphere, and how its obviously at least cold enough to maintain the block of ice. Packs? I can't even really imagine that. Does the character have a hole in their head? This was never mentioned until now. In general, just way too chunky. Imo, the style doesn't add to the scene, but rather, takes away from it. Like your editor stated, vary the sentence length.
  9. Thanks, but the project won't even begin until I've finished TLing Astral Air... so I most likely won't be fiddling with Ren'py for quite some time. That said, don't be surprised if you randomly get a PM like a year later ;D
  10. Ugh, alright. The fact that there's practically no documentation out there is a pretty convincing argument. I had assumed there'd at least be some out there. I guess python avoidance plan A has gone out the window.
  11. By options, I meant an options menu for things such as adjusting volume, etc. Thanks for the info.
  12. So I may or may not have something planned sometime down the line, and as I was doing some research, happened to stumble upon this engine. I haven't purchased it yet, mostly because there were a few things I wanted to ask about it. And, since the support page on their website doesn't work, I thought that this might be a good place to ask those questions, as I'm fairly certain there are some fuwa members out there with previous experience using this engine. How much customization does this engine allow? Can I program features in that they don't have yet, such as a backlog using their TyranoScript? Is there any built in support for options? What about things like text color? If not, is there anything out there that would be capable of accomplishing the above? I do have some programming experience in several languages, but I wouldn't go as far to say I'm particularly skilled in any specific language.
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